(MG-OS) RISKY CONFESSION LAST PART/PG 1 (Sept 19th'14)

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Beautiful end
geet propose to maan
both confess their feelings supperb

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asmi123

@asmi123

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#472

hi Rose thanks for this wonderful OS. Though the end was predictable, I like maaneet's nok zok. The proposal by Geet was lovely. Geet of this OS was bold & Maan was introvert yet more practical. Thank god at last he came out of his shell and accepted geet's proposal.

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Wow its so beautiful part..full dreamyy :-* :-)

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Aww .. so lovely !

Finally Geet took the step and proposed him.

Nice OS

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Shalini Mogha

@shalinimaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#475

geet ko ghr chod kr aaya maan aur geet ke dad ko impress kr diya 👏 👏

maan ne to kiya nhi geet ne hi kr diya maan ko propose 😉 😉😉

geet ke dad bhi samj gye ki maan ek bht hi acha ladka h

superrrbbb Os

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Geet dad also liked maan..
He actually suggested her to confess her love...

Geet proposes maan that too sitting on her kness...

Awesome update..
Loved the ending.

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CoolHania

@CoolHania

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

superb end

i loved it

it was a dreamy OS with a dreamy confession

Beautiful yaar.

i loved the uniqueness of your proposals 😆

geet proposed maan instead n for a change n that too on her knees

it was so cute to see their friends made a trap plan for both of them

and maan was searching their friends so that he cud send geet with them 😆

Her dad changed lot after his daughter was lost to somwhere

n he became a responsible dad

guiding her

telling her that Maan was a good guy to fall for that encouraged geet n she went to propose, so sweet

Epilogue ? 😛

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pooja vejani

@pvejani

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#478

read all parts.

wonderfully written.👏👏👏

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#479

comment kar diya... par kaha yeh doondh lo 😉

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: JeevanaP
Congratulations...
Maan all fida on Geet but knows she is only his dream girl not in reality...

kosish karke 1st aasakthe hai.. 2nd oh bhi consistently oh kaise athe hai.. yeh puchna tha 😆

But Geet wasn't ignorant of Maan either but never gave a thought...

challo koi tho hai jo Maan kii secret janta hai...aur satha tha bhi hai 😉

Good Maan got a push from the friends ... Maaneet bahar from their boat...

waise which film inspired you...I know it cant be KNPH... par original kaunsi film ki hai???

was that life of pie... hero with the tiger in a boat in the middle of the ocean...😆

itni sari swimming kar liya dono ne... pure island maine yeh do akhele hai yeh kaise pata chala...

Aur kya demand kar rahi hai yeh Geet...so sweet Maan ne bed banake diya even when he was hell tired.

Maan was in full form when he was with her... no restrictions no hesitation...😉

confusion btw love n like...

Parents .. finally found out where these to be love birds 😆

But Geet changed after their separation ... poor her... Maan didn't believe her words...

Party tho banti hai...😆 aur plan bhi... aur bure pass Maaneet...aur out of control Geet...

Maan choose to face it... Poor Geet shocked at it ...n also embarrassed 😳

Finally Geet took the extreme step of confessing... that too a risky one...

but Maan gave the surprise accepting in more spl way

thank you for the lovely n cute story...

I am waiting for another OS...

Blue lagon-the awakening ... not the full movie but a part maybe of 10 or so mints.. watched that movie and thought to write on something like that ...rest is pure my work 😆

jaise 1st aate hain wese he 2nd aate hain...

like i was on 5th rank for 3 years in my school life 😛

so who was the tiger in this os,acc to you ??? 😉

other os .. wo tou eid ke pehle start ki thi... pata nahi page kahan rakha hai 😕