'Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli' MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147

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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

nice concept
waiting to read more

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maanshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

lovely 👏story

read both parts
it's very nice
love it😃

thanks for PM
plz add me on ur PM list

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zainabzeeq

@zainabzeeq

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Heyyy!! i just read both Parts and its really awesome..

Geet is dreading about SR and praying to Babji,ALLAH,Jesus to save her😛 her Anxiety is Justified coz she got married without her constant and tht too a with a person who's lil older then her😕 love the way MAAN assured her tht all her demands will be fulfilled and if she want she can ask for divorce (ME Wondering *ye to Namumkin hai*)😆 after hearing him Geet felt relieved and Thanked her Babaji.

So MAAN fell in Love with Geet the day he saw her for the First time.'Love At First Sight' hmmm😳 it was Beautiful Geet Dancing in Rain and Maan lost in her Hayeee 😳 i just Love it when he Said "Maan tu kya soch raha hai wo student hai shayad..par maan tu budda to nai na" 😆 and then He decided to wait till she finish her college,but i think there must be some funda..and then because of the circumstances he decide to marry her jaldi jaldi😕

Geet's Sasu Maa.. opps sorry 'AMMA' is very sweet!! love their Bonding

i love it When MAAN Said (for u i can give my life and can also take anybody's life)

Geet didn't talk to MAAN not even for a sec and Maan is feeling impatient on the very first day!! And he Decided that he will make her talk to him and will make Permanent place in her Heart and Mind ..and the Idea he got is Super Cool😃!!! MAAN is action to Patao Geet!! Chalo chalo Mission Geet start!!

Eagerly waiting for the Next Update Do PM me😊

Uma u said it's ur first attempt but it doesn't seems like,because both the parts are Awesomely Written i really loved it. Keep up the Good Work!👏

Now i think m Comment is longer then Your Update (Heheheheeh)😆

Edited by zainabzeeq - 11 years ago

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Annu8193

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

awesome ff

do update soon

nd pls pm me...😉👏

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

lovely update uma
totally loved it
geet thinking about how her mother used to get coffee for as soon as she woke up she keep those thoughts aside and got ready in beautiful saree...
she was bumped into maan's mother and asked sorry ..
sangeeta khurana is so sweet and she knows her son's love for geet...
SK told geet to start going to college and she need not wear those marriage symbols ..geet agreed happily and she wants to go to college by bus so she convinced SK by marring makkan...
sangeeta informed maan about geet wish to go to college by bus he relcutantly agreed for it
here maan brought gift for geet but decided to give to her only when she will accept him wholeheartedly and made a plan to get colse to geet now he gonna be her lecturer...
nice precap..college college interesting haan
eagerly waiting to see geet reaction to see her hubby as her new lecturer..
uma next update twaraga cheyyu...please pretty please

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maaneeta17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Hey dear nice ff... Sry i m not able to like the post..frm my side its 100likes ...
update. Soon next part . ...n pm me

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Hey it's awesome story
I'm loving it
Thank u sooo much for pming me :-*
Do pm me next :)

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

nice updates
really cute story
liking this maaneet
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

wow lovely very interesting track..i love it..lovely cs..lovely pro..geet ki babaji save her..but geet my maan wont play ringa ringa roses but he will play some thing else with u ..he he

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