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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Ok its hrithik
update pls waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Thank you!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: divydecember

Ok its hrithik
update pls waiting


Iska update
U have to wait. ...
Coz today hum Dadi ki wish pe concentrate karenge!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
awesome concept...loved the updates...plz pm me...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #4

Misthi please listen to me ...You all ways put up a fight with me... I said pouting...


In return all I got was a glare... N she walked away pulling her hair to the front looking extremely sexy in her red salwar kameez ...


Curse this Arjun for his wrong time of entry y did he have to come now?? Now again I have to stay away from my Misthi all thanks to this Stupid Arjun! It all started with that Deal wonder how did the information leak hmm... may be Misthi was right ... it defiantly must be one of my Guards...


First things first Misthi !


I slowly tiptoed in to the room only to find her head buried in to the wardrobe searching for something... hmm... so the temperature is too high ...


Geet pack my stuff I will be leaving in the evening ... I tried to sound all serious...


But she didn't turn...


Geet!


Misthi! Y are you crying?? Please don't cry na... I don't like watching you cry... please stop it or else I'll start crying ... I said with tears almost ready to drop from my eyes...


See didn't I ask you to kill him! (Sob) But no you said you had some other plans... It's not even a week since you came back from that stupid deal n now u are leaving again... She said sitting on the bed


Geet listen to me... I said pulling her to my arms


Hmmm...


Now tell me clearly y r u crying?


Y didn't you kill him??

See because of that idiot u have to leave me again...


Oh that but look at the bright side of it this means I will me underground I said winking at her ... looking at her face I knew she didn't get what I was hinting at...


Hmmm... so it would fun this time I thought grinning at myself... Poor Misthi didn't get what her husband is up to...


After all the coaxing followed by passionate love making Maan disappeared into the night n I shifted to my tiny apartment with necessary items ... the house was very small compared to our mansion but it held enough memories of our togetherness for us to survive this period of separation... Come to think of it was during this period he went underground or say invisible for the world I realized how strong my feelings for him were ...


Maan what are you doing in my home??? N ask this good for nothing guards to kindly step out of my house... I said getting all hyper...


He simply gave them a look n they walked out of the house... Babaji what attitude I thought inwardly fanning myself... ignoring him I walked towards my kitchen to at least have a cup of coffee ... as I was about to take a sip he pulled it from my hands n drank it as f it was some water... my eyes widened at his act n his face was a sight to watch... as I handed him cool water n he drank it in one go... n I burst out laughing...


You look beautiful when u laugh! He said not again I thought rolling my eyes at him ..


Y are you here???


I want you to be my Girlfriend!


What??


Hmmm u heard it the first time I guess... he said scratching his head ... Babaji y do you have to make him so adorable ... I thought chucking...


N y so?? I asked him raising my eyebrows in a teasing manner...i some how guessed he would have a weirdest reason...

I still remember his answer ... I can't believe such a big underworld Don would be a Bollywood freak...


Because Amitabh had! He said as a matter of fact...


Who Amitabh???


Bachan in Don! You didn't watch Don! He asked me as if I was some alien...


That's it I was laughing again... While he sat there pouting n made a grumpy face...


Maan come sit here... I pointed him the chair opposite to me...


Look Maan you come n ask me when you have a convincing reason of y you want me as your Girlfriend or for that matter in your life...

The day I'm convinced I will not have to answer you will know it yourself...


He was so confused with what I said ... N the things that followed Babaji I don't know y u choose him out of all for me ...


I thought sighing... n got ready for college as I have few important lectures which I don't want to miss...


Today the whole college was suddenly feeling strange as all the students were discussing about some newly appointed coach wonder what's so special about this coach that suddenly seems to have every ones attention... I thought walking towards the library to collect few books ... only to college with something or I rather say someone's hard body which for some reason felt familiar...


Oh! I m sorry... I didn't see you coming..


Its ok miss I know I'm too hot to resist ...


My eyes widened at I defiantly know who could use such cheeky dialogues ... n I immediately lowered my hand which was raised to hit him...


He winked at me with a lopsided smile ...


I'm the new basket ball coach... Armaan Khurana... he said extending his hand towards me... I know by now most of the eyes would be at me y now my darling husband was looking so dashing in his messy hairstyle n that French beard on top of it all sweaty as he had just returned from the Ground..


I heard him clear his throat


Oh! Sorry again sir ... I'm Geet khurana I whispered under my breath only for him to hear to let him know any stupid disguise can't hide his identity from me... With a slight blush creeping on my cheeks under his gaze.. I slowly pulled my hand out of his grip n walked off into the library... to calm my racing heart n to hide all my excitement in the books...

To Be Continued...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
awesome update
loved it!!!!!
maan is underground in form of basket ball coach in geet's college!!!!
maan is so cute and adorable in this!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

awesome update

loved it!!!!!
maan is underground in form of basket ball coach in geet's college!!!!
maan is so cute and adorable in this!!!!!

Yaar don't say cute he's Don after all😉
Thanks for liking!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Thank you for liking aparna! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Hmm hmm
maan the don and having tears pouting adorable cute boy😉
Geet the teacher
maan the coach
update continuouly pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
WOW!! awesome update dear...loved it a lot...😊

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