MG FF ~ABHI NAHIN AANA ~ #10 EPILOGUE Pg-37 THE END!

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Nakshatra N

@nakshatranainar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

vey very nice update...

Just Loved It...

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Wonderful amazing update. Feel like the ff got over so early. Brilliant writing. Epilogue to mileage na

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chingaming

@chingaming

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Superbbb FF and fantastic update :D

Xoxo

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

sorry for second comment
whenever i comment in rush I always screw up😆😆😆

now coming to update aashu I just felt it little rush😕😕
you have closed all the loops you have started but still geet's mother, the doll and why she was kind of chasing in her dream is still hanging in mind.

or is that you were hinting when geet had baby girl and her happiness related to it😕😕
but still
sorry aashu but this is what i feel and want to clearify. you know there are only few stories which I really read with full concentration and then even small things bother😆😆😆

i know its ff and should not take it too hard😉😉😆😆 but kya karoo some writers write sooo well 👏👏that its hard to ignore😉😉

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

LAST PART 😭 its ending so early...Its seems only yesterday you started and made us readers curious about the story.. one part after the other made us breathless... gave us some serious heart attacks from the twists... We smiled, We cried, we got angry, We hated, We loved... Felt almost every emotion...

There confrontation was just AWESOME... full of emotions... I just loved it...

First i used to think while reading that Maan loves Geet insanely...but now i am sure that that both of them love each other insanely... they are crazy for each other... The way Geet just left everything just to stay with him... actually can\'t imagine a girl so courageous, ambitious to leave everything... but as they say.. Love makes u do things that u can't even imagine... and this was this happened with Geet...

Geet just handed over everything to Ana... May be she was right she was not the one...

oh and the proposal... just wow...

and the song Toxic... just loved it...Made me remeber their first meeting.

Awww they are blessed with a baby girl... Adorable!!

I am just in love with this passionate lovestory...

Do i have to say after every update it was an AWESOME update... actually wrong every part of this FF was AWESOME...

One confusion... Nisha used to say to her parkati... can u explain the meaning... and why she used to say so..?

Waiting for the epilogue... plzzz make it long.

PS I will read it again in one flow...

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

What a transformation. Geet,the top most business woman to Geet,home maker.

Lovely part.

But it ended :(

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Thanks for t beautiful story
With back to back updates
Simply loved t journey

the part was beautifully written 👏

To be frank this one was lot better written & narrated expressed emotions deeply compared to all ur other works

T flow was just brilliant ending was apt
Feel so contended just like geet is with her maan

Oh t last line was so touchy

Loved it

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Ambibamby

@Ambibamby

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Amazing update and a wonderful journey! Loved the story

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vamsi priya

@vamsi.priya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

such an awesome part ashu.. the geet handa went on knees to propse her love ... she changed herself for her love...u did a fab job ashu.. ur storys always get me connected like never before