MG FF THE DIVINE FLOWER : thread 3 : PART 51 : pg 115 20th Nov2016 - Page 26

Originally posted by: angeldream14

all d chpt were fantastic

they love each other a lot but sometime love is not enough

he may be head over hell for her but when there is no trust in a relation your love won't survive the test of time

love is never judgmental or egoistic its caring n nurturing

he lost the right to love her whn he blamed her

true love doesn't need great gestures n promises its abt simple moments n gestures that turn into memories that strengthen the relation further.

For any relation to survive it takes the effort of two, but he was always to demanding n he give her back but for his own selfishness. his love was never strong as he never trusted he like she did

He is repenting but sometime the hurt is to deep to let anyone in again as you have not gather yourself from that shattered state yet

Geet loves him but will always but somewhere she feels betrayed n that hurt will be always with her

she can forgive him but can she forget

He needs to make her believe that he will not abandon her this time like last time due to his anger n it will be difficult to make him believe when she had lost all the faith she once had

or she is to hurt to let her faith resurface.

wht wil Maan do to Dev whn the truth will be out. for his selfish reason he let his brother suffer who raised him like a father n also let his family burn to ashes.

i can let go NT as she was to into herself but never understand someone like Dev how can he let everyone suffer n live without guilt

his repentance wont change the suffering he caused others

i hope they dn't hurt Ami, r they involved in her kidnapping

Arjun is only one who stood by her he is more than a friend and the only person Geet could say who believed her without word thats called love where u don't need to prove the person trusts ur silence to n Maan lacks that.

hope Maan will be able to stop before she leaves him this time by her own will

n i dont think a mother can part from her daughter for any reason at all more than blood a relation that ur heart had long accepted hold importance.

this song describes Maan n Geet well

Aaa...aa
Aaa...aa...
Jaane kyun..har ek raah mein yeh
Nazarein meri..dhoondti hai tujhe
Jaane kyun..har ek raah mein yeh
Nazarein meri..dhoondti hai tujhe

Jo kuch bhi tha kabhi woh..
Hai aaj bhi yahan
Hum bhi khade hai yahin par
Bus ek tu hi hai kahan

Soniya..dil todna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniya..

Soniya..dil todna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniya..

Sar pe milon dhoop hai
Chhav na hai kahin raah mein
Sar par milon dhoop hai
Chhav na hai kahin raah mein
Tapti ret pe phirte hai
Hum toh teri hi chaah mein

Kyun mere tute khwaab ko
Khojon ne sahil pe laa diya
Ab toh khuda se hai dua
Mere pyaar ka karde haq adaa

Soniya..dil todna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniya...

Ek kaanch ki haan gudiyaa thi
Pathhar ke dil se pyaar tha
Tuti woh iss tarah se ke
Haathon mein naa ikhtayar tha
Dil wahan..dhoondta hai
Jahan pe humne vaade liye
Sajde jahan pe the kiye
Main tanha hoon aaj bhi wahan

Soniya..dil todna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniya..

Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniya..

Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniya...

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PART 46

As they lied facing away from each other, Geet could not help but think, "ye kya ho gaya..Me Maan ko sab sach kehne ja rhi thi aur..me unhe saari baat seedhe to nhi bata paungi. Its better I write a letter and then leave. Kal Maan ko bina bitaye I have to leave a letter here and then get away from them. He should know the truth so that he could always support Ami and I'm sure Maan will go to any extend when he would know that Ami is actually related to him." She turned back and saw that he was fast asleep.

"Teri galiyan..galiyan teri galiyan..."

Geet woke up reluctantly hearing her new ringtone. She didn't want to open her eyes as the warmth she was engulfed in was so soothing. The pillow has really warmed up. Though a bit hard than her usual extrasoft ones, this one had a rhythmic beat up and down like a heartbeat. Wait a minute!! She opened her eyes and saw that her head was completely resting on Maan's chest. Her hands and legs entangled around his and Maan's hand securedly wrapped around her waist.

Geet felt her blood boil. She had told him to keep the distance. She immediately distanced herself away from him careful that he wont wake up. It was then she noticed that the cushions were way behind her. Maan had not moved an inch and on the other hand she crossed all the seven oceans to be in his arms. Its like he is some magnet and she couldn't keep herself away from him whenever he is around.

Geet (self-thought) : so much for the Geet border!!

And on top of it her stupid was still ringing. It was only five in the morning. Geet crawled towards the bedpost and found her mobile. It was Pinky. Geet immediately attended the call.

Geet : kya hua Pinky?

Pinky : kya hua? Pata he kab se try kr rhi hu me tumhare number pe. Tumhe bag mila? Aur tum wapas kyu nhi ayi? I was soo worried..phir me so gyi..

Geet : ok wait wait...let me talk.

And then she told her how she was trapped with Maan.

Pinky: Oye Geet, kal hi mujhe bata deti..We have a spare key with the guards!!

Geet : kya!!!

Maan almost jumped out of the bed hearing her "kya". He looked at her rubbing his eyes and found that she was in full-on action mode. Geet then put him into to work. Pinky informed the guards and they came with the keys and opened the doors. Luckily the night guard had changed the duties at 4. So they were spared from facing him again. Geet got Pinky's suitcase and they were out of the apartment.

Geet : ap mujhe next signal pe drop kar do. Me taxi leke chali jaungi.

Maan : Geet, tumhe is night dress me main kahi nhi drop kr rha except the hotel. Me waha se ghar chala jaunga.

Geet looked at Maan with an unsaid emotion. Luckily his eyes were on the road. She stood there for a minute as he left after dropping her in the hotel lobby.

From then on, there were no errors. It was a beautiful wedding. Geet wondered how simple some love stories could be. Pinky and Adi were two simple and honest people. They would get a life tonight with no complications and Geet was really very happy for them. It was at times like this she wondered what went wrong between her and Maan? They too were in love, they remained patient till it was the right time and the time came, everything fell apart. Trusts were broken, lies told, anger and eventually destruction of their beautiful dream. A storm that would never end haunted them throughout their life. She had tried moving away from him but that was before. He threw her out and she still carried him in her mind. But now things were different, tonight when she left it was her choice after fulfilling all her duties as a loyal daughter to dadima, friend to Mira and lover to Maan. But wasn't she a mother now? How would Ami react when she realises she is gone from her life! Wont it be cruel to her? But sometimes there were pains that had to be endured. Didn't Geet herself leave her own family and went with dadima? Thinking about Ami made her weak. She was the only ray of hope in her life when there was darkness all around her. And now when she would leave today, there would be nothing left. She wont have anything to look forward to or anyone to love. It was all empty and hollow. But this was never about herself. It was all for Ami. She needed to be with her family, a family that her mother really wanted to give her not a lonely life with her.

Geet turned back once before leaving quietly as the ceremonies came to an end. Her beautiful princess Ami was laughing happily in her dad's arms and the way Maan looked at his daughter calmed her inner soul.

She left the hall and handed over an envelop to the guard. In a few hours all the rituals would be over and Pinky would leave with Adi. Only then they would look for her and she would be flying away to London. He wont know because she had faked her name once again. This time not even Arjun would know about her disappearance. Every single door would be shut and he would never again find her. She would always visit them and watch Ami grow only from a distance. As time would pass, Ami would forget her and even Maan and he would bring a mother for Ami. Tears escaped her eyes unknowingly as the thought crossed her mind. The cab driver informed her that they had reached the airport. She placed her luggage in a trolley and walked towards the entrance point. There were procedures and security checks to be taken care of and even without the time zone difference it was going to be a long night for Geet.

After they had the buffet dinner, Ami was being particularly moody and demanding. She wanted her mumma and nothing else. Not even her favorite chocolates could calm her. Maan tried a lot to pacify her but she wont budge. Defeated, he left Ami with Annie and Vicky and went to look for Geet. He assumed she would be with Pinky as she was not seen anywhere else. Maan went to congratulate Adi and discussed some work with him.

Adi : Sir wo Mehtas ke proposal ka draft banaya he engineering team ne, if you could just have a look at it.

Maan : Don't tell me you are carrying building plan and proof copy in your sherwani.

Adi : he he he..no sir reception me diya he. They will deliver it you on the gate.

Maan : You dn worry about all this for a few days. Enjoy

Adi : ofcourse sir. Ab to shaadi hui he change hona to padega..

Maan : office me mujhe koi changes nhi chahiye Adi!

Adi : yes sir..bilkul nhi..

Maan : where is Pinky?

Adi : shaadi ke din bhi she is chit-chatting with her friends..

Maan smiled, "waise Geet bhi he uske saath?"

Adi : nhi sir..Geet ko maine jai mala ke time dekha tha. She came and wished us in a hurry. Phir pata nhi gayab hi ho gyi..

Maan : umm..its ok. Yehi kahi hogi I will find her. You don't worry.

Maan was getting restless. He had been looking for her for last half an hour and there was no sign of her. Her mobile was switched off. The peace and joy that he felt the whole day was beginning to diminish. Instead a darkness was trying to seep in. He tried hard not to let it in but it was finding a way clouding his thoughts. Pinky was exchanging good byes with all the realtives who were crying as if they had been living with her all these years. Wasn't the girl born and brought up in US, thought Maan. And the only real friend who needed to be there to actually wish her well was nowhere to be seen. Pinky hugged her dad lovingly and left with Adi. Mr. Manchanda a sad lonely man stood there looking at his daughter's direction even after the car faded from his sight. Perhaps this was not the time to enquire about Geet to him. So Maan decided to look for her at the Manchandas residence himself. As they stepped out it was an unusal storm brewing up in the sky. Dust flowing everywhere in the busy city. It was the winter rain which was going to accelerate the January winter. The guard came running to Maan and handed him an envelope. He said something but Maan was not at all concentrating. This wasn't the time he would pay any attention to Adi's blue-print envelope. Everything in the world can wait for his Geet. He simply chucked it in the pocket of his sherwani and left hurriedly to get his car.

Annie and Vicky were having a hard time waiting for Maan outside the apartment with Ami. Ami was sulking unusually to see her mumma. All these days she was staying happily with her dad but it was because she was sure her mumma would join them after the wedding. But not finding her today scared the kid. Suddenly everyone else seemed like strangers to her. Vicky looked at Annie silently communicating with his eyes about the upcoming storm in their lives.

Maan was searching madly all around Pinky's place. Of course he knew her room but it was empty now. There were no signs of her bags, her cosmetics were no longer neatly arranged near the mirror, her toiletries were not in the steel holder of the wash room. Maan couldn't just take in the fact that she had left though he almost realized by this time. She had left quietly amidst all the crowd of marriage. He knew that she didn't want to be with him but how could she leave Ami? What would he say to her?

He could hear her crying for her mumma even a few feet away.

Annie looked at Maan confirming her fears from the grave expression on his face.

Maan : She has left!!

Ami turned towards Maan : Papa mumma kaha he??

Maan : beta, ap mat rona.. mumma ko kuch kaam a gaya isliye wo gayi he..

Ami : nhi mumma mujhse gussa he isliye gayi..

Annie : yeh kisne kaha apse? Meri princess se kaun gussa ho skta he?

Ami : mumma lonely lonely ho gayi thin a mere bina isliye chali gayi...mujhe mumma paas jaana he!!

And she started crying again.

Maan sighed defeatedly. Why was fate so cruel to him?

Maan : Vicky, pehle hum inhe ghar drop krte he and then we will look for her.

Vicky nodded and took the car key from Maan. He definitely couldn't drive in this state. Maan took Ami in his arms. She sat on his lap and rested her head on his chest. He could feel her heart beat and it comforted him amidst all the chaos. The storms were now gaining strength and thunder has started. The dust was floating in the air as if the nature was doing the thaandav at his face whilst he stood helpless.

They reached home. Annie got off from the car. Ami was sleeping in Maan's arms. He lifted her gently and took her inside the mansion. Dadi became worried looking at the state of all of them. Annie took her away to give the explanations. Vicky already left to look at the airport

Maan reached his bedroom and was about to make Ami lie on the bed. The kid opened her eyes and looked at him her eyes full of fear.

Ami : ap bhi mujhe chhodke ja rhe ho??

Maan took her in his arms again and cradled her, "nhi mera bacha..papa apko kabhi akele nhi chhodenge"

Ami : mumma bhi yehi kehti thi. Ap bhi chale gaye to Ami ke paas koi nhi!!

Maan : sab apke paas he Mia..mumma bhi papa bhi..Bas mumma ko kuch kaam a gaya hoga important. Isliye chali gayi. You don't worry. Papa yu gaye aur unhe lekar ayenge..

Ami : Papa me bhi chalu apke saath?? Pleasssee...

He couldn't refuse that request. And somewhere he knew that if he didn't find Geet tonight he needed Mia with him to prevent him from breaking down.

He got up with Ami when dadima came to his room.

Dadi : Leave Ami with me. I will take care of her tonight.

Maan : No dadi, she is scared. She needs me..(his voice broke).. I need her!! Please

Dadi looked at him with sympathy. This morning he looked so content and now once again he was shattering in front of her eyes. She didn't stop him. But as he left, the envelope fell from his pocket.

Dadi : Maan ye koi letter gira apke pocket se..

Maan turned and saw dadima picking it up from the floor.

Maan : that's not important..I mean office ke kuch ppr he. Adi ne bheja he. Vl look at it later.

He left before dadima could say something.

Savitri Devi stared at the envelope. She kept tossing and turning it in her hand. Her intuition told her that this was not a letter from the office. The cover itself was a personal one. Maan was surely in a dizzy state to have missed that. This brown cover is a marriage "shagun" type cover with intricate gold threadwork at the border. She decided to confirm it. What if it was a wish note for Adi which got exchanged by accident? She opened the envelope and felt a knot in her heart as she realized Geet's handwriting. It was addressed to Maan. She debated whether to read it or not. Maan had already left and what if the letter contained any clue about Geet's whereabouts. She had no other choice but to read it.

Dear Maan,

By the time you are reading this I would have left India forever. I am not writing a good-bye note to you Maan. I know that in all these years you are suffering without any fault of yours. But when we were tested you left me broken. I can't mend myself once more. I have to leave before I break anymore. Anyways, this letter is not for me. Its for Ami. Amiya Khurana!! The rightful heir of Khurana family. Promise that you will guard her with your life Maan. Don't get angry and take steps which you will regret later. Be calm and read this patiently. I want you to know about Amiya and her biological parents.

And then she wrote the whole story of how she came to know about Mira and how she hid the whole truth from Maan. Each and every detail was written in the letter.

And in the end she concluded.

It doesn't matter who gave birth to her. She doesn't need a dad who ran away from her fearing responsibility. She doesn't need the man who supported the woman who sends goons to kill her. She needs you Maan, you who gave her new life without thinking about yourself. Be with her always Maan.

Geet

Savitri Devi sank on the bed-rest as she completed the whole letter. Her old wrinkly hands were shaking. Her vision was blurred as fresh tears clouded her eyes. She got up and walked mechanically to her room. She opened her locker and secured the letter inside it. She walked up to the coffee table where her phone was kept and was about to pick the mobile when her body gave up. Her head spun and spun round. There was a severe pain and everything around her was dark and she fell down.

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PRECAP : Maan and Ami search for Geet!! Will they find her?? 😕

The update might be a little short but it was a cliff and I was tempted to stop 😆 😆

Will update the next part sooon... ie, next week 😳