MY RUTHLESS SAVIOUR #3 Updated PART 14 on 19-6-2014/Pg - 104

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice part ...

so the lawyer is a positive one ...

Hmm maan came to know its his mishty ...

no wonder her father treats her like that ...

precap cute ...

waiting for more

thnx for pm sweets

cont soon

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Madhuri

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part 13 - maan made aditya to spell all the truth of geet and he came to know that geet is his mishty...so samar was not her father ...has he killed geet's parents for their money...

loved geet & servant palying with cuty and maan enjoying her chasing behind it...

interesting precap...hope maan will not hit little cuty

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Sundari

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heyy richa kaha ho..
miss u n ur updates 😉

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waiting jaanu...

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PART - 14

SORE become his destiny. First he was tormenting to find out his childhood's sweetest memory and now when he have her,he tormented with the pain she going through in past 18 years. Her bruised body burned him in hell. Though she was now recover but the feel of that pain tormented him dreadfully. How dare Sumer touch Mishti,his Mishti. His cute little Angel for whom he can go to any extend even in his tender age.

A weak smile crept on his face.

FLASHBACK:-
Reason was his old sweet memory of his mishti. When he beat two kids for her. Rahul and Ansh. They were teasing her pulling her hairs and pinching her. Geet start crying not able to protect herself. She was so small and feeble in front of both. Maan who was in the kitchen as his chhoti maa summoned him, hear her sobbing and ran to protect her. He saw both torturing her which made his blood boil. Without a think he just threw a stone and blow Ansh's head. Then he ran to her and covered her. Blood start oozing from Ansh's head. Seeing his brother's injury Rahul react and try to attack Maan,but he was ready for him too. Maan kicked him hard and he falls away. Both scared and ran away from there to show their injuries to Sumer given by Maan. He turned around and wiped off her tears.

'stop crying Mishti. Main hu na. See maine dono ko haga diya ab wo meri doll ko pareshan nahi karenge.' he assured her that she is safe now but She is still crying so to make her smile again Maan tickle her and she burst in laugh.

'bittoo,mishti aa jao dono jaldi.' a sweet voice summoned both.

'bittoo mumma bula rai hai.' she said in her sweet melodious voice.

Maan hold her tiny hand and walked inside. Both went to kitchen area where her mother Avantika cooking omlet for her. She serve Maan first but he leave his plate and observe her how she is preparing omlet for her.

'chhoti maa Mishti meri plate me se kha legi.' he offered.

'nai bittoo wo usko mat khilana. Wo spicy hai uske liye wo nahi kha payegi.' she alert him.

Maan get curious how she preparing omlet for his mishti. He roamed around her and noticed all thing she used.

'bittoo pehle kha le beta.' she reminds him to finish his breakfast first.

'nahi chhoti maa mujhe b dekhna aap mishti k liye kaise bna rae ho.' he denied simply.eager to know the taste of her.

'kyu agli baar se aap bnaoge Mishti k liye breakfast?' she asked with a smile.

'ha main bnaunga.' he agreed and admitt.

'ok baba bna lena par abi nahi. Pehle bada hoja firr.' she laughed and caressed his hairs lovingly. He too agreed and Mishti clapped happily that her only friend is going to cook for her. All are laughing and both roaming around Avantika,enjoying the moment...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

He was smiling in tears,remembring his beautiful memories when everything is just so perfect without any problem. Sun dawn and his tender rays start coming through window. He wasnt slept for a second. 'Chhoti maa see i am grown up. Now i am able to cook for Mishti.' suddenly his forbbiden wish come out from his mouth. He glance at his wrist watch. Its 5:30 am. Maan moved towards his private gym first. After drenching himself in his own sweat he moved to fresh n up.

Maan moved to his kitchen for the first time. His servants too astonished seeing him in kitchen.

'sir kuchh chahiye apko?main apki coffee bas la hi raha tha.' Sahil asked his fearly. He though Man grew angry on him for being late.

'all of you out.' Maan scanned and commands his all servants.

All scared,now what wrong they had done. All ask for mercy and apolozised. But Maan is maan. His single glare is enough to threat them to death. All paniced and ran away from there. Maan scann whole kitchen to collect the thing he required. It took time as he wont know which thing is placed where.

Maan dont give up and collect all necessary item first. He remind himself and start preparing omlet for her.

Onions gave him a tuff deal but he bear everything and finally omlet is ready for Geet. He covered it properly and moved towards her room. He pepped first whether she is awaked or not. Geet was not in her bed. She was in washroom. Maan reliefed and went inside. Cuty is playing on her bed. Seeing Maan he start wiggle his small tail and bark in his meak voice. Maan glared him too but Cuty wont afraid of him.

Maan cursed him in his mouth. 'Chup Kutta kahi ka. Ye to shor macha macha k Mishti ko alert kar dega. Omlet yahi rakh deta hu.' Maan is grewing angry on Cuty's noise so he start seeking for a safe place where he placed the plate,far away from Cuty's reach. He scann and put the plate on center table.

Maan placed and step out of the room. Now he is waiting for her to come out of the washroom and eat it. But the moment she come out he recieve call from his lawyer. Reluctantly he pick up the call and moved from there.

Geet come out and kissed Cuty as she start jumping on the bed i excitement. She took him in her arms and caressed lovingly. 'kya hua kyu shor macha ra hai mera baby?'

'wuff,' Cuty make noises and licked her face.

'oh ho bhooki lagi meri Cuty ko? Vinod b na bhuddhu hai maine kabse kaha usko apke liye eggs lane ko. Chalo hum kitchen me jake dekhte hai.' She is talking with him and in respond he wiggle his tail while liking and barking in between. Suddnly she saw a plate on table. She went near and found omlet in it. 'baby apka khana to aa gaya. Par Vinod se maine egg boil karne ko bola tha usne omlet kyu bana diya. Koi baat nai yahi sahi.' Geet took the plate and sattler herself with Cuty on her bed. He was so hungry and become restless with the smell of omlet. Geet knows there is a time in breakfast. As cook only start preparing breakfast as per Maan's timings so this was definately for her Cuty. Without thinking much she feed whole omlet to Cuty in a small cores. He was very happy and eat whole omeltt quickly.

When Maan freed from his call he again moved towards her room to see her reaction. But the view make his all hopes shattred and turn him angry. Cuty realishing his hard work. Maan bumped inside angrily. Geet saw him and scared seeing his glaring eyes.

'what are you doing?' his tone is recented.

'Cuty ko khana khila rahi hu. Aap itna gusse me kyu hai?' She was sacred from his anger which was on a peak this moment.

'gusse me kyu hu? Ye tum puchh rai ho? Kya soch k ye omlett tumne is kutte ko khila diya?' Maan doesnt want to shout on her but he just cant able to bear that one mere puppy gulp his effort which he do for his Mishti only. For the first ever he cooked something though for his mishti only. But his naive Mishti feed that to her dog.

Geet trembled seeing him angry. 'ye Vinod ne isi k liye banaya tha. Waise maine to use eggs boil karne ko kaha tha par usne omlett bana diya...' She revealed everything but in a meak tone. Her eyes were filled with fear which pierecd Maan's soul more.

Now he cursed himself for threatning her again,but Maan is helpless. Behaving like with the whole world this ruthless behaviour become his habbit. Unknowingly he just react like this with everyone. But she not comes in everyone. She is Mishti,his Mishti then how come he scold her. Maan inhaled sharp and lowered down is tone. He went near her make her hard to breath. He held her with shoulders softly. 'Geet wo Omlett tumhare liye tha,iske liye nahi.' he revealed.

She glanced in his eyes. Confusion was there in her own eyes. 'apko kaise pata? Abi to breafast a time bhi nahi hua.?' she asked innocently.

'kyunki wo maine banaya tha sply tumhare liye.' drowned in emotions he just revealed the truth to her. Then only he realized he should not tell this to her. After all he is only her saviour. A ruthless saviour nothing else.

Geet's innocent eyes raised on him having lot of question there. Maan knows this and dont want to face this. Not now sply. Next she hear the bumping sound of her door. Maan left her room in pace moment. Before she raise any other question he left her in amusement. She was puzzled more. She know Maan cares for her. Even after his rude behaviour she have a trust on him more then any one else. But he cooked for her why,when there are lot of servants in the mansion to do this job. Something is bubbling inside her. She cant able to believe that he can do anything like this for her. But againg same question why? Why he cares for her? Why he saveing her from her own family. So many why? And answer is unavailable.

Where His one simple effort raise so many questions inside her,the same time gave immense happiness also. After her mother's death this was the first time someone do something spl for her. Her heart is pounding badly and she cant able to handle this happiness as she was not use to of it. She wants to share it with someone and also wants to calm her queries. There is only one with whom she can share anything. She called Sasha and told her everything. She too laughed first on her innocense.

'tum has rahi ho?' Geet asked cutly.

'to or kya karu. Sabse pehle to ye hi ajooba hai jo insaan pani ka glass lene k liye b kitchen me nahi jata us,Mk ne cook kiya or uske upar tumne unki sari mehnat Cuty ko khila di.'

Now i know why he dont like Cuty.' she teasing her but being a naive she wont get anything.

'kya inko mera Cuty pasand nahi hai?' she felt dishearted.

'ofcourse kaise hoga. Ab wo tumhara sara attention jo le leta hai or omlett bhi.' Sasha indirectlly gave her indications but all in vain.

'to unhe kya farak padta hai?' She was in confusion.

'ab iska jwab to tume hi dhoodhna padega sweety. Ab ek kaam karo MK ko manao first of all jo tumne ye blunder kia hai uske liye.' Sasha advised her to monify him but wont tell how.

Geet was now in more confusion. Instead of getting ans she puzzled her more. 'manao or main par kaise. Wo to har baat pe gussa ho jate hai. Pata chala main mnane gai or wo or gussa ho gaye to. Cuty main kya karu?' end of the day she only had him. Cuty liked her and wiggle his tail make her tickle with his soft tongue.

Maan is waiting for her on breakfast table. She cooked breakfast for him to apolozise but not having a courage to told him. Maan was as usual silent. She is waiting for him to say something but he ate silently. Though he found the taste of food is different from usual but he wont react. After breakfast he went to his studies. Geet prepared coffee and put a sorry note with that. She silently placed a coffee on his table. Both glance each other but not uttred a word. He saw the note but dont react this time too. Geet's all hopes shattred. She wants to ask fo apolozy but everytime she come across him her voice died in her throat. She scared what if he scold her again.

Maan left for the office and left her pouting only. Whole day she is thinking of him only. Late night when he came found her waiting for him. Maan silently moved to his studies. Geet felt bad as he is ignoring her. She went behind him and here Maan was in his own turmoil. He has to take her signature on some papers but he was scared of her reaction. What if she takes him wrong. After marriage incident now its quite impossible for her to trust on him,this was his thinking.

'kya kahu usse? Kahi wo ye na soche subah maine jo uske liye kiya wo sirf in papers pe uske signature pane k liye kiya.' he was tormented badly with his own thoughts. Not sure what to do now.

Meanwhile she come inside. Both again glance each other.'mujhe tumse/apse kuchh baat karni hai.' both said together and again glance each other. Geet allowed him to speak first.

Maan was so worried of his reaction. 'Geet ye humari shadi k papers hai inpe tumhare signature chahiye court me submitt karne hai kal subah.' Maan told him.

Geet scared too. She remind of his words that this marriage dont matters to him. She thought he is now gonna divorcee her. Her hand start trembling while holding the papers and pen. Her beat rosed. The thought of sepration is sucked her whole blood and made her feeble. 'aap itni chhoti si baat k liye mujhe divorce dena chahte ho?' she whimpered and asked innocently.

Maan's eyes widened with shock. 'divorcee? Kisne kaha main tume divorcee de raha hu?' Maan asked in confusion.

'to firr ye konse papers hai humari shadi k papers to pehle hi approve ho chuke hai na. Bhale hi aap mujhe apni patni na mano par main to apko apna pati manti hu na. Or nahi dungi main apko divorcee.' she pored out her all feeling while sobbing and ran away from his room leaving Maan stunned.for a minute he was shocked with her simple confession. Unknowingly she revealed too much in front of him. 'idiot you again hurt her.' Maan cursed himself and ran behind her.

He entered inside her room and found her sobbing. He went near her and wiped off her tears. He hold her tenderly. But before he said anything she again start mummering. 'maine apse kitni baar sorry bola na par aap itna gussa ho jaoge mujhe nahi pata tha.' she constantly pouring her tears which was piercing his soul and torning him apart.

Maan wont bear tears in those hazles eyes. He dosent know how to react and just filled her in his embrace. 'shant ho jao Geet main tumse naraz nahi hu. Ha Geet i am not angry with you. Or ye papers divorce k nahi hai.' now he parted her to make her understand. Geet just glancing his face innocently. 'Ye papers tumhari property ko claim karne k liye hai jispe sirf tumhara haq hai. Geet i dont know tume pata hai ya nahi but Sumer is not your biological father. Ye sari propert sirf tumhari hai.' Maan told her the purpose calmly.

'mujhe pata hai that he is not my real father. Mere papa k murder k baad mumma ne Sumer papa se shadi ki thi.' Geet's words shocked him more.

'tume pata hai sab kuchh?' Maan trying to scann her mind.

'sab kuchh to nahi sab dhundla sa hai. Anyways mujhe ye sab nahi chahiye.' Geet told her decision.

'nahi Geet jo tumhara hai wo tumhara hi rahega. But wanna ask you before this. Willl you trust me?' Maan seeking for ans in her eyes.

'sabse zada. Aankh band kar k aap jaha kahenge main chalne ko tayiyar hu, jaha kahenge sign karne k liye taiyar hu.'

Geet's simple confession make him shudder violently. She doest know anything about him still she trusted on him like this much. Maan is feeling guilty for hiding the whole truth from her but he have no other option.

'Geet tume kuchh btana chahta hu. Tumhari will k according shadi k baad tumhari 51%property tumhare husband ki ho jayegi.' Maan told her hesitatingly. This was what he is fearing for.

'maine apse abhi kaha tha mujhe ye sab nahi chahiye. Property kisko mile mujhe koi farak nahi padta. Ye sab to kabi maine chaha hi nahi tha. Sirf itna chahti thi ki meri life me b khushiya ho pyar ho par wo b babji ne mujhe nahi diya to in sabko leke main kya karungi. Mere paas kuchh nahi hai khone ko ab. Mumma k jane k baad sab khtam ho chuka hai meri life me. Bas ab ye saanse bachi hai,jinka mujhe koi moh nahi hai.' Geet was so straight forward about her thoughts regarding the property. He turn amused. This was his Mishti always like this only. She took the papers and signed without even reading.

Maan caressed her face softly. 'good night. So jao aaram se.' he moved towards door and stopped suddenly. 'or ha breakfast or coffee k liye thanks.' he said thanks and left the room. His simple thanksbring smile on her dull and pale face. Finally she have a solace that Maan forgive her...

PRECAP:- PRECAP SAME

NOTE:- I HOPE AAP SABKE KAFI DOUBTS CLEAR HO RAE HONGE AND YES MANY OF ASK ME FOR MAANEET MOMENTS TO GUYS YOU HAVE TO WAIT LITTLE MORE AS BOTH WERE HEISTATED. AGREE THEY WERE MARRIAED BUT NEED TIME TO ACCEPTED THEIR REALTION WHICH ONLY BASED ON PAIN ITSELF.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Yay I'm first to comment

amazing update feeling bad for maan. he cooked for his mishty 😉 and his hard work went in cuty's tummy😃. Hope geet will get her happiness and maan will take revenge from sumer for hurting his mishty.

Edited by ainanwer - 11 years ago