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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 89


Geet's words brought him back in sense ,, he tried hard to control n compose himself ,, he cdn't cross his limits like this ,, never * he inwardly smacked his head loosing like this nd making Geet restless ,, it took few min for him to control his desires then he tried to ease Geet ,, he parted lil nd looked at her ,, awwee she was so venerable ,, closed eyes , flushed face with his hard kisses ,, heavy breaths nd stiff body ,, he caressed her face nd adjusted her hair lovingly .

Maan: look at me sweetheart .

She nodded in a NO ns hid her face in his chest clinging to him ,, she was all shy-shy nd blushy ,, every time their relation was crossing a barrier nd they wr coming close,, Maan smiled at her gesture nd felt pleasure , he cocooned her n nuzzled in her ear nd neck .

Maan: Geet , u don't have any idea about my condition , u r irresistible nd making me crazy .

Geet: Maaan .

Maan: haan Geet , tumhare liye hi nahi mere liye bhi utna hi tough hei , we have to control love ,, I want to make everything special for u , as u dreamed for u ,, i'm all urs Geet .

Geet: oh Maan , I love u ( she kissed him again on his neck)

Maan: Geeet plzz don't temp me .

Both giggled at their venerable condition ,, after few sec they parted ,, Maan towered her from side taking support on his elbow ,, they looked deep in eachother eyes ,, a sweet smile of contentment was floating on their lips nd eyes wr filled with love .

Maan: Geet , what do u want for our marriage ,, a grand wedding OR a simple with very close friends ?

Geet caressed his face lovingly ,, she knew that he wd go to any extent to fulfil her dreams.

Geet : Maan why don't u talk about ur wish , it's urs marriage too ,, don't u have any dream for u nd me ?

Maan: Geet my dream is ur smile which gives me happiness nd for our marriage I want to go with ur wish my princess .

Geet: then make it simple but beautiful my prince charming ( she kissed his chin nd said) * Maan meri khushiyan tumse judi hei esliye apni khushi aur sapno ko undekha matt kerna mere liye, nahi to mujhe dukh hoga ,, tum jo decision lena chaho le saktey ho humare liye.

Maan beamed with happiness ,, he nodded in a yes nd hugged her ,, he felt a tingling in his tummy thinking about their marriage ,, he wantd to make every moment very special nd memorable for Geet nd for that he had to plan a lot ,, first of all Dadima's blessing ,, she is d head of their family nd only relation for both .

Maan: Geet sona hei ,, let's go inside .

Geet hummed nd both got up from hammock ,, Geet covered all d things nd Maan helped her then he scooped her in his arms to go inside ,, he settled her in her bed ,, Geet craned her neck nd gave a pack on his lips saying Good Night with a smile ,,, he was awed with her gesture , cupped her face, wished her GN giving a long satisfied kiss ,, he covered her nd moved back to his room with contended mind n heart ,, he lay down on bed nd went in deep slumber in few min .

He got up in d morning with d buzz of his phone alarm , got up nd went to freshen up then peep in Geet's room ,, she was sleeping peacefully ,, he came down in kitchen , made coffee for Dadi nd him ,, brought that in Dadima's room ,, Dadima was up nd reading d newspaper .

Maan: GM Dadima.

Dadima: GM beta , u brought coffee , where is servant ?

Maan: why servant , taste coffee prepared by MSK .

Dadima: O really !! Anything special today Or it's Geet's effect ?

Maan shied: Dadima plzzz ,, nothing is special ,, I was free so wanted to spent time with u ,, now a days u r pulling my leg a lot .

Dadima: right,, I don't want to lose d chance ( she sipped d coffee ), hummm it's really good , thanks ,, Geet ko nahi di ?

Maan: aapki princess abhi so rahi hei .

Dadma chuckled ,,, humari ya aapki ? How was dinner ?

Dadimaaa ,, he blushed , it was fab nd u knew that ,,, u filled her about my favs.

Dadima caressed his cheek lovingly : r u not happy with that ?

Maan held her hand in his : of course i'm happy ,, very happy ,, Dadima I want something from u .

Dadima : bolo .

Maan: Dadima , I want Mom's ruby ring for Geet , will u give me from her jewellery ?

Dadima looked at him with lovingly : Maan u want to propose her ?

Maan: yes Dadima , properly ,, I want to marry her with all respect nd Geet is agree .

Dadima gave a wide smile , she was on cloud 9 , her nd her children's dream was going to accomplish.

Dadima: sure beta , sab kuch tumhara aur Geet ka hi to hai , lekin ring denge hum humari style mei ,, she spoke raising her brows in a naughty way.

Maan smiled nodding in a yes ,, he willingly gave that right to Dadima ,, he wanted to fulfil her wishes too ,, Dadima was beaming with happiness nd he was for her ,, he was seeing her this much happy after many yrs.


Precap - Maaneet's informal engagement ...



Part - 90

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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maneets bond is growing day by day
he controls his desire to make everything special for her
he asked about her wish about wedding
she wants simple
maan want to propose her
asking forhis moms ring
naughty dadi
whats she planning
the love is going smooth
is there any storm ahead
precap interesting
Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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lovely update😊
maan want to make everything special for geet
maan asked her wish about marriage
geet want simple marriage
maan wanted her mom roby ring to proposing geet


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dinka chika dinka chika..🥳
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

babie jaldi se aa jaooo


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