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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 85


Geet's heart was dancing ,, Maan... MSK was manaofying her ,, made her fav pizza , awwweee ,, so sweet ,, she wanted to hug him tightly for his efforts ,, his face was showing that he was feeling bad for hurting her ,, Geet saw him in d gym ouring out his anger on him ,, Maan was looking at her with a hope nd her heart was melting like wax but showing unaffected .

Geet: tumne khaya , nahi na ? to esse aap hi kha lo ,, meri wajah se tum ku bhooke rahaty ho ,, mera gussa tum ku uss bechare punching bag aur khane per nikal rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, I won't do that again ,, plzz kha lo .

Geet: pahale tum khao ,, mai nahi chahati ki meri wajah se tum bhuke raho .

Maan: mai bhi kha lunga lekin pahale tum .

Geet shrugged her shoulders showing some tentrum nd took d plate of tampting pizza ,, she took a piece nd forwarded to Maan .

Geet: tum nahi khaoge esliye kha rahi hu ,, Dadima ko pata chalega to unhe bura lagega ,, waise mai naraaz hu ,, she brought d pizza near Maan's mouth nd gestured him to have that ,,( inwardly she was enjoying all this ).

Maan took d bite ,, held her hand nd guided that to make her eat d remaining part ,, she fed him with her hand facking anger in between ,, d pizza was really very tastey nd Geet enjoyed that with Maan though she didn't show that but she loved that * on d other side Maan was happy that she ate nd he too had with her hand ,, he was niharing her lovingly nd ate,, hyeee , how sweet but she was still angry with him .. ab kya karu esse manane ke liye ? He handed her d coffee myg nd took his ,, he was sipping his coffee giving her some treat of sexy smiles now nd then ,,, she wanted to return but masking a tough nd unaffected face * He went back nd Geet hide her face in pillow nd laughed .. Mr monster singh khurana badi akad dikhaty ho ,ab lo mja ,, Babaji,, he is so loving nd caring ..muaahhh ,, love u Maan. ( she blow a kiss in air with a smile) Now she decided to work on her Date Plan ,, she wanted to give him a surprise ,, a beautiful surprise.

Here Maan was pacing in his room to nd fro thinking another way to woo her ,, after few min he made a call nd ordered ,, there was a wide smile on his face then he went to his study nd got busy in his work ,, he had lot of pending work of last two days nd next day was last day of d week so decided to finish that .

At eve there wr many bouquets of flowers of diff colour nd varity in Geet's room ,, her room was looking like a flowershop ,, N&S wr bringing them one by one nd placing them ,, Geet was sitting on d bed awed ,,she knew who is behind all this ,, she shied nd smiled,, ess bande ka kuch nahi pata kab kya ker de ?

Maan came out for diner ,, he switch on d screen nd saw Geet room filled with flowers nd smiled ,, she was not there ,, he turn off d screen nd came to take diner in dining hall where Dadima nd Geet wr busy in their talk ,, they became quiet seeing him there ,, both looked at each other ,, he gave a smile but she made a face in return ,, N placed d diner nd they started quietly only Dadima was talking to him on some business matters * At eve Geet got a call from Sia nd now from Pandeyji ,, Geet replied with a smile.

Geet: hello Pandeyji , i'm angry with u .

Maan nd dadima looked at Geet ,, Dadima smiled coz she knew d matter but Maan rolled his eyes ,, lo ye to kisi aur se bhi naraaz hei .

Pandeyji:****************.

Geet: Sia called me , this is very bad , u broke her heart .

P: ****** **** ****************.

Geet: so what ,she loves u nd respect u a lot ,, she is molding herself according to u , try to understand her feelings .

P : ***** ***** ***** ***** *************** .

Geet: kya hua agar Sia naam hei to ,, wo aapke raamji ki sita nahi hei ,, Philippines ki Sia hei , kaisi baaty kerty ho?

P: **** **** ********* ******** **** .

Geet: aap Bajrangbali ke bhagat ho to kya hua aapke Hanuman ne aapko shadi se mana kiya hei kya ? wo khud bhi to married couple ke bhagat thy,, unhe married logo se prob nahi thi to aapko shaadi se kya prob hei ? kitni pyaari ladki hei Sia.

P: *** ***** *** **** *** .

Maan nd Dadima wr listening her oneside talk ,, Maan gussed that she was talking about Pandeyji's marriage with sia ,,, hummm,, interesting ,, apni setting ho nahi rahi dusro ki ker rahi hei ,, he gave a stern look to Geet but smiled at Dadima.

Geet: aapke hanumanji aapse naraaz nahi honge meri guarantee hei ,, etni pyaari ladki ko hanumanji bhi reject nahi kerenge ,, waise bhi aap shaadi US mei kroge India mei nahi aur yaha aapke hanuman anhi aayenge ,, India mei kaffi cases hei solve kerne ko .

Maan chocked on his food nd Dadima started laughing at her talk.

Geet: haan to , India mei bas ek hanuman hei aur unke countless complicated Bhagats ,,yahan to 3-3 man hei , superman,spiderman,aur batman , unper workload kam hei esliye romance bhi ker letey hei .

Now N&S started laughing in kitchen ,, Maan was suppressing his laugh listening his Devil's talk ,, Dadima was enjoying .

P: *** ****** ***** *** ***** ***

Geet: Pandeyji ,, apne Hanumanji ko apne mandir tak rahane do aur dil se yaad karo , Bhagwaan apne bhagaton ko sirf accha kerty hei wo kisi se naraaz nahi hoty ,, accha ya bura hum sochty aur kerty hei ,, agar aapne ab Sia ko hurt kiya na to mai aapse baat nahi karungi ,, mai bhi to ladki hu mujhse bhi baat matt karo fir .

P: *** ***** ******** *****

Geet: accha , category divide ker rakhi hei ,, maa aur bahan se prob nahi biwi se hei ,, not fair , Pandeyji zara socho ,, agar aapke Hanumanji ko biwion se prob hoti na to Sita mata se bhi hoti ,, unhe dhoondne border cross nahi kerty , jo illigle tha ,, pakda na Ravan nei ,, ab dobara wahi galti nahi karenge US tak aane ki so Bindaas hoker shaadi ker lo Sia se ,, waise bhi Sia Hanumanji ki country ki nahi hei to wo jyada attention nahi denge ess matter ko , theek hei ,, aapke paas do din ka time hei sochne ko ,, agar aapne haan mei jawab nahi diya na to mai katti .

P: *** **** ** ** * * * * * *

Geet: do din , bas , final , bye , GN .

She cut d call with a smile nd then find that Maan was looking at her naughtily ,, she gave a sheepish smile to him chewing her lower lip then looked at Dadima who was laughing covering her mouth .

Maan: ho gaya match making ab khana khao.


Precap - Maaneet on date...😳




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hi priya...
aaj din mei nahi aai..??😊


oye din mein aayi thi tu hi bina reply diya chalegaye ek baar pm bhi check karo time hoga kab maine pm kiya😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

kaha ek thanks ki aur ek update ki😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

😃 Hi dona...
haan dear.. 😆
fir 4 din ke liye chutti per hu...😊


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111


kaha ek thanks ki aur ek update ki😆😆


mist aur torment dono de rahi hai di
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 Hi dona...
haan dear.. 😆
fir 4 din ke liye chutti per hu...😊


char din gayab rahoge??
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111


oye din mein aayi thi tu hi bina reply diya chalegaye ek baar pm bhi check karo time hoga kab maine pm kiya😆😆


😃 mai bas ek bar jjhanki maar ker chali gai thi..aaj bahot kaam tha..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


char din gayab rahoge??


haan in laws ke ghar jo jaarahi hai😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


char din gayab rahoge??


😆 haan in-laws se milne ja rahe hei..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111


haan in laws ke ghar jo jaarahi hai😉


😆😆 mai bekar mei reply di..

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