OS::After so long::Link to New OS:Pg 16

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Hay

R u by any chance writer of captured life??

Quote

-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

^^Ya 😊

Edited by -Crayon- - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Crayon-
^^Ya 😊

O wow I've very recently read that one

Loved maan character soo much!

I couldn't comment there as the topic was closed!

If u have written something else can you please share the links

Would love to read 😊

Quote

lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow even though it ;s not a masterpiece
it was some thing that makes some sense...
do come with more works buddy😃

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

random but cute
so she didnt wanna know him
hmmm yeh kaisi dosti thi
oh well thats that then
wow maan a reality tv star
kya baat hai

Quote

aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

how could you say that you are a bad writer? It was such an awesome OS. Over the years everyone see people change and friends turn into a stranger and the emotion we held behind a relationship is just us.Maybe that other person is not going to return them. But then sometimes we take a chance and either get burnt or savor the relationship and sometimes the fear of getting burnt will stop us from taking chance...loved how you portrayed her confusion and conclusions!!!

Quote

-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

O wow I've very recently read that one
Loved maan character soo much!
I couldn't comment there as the topic was closed!
If u have written something else can you please share the links
Would love to read 😊

I haven't written anything much except for random shit on coffees and windows. 😆

Quote

-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
how could you say that you are a bad writer? It was such an awesome OS. Over the years everyone see people change and friends turn into a stranger and the emotion we held behind a relationship is just us.Maybe that other person is not going to return them. But then sometimes we take a chance and either get burnt or savor the relationship and sometimes the fear of getting burnt will stop us from taking chance...loved how you portrayed her confusion and conclusions!!!

Even though I started it with a heavy heart and emotions as deep as the marina trench... but while reaching the end it all became a tomfoolery. 😆

It's your interpretation skills that make it decipher such conclusion. 😃 No seriously...you always come up with something sensible every time I write something so random. Thank you!

Quote

aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Crayon-

Even though I started it with a heavy heart and emotions as deep as the marina trench... but while reaching the end it all became a tomfoolery. 😆
It's your interpretation skills that make it decipher such conclusion. 😃 No seriously...you always come up with something sensible every time I write something so random. Thank you!

I am no critic to judge your way of writing!! All I can say is I wrote about the emotions that your writing made me feel😉 so it goes down to your writing😊

Quote

ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Long back I read this story in eenadu Sunday book. You see I used to adore those stories. Anyway there once was this story about a man n woman who are neighbors and who felt for each other slightly when they were young. But they're from different communities so them getting married is out of question. Their familes won't agree so it dropped there. They weren't really romantically inclined n all but used to converse a lot sitting in a swing in the garden.

After some 35 odd years when these guys r old, who got married separately, had moved on in their life get in touch n decide to meet in the same garden. It's the guy's ancestral house. When she was about to arrive he leaves a note for her n goes back. The note says he doesn't want to Meet her cuz in his mind she's that 18 year old young beautiful woman n she remembers him as the 21 year old handsome chap n he wants the Memory to not be replaced when they're old n frail.

I thought he's a kill joy back then but later I understood his need for not destroying happy memories.

I wish she never got hold of his profile since the cologne Memory is now replaced with his splitswilla acts.