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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbee



Abii ja rahi hu...😊

Aati hu 10.00 tak... 😊
Bye...😊

kkk cya den,,,mein baki gang dhundtee hun,,,,😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

kkk cya den,,,mein baki gang dhundtee hun,,,,😉😆


😃 hi me back...
koi mila..
pending work nahi hei kya..etni chutti maari..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello friends




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same to u ..keep smiling
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Posted: 11 years ago

😊 going to update ..


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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 82


Maan's heart was still thudding fast like he came from a long run, came close to her bed nd sat there on d edge of d bed ,, he adjusted her strands ,, caressed her cheek ,, she steered in sleep disturbed with d touch ,, he was feeling low coz of that bad dream so bent nd placed his lips on her forehead assuring him that she was all fine with him ,, Geet woke up with that touch ,, she opened her eyes with a jerk nd was going to push him back but very next moment saw his face ,, her words stuck in her throat ,, maan realized that he scared her nd disturbed her sleep.

Maan: its me Geet ,, sorry I disturbed ur sleep.

D morning light was coming throw d window nd d room was well lit ,, Geet saw that Maan's eyes have some fear nd he was restless.

Geet: Maan ,, what happened ? Sorry I forgot , we have to go back na ,, r we late?

Maan: no , I got up early nd came to see u ,, do u want to sleep more ?

Geet: no it's Ok , why r u looking disturb ? r u Ok ,, Dadima ?

Maan: relax ,, everything is fine.

Geet: kya hua tumhe ?

Maan gave her a deep look nd then towered over her partialy hiding his face in her neck ,,, Geet I want u infront of me , always .

Geet : I'm with u Maan ,, what happened ? what is bothering u ? agar sab theek hei to subha-subha mood ku off hei ? he was touched that how easily she read his mind nd body langusge ,, with a single look she understood that he was disturbed .

Maan ,,, hum ,,, mujhe sunrise dekhna hei ,, he got a jerk at d name of sun rise, parted a lil he looked at her fearfully,,, plzz Maan chalo na bahar ,, maine esse sea shore per nahi dekha kabhi ,, his body felt a shiver ,, he ws staring at her but his dream was fleshing in his mind ,, Maan chalo na mere sath plzzz * his heart was fearing to go out but he couldn't deny her ,, he couldn't say her what he saw in his dream ,, she pleaded again nd he with a thudding heart brought her out ,, he was holding her very close to her nd stood on d deck having a good distance from railing.

Maan: bas yahin se dekho Geet ,aage nahi jana.

Geet: ku ,, ab to hum jetty per hei ,, mid sea mei nahi.

Maan: kaha na yahin se dekho ,, mere paas raho .

Geet was confused with his behavior ,, last night he brought her near d railing nd now he was not allowing her to go near that ,, his hold on her hand nd waist was very tight ,, Geet looked at him nd find him restless ,, they watched d sunrise for few min but Maan didn't show any interest in that ,, his all attention was on Geet * after few min he insisted her to move back ,, they came in nd went to meet Dadima ,, she was up nd sipping her coffee ,, both wished her GM nd sat with her,, this was d best morning for Dadima coz her two cutie pies wr besides her ,, she held their hands nd kissed them lovingly.

Dadima: Thanks Maan beta ,, I want to see both of u in front of me ,, happy nd full of life ,, god bless u .

Maan nd Geet hugged her form both side ,, Geet was feeling very happy nd satisfied having a happy family ,, her family , who care for her ,, her eyes moistened with this feel that now she has her own family ,, she gave a sweet smile to Maan mouthed thank nd he only blinked at her in return .

Maan: Dadima after BF we'll move back to home ,,, Geet chalo sabko informe ker dete hei .

After half an hr all wr at BF table on d dack ,, they took their BF watching beautiful sviews with light chit-chat ,, all went to their respective place thanking Maan nd Dadima nd giving best wishes to Geet ,, All spent a beautiful time all together ,, Meera and Yash wr very happy for Geet nd Maan ,, they gave a grp hug nd parted to go .

Maan wanted to reach home ASAP ,, he was showing that he is fine but his heart was still restless coz of that horrible dream ,, he was fearing for Geet * he was MSK , faced many hardships , ups & down nd never feared but a nightmare of losing Geet shook him entirely ,, Dadima nd Geet wr talking all d way but he was very quiet making himself busy in checking mails nd replying back * they wr in d KV nd went to their respective rooms .

Maan entered his room , called his driver who drive Geet's car now ,, he was in front of him after few min ,, Maan ordered him to be elart nd to take extra care regarding Geet's security ,, d driver assured him ,, he was their old nd trusted driver nd Maan had full faith on him ,, Maan sent him back nd checked all d security system of KV then came to Geet room in OH ,, he thought to request Geet to shift in KV with Dadima nd him but she was not there he searched nd panicked then find her in d loby nd took a breath of relief .

Geet was busy in her study ,, she didn't touch her work from last day so decided to finish that ,, she noticed that Maan was standing nd watching her quietly taking d support of a pillar ,, she passed a sweet smile which sooth his heart nd gestured him to come close placing her lappy aside .


Precap - Geet is angry with Maan ...




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😉Happy Mother's Day!
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😃 me ist aftr such a long tym,,,,,😛


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