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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

Scene: Alia Bhatt on KBC
Q. Alia, which of the following is the largest?
A. A Peanut
B. An Elephant
C. The Moon
D. A Kettle

Alia: B. An Elephant

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

Scene: Alia Bhatt on KBC
Q. Alia, which of the following is the largest?
A. A Peanut
B. An Elephant
C. The Moon
D. A Kettle

Alia: B. An Elephant


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hellooo jii... ki haal chaal hai sabke??😃


🤗 Hi kiddo..
how was d day..??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

babbie update de di?


😆 abhi de rahi hu.. mai bhi late aai..
party mei gai thi..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


😊plzz page 60 per post matt kerna, give me spce for two posts..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hi kiddo..
how was d day..??

mastt... aaj 1 shaadi me gayii thi.. or kal hame compny visit pr le jane wale hai.. zydus jaane waale hai... to sab pack kr rahi hoo.
aap batao.. kyaa chal raha hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

tujhe main abhi tak dikhi nahi??😡


😆 mujhe tum mona ki trd per dikh gai aur reply bhi kiya pado..😆😆
fir pic search kerne mei phass gai,, sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 80

After half an hr they wr standing on d jetty near a beautiful cruise nd Meera ,Yash ,A&A nd Pandatji wr there on d dack ,, all wr waving their hands with a smile nd shouting her name * she was really surprised seeing all this arrangements for her ,, she beamed with happiness ,, Dadima too was smiling on Maan's efforts nd caressed his cheek with love saying ,, I like it .

Geet too gave him a side hug thanking him with moist eyes ,, her smile filled his heart with joy ,, this is what he wants ,, her smile nd happiness * they entered d cruise nd met with all .. Meera nd Yash gave her a tight grp hug wishing her HBday nd after that all wished her ,, d cruise started its sail ,, it was a beautiful eve ,, all wr settled on d deck nd watched d sunset then beautiful night ,, there wr many cruises in fair distances ,, d city was bathing in multi color lights giving a beautiful sight from d sea.

D eve was very beautiful nd dreamy ,, full of joy nd happness,, after spending some time in open all came in d hall where a beautiful cake was placed on a round table ,, Maan brought Geet there nd handed her d knife to cut that ,, all gathered around.

she cut d cake nd gave 1st bite to Dadima nd then think ,, Meera or Maan ,, Meera came close with a wide smile nd Geet forwarded her hand to gave her but Meera held her hand nd diverted that to Maan ,,, awww... so sweet,, Maan was touched with Meera's action ,, He gave a sweet smile to Meera giving her a side hug .. Thanks sweetie ,, he took d bite nd then Meera , yash ,, and others ,, Meera took some cream nd pasted that on Geet's face from behind ,, yash too filled her face with cream ,, Geet was whining while all wr laughing at her plight ,,, She took a tissue paper to wipe that nd looked around to ask someone for restroom ,, Maan held her hand nd brought her out from there .

Maan: Geet come with me .

They wr in d restroom ,, he stopped her,, took d tissue paper from her hand nd started to clean her face ,, both wr looking at each other lovingly ,, her face was a mesh ,, he was wiping slowly ,, there wr some strawberry cream near d corner of her lips which was tempting him to taste ,, he gulped ,, his eyes wr fixed on that ,, Geet got his gaze nd blessed ,, she lowered her eyes in shyness nd chewed her lower lip in nervousness but her that action seduced him more ,, he leaned nd licked that cream softly ,, her whole body juddered nd she gasped ,, she held him from waist ,, dug her tips in his skin in excitement ,, she forgot to breath nd breath stuck in throat ,, he licked all d remaining cream from her face slowly giving a sweet torture to both ,, he gave a soft pack on her lips saying .. this is d best cake I taste ,, HBday princess ,, do u like my surprise ? but she was froze ,, her eyes wr half closed , knees turned jelly ,, unable to hold herself she leaned forward nd left her whole weight on him hiding her face in his neck ,, he felt her condition nd embraced her .. Geeet * they remained like that for few sec nd parted with a jerk with d ringing of Geet's phone.

It was Meera who broke their lovy dovy moments ,, they parted nd composed themselves ,, Geet took d phone nervously nd replied ,

Geet: hello Meera , i'm coming.

Meera: no darling take ur time , jab Bday celebrate ker lo tab aa jana ,, she giggled.

Geet: Meera , it was u who created this mesh .

Meera: yes nd MK got d jeck pot ,, she was still laughing .

Geet: mei tujhe baad mei dekh lungi meera .

Meera: accha , abhi kisme busy hei ? we r waiting ,, jaldi aao ,, kuch aage ke liye chod do .

Geet: grrr ,, Meera ,, but she cut d call.

Maan was standing taking support of d platform nd grinning naughtily at their talks ,, he understood that Meera was pulling her leg * Geet gave him an angry glare bcoz of him Meera got d chance to tease her ,, she pouted nd turned to wash her face ,, he smiled nd came out saying ,, i'm waiting outside .

She came out after few min nd both joined all ,, all danced nd enjoyed then took their lavish dinner ,, after spending some time on dock with light chit-chat all went to their respective rooms ,, Geet changed nd decided to spent some more time in open so she came on deck again to enjoy d beautiful stary nyt over vast sea ,, it was a splendid view to watch ,, she was lost adoring d nature's beauty when she felt a blow on her nape nd ear ,, she shivered nd turned ,, Maan was smiling at her ,, he was very close to her ,, holding her shoulders he brought her near d railing but she afraid nd move lil back.

Maan: darr ku rahi ho Geet mai hoon na.

Geet: wo it's so deep nd vast na ,,

Maan: i'm with u , enjoy ,, he encircled his arms around her waist nd held her close ,, her tummy felt a somersault ,, this beautiful night cool sea breez nd he was so close to her ,, his proximity was stealing all her control ,, she held his hands on her waist nd lean back ,, his front was touching her back ,, both wr losing in each other ,, dazed ,, he softly gave a pack on her earlobe which shook her entirely ,, she moaned ,, Maan ... Geet .

He lifted her nd brought her to d couch nd sat there having her in his lap ,, she wrapped her arms around his neck nd hid her face in his neck ,, both wr struggling with their untamed desires ,, he adjusted her loose strands nd gave some feather kisses on her face ,, he whispered .. Geet look at me ,, she nodded in a no ,, plzz ,, I want to talk u ... Geet ,, he held her chin nd lifted her face ,, she looked at him with love filled eyes ,, Gosh!!! He was dying to see this love in her eyes ,, love for him ,, he was adoring her blussed face nd moony eyes ,, he cupped her face with his palm ,,leaned nd placed his thirsty lips on her trembling petals ,, she shuddered nd tightened her grip ,, he moaned lost in those dreamy moments ... Oh Geet nd then captured her lips for a soul searing kiss ,, she dug her tips in his scalp ,, both wr experiencing their first kiss in full sense nd submission ,, they parted nd he cocooned her hiding his face in her crook ,, after gaining their normal breaths he parted a lil ,, adjusted her hair ,, he looked at her lovingly with a sweet smile ,, she was blushing hard nd he was adoring her .

He couldn't stop himself anymore ,, this was d high time to express his feeling for her which he was suppressing form months ,, he boosted his courage taking a deep breath ,, cupped her face nd made her look at him .

Maan: Geet , I don't know u believe it or not but it's true nd I swear that i'm in love with u ,, I love u Geet from d depth of my heart nd soul ,, I can't live without u .

Geet stared at him ,, looking deep in his eyes to get d depth of his words .

Maan: I know u won't believe that a person like me who scrambled ur life in his selfishness cd say these words to u but it's true Geet ,, I love u * i'm ur sinner nd I don't deserve ur love nd care ,, I know it's hard for u to forgive or to love me back , i'm blessed that u r with me nd respecting this relation ,,only an angle cd do this ,, after bearing my inhuman behavior u r saving me nd my respect ,, i'm blessed ,, me nd Dadima r blessed that u r with us ,, plzz be with me forever nd I promise that I won't let u down ,, plzz trust me Geet * in d presence of these shinning stars nd moon i'm accepting my love for u * he bent nd gave a soft pack on her lips stamping his love for her .


Precap --- Geet's reaction ..?🤔



Part - 81



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😊😊😃😊😊
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