MG SS : YOU ARE MINE [PART-3]:Mod note Pg21

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INDEX


PROLOGUE - 1
CHARACTER SKETCH - 2
PART: 1 - 6
PART: 2 - 8
PART : 3 - 12



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PROLOGUE

Maan was doing his Thai-chai session in the gym. He was thinking his first meeting with Geet before on week when she had come to K.M to stay as she was his parent's friend's daughter and she had none in this world like him . From that day he was having his eyes on her. He used to stare her continuously while he would stay at home which would make Geet week on her knees by feeling such an intense gaze on her. He had noticed these he that she knew also felt something for him. He has seen the same desire in her eyes.

Geet was going to gym to give him his black coffe and thinking about Maan. From the first meeting, she has developed desires for him. She had never felt like that before. She use to feel Maan's intense gaze on her all the time when she was nearby him like dining table, living room. She knew that he had something for her like she had for him but what was it she didn't know.

Maan was busy in his thai-chai session when Geet entered the room. She walked slowly taking small steps. She stood rooted looking at his bare back, the sweat beads were dripping from his body tantalizing her senses.




Maan was feeling no different, He could find Geet everywhere, he could smell her around, brushing his thoughts he closed his eyes even then he was getting tortured by those hazels of hers which were speaking volumes. Frustratingly he broke the ice with his bare hands, just then he heard the sound of her payal, he got alarmed. The wind was blowing the curtains and he walked towards the pillars to find the source of sound but as he lifted the curtain he found no one again. But he heard "chum!!! Chum!!!". He asked "Who is there ??" and walked towards the other corner of the room. There he found an ear-ring stuck to the curtain, he again yelled "Whos that??" Getting no reply Maan wore his vest and started to find the person. After a hide and seek session of 5mins, Geet felt a tug on her arm!!! She gasped and the cup was slipped off from her hand.

"What are you doing here?? Are you playing with me hide and seek?? Maan questioned staring at Geet intensely. She felt an urge to hold him and hug him. Her hands automatically went to his vest. She placed her hand on Maan's chest... Woh... I am... here for... giving you coffee" she replied stammering and took a long breath trying to calm down her erratic heartbeats.



Edited by akmgbsgd - 11 years ago
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congrats on the new story! awesome prologue! Fab banner! update. pls post cs! soon n do pm! Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow what a prologue
so they both feel something for the other
hmmm loved their hide and seek game
but he caught her
of course he did
will look forward to more
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PROLOGUE

Maan was doing his Thai-chai session in the gym. He was thinking his first meeting with Geet before on week when she had come to K.M to stay as she was his parent's friend's daughter and she had none in this world like him . From that day he was having his eyes on her. He used to stare her continuously while he would stay at home which would make Geet week on her knees by feeling such an intense gaze on her. He had noticed these he that she knew also felt something for him. He has seen the same desire in her eyes.

Geet was going to gym to give him his black coffe and thinking about Maan. From the first meeting, she has developed desires for him. She had never felt like that before. She use to feel Maan's intense gaze on her all the time when she was nearby him like dining table, living room. She knew that he had something for her like she had for him but what was it she didn't know.

Maan was busy in his thai-chai session when Geet entered the room. She walked slowly taking small steps. She stood rooted looking at his bare back, the sweat beads were dripping from his body tantalizing her senses.




Maan was feeling no different, He could find Geet everywhere, he could smell her around, brushing his thoughts he closed his eyes even then he was getting tortured by those hazels of hers which were speaking volumes. Frustratingly he broke the ice with his bare hands, just then he heard the sound of her payal, he got alarmed. The wind was blowing the curtains and he walked towards the pillars to find the source of sound but as he lifted the curtain he found no one again. But he heard "chum!!! Chum!!!". He asked "Who is there ??" and walked towards the other corner of the room. There he found an ear-ring stuck to the curtain, he again yelled "Whos that??" Getting no reply Maan wore his vest and started to find the person. After a hide and seek session of 5mins, Geet felt a tug on her arm!!! She gasped and the cup was slipped off from her hand.

"What are you doing here?? Are you playing with me hide and seek?? Maan questioned staring at Geet intensely. She felt an urge to hold him and hug him. Her hands automatically went to his vest. She placed her hand on Maan's chest... Woh... I am... here for... giving you coffee" she replied stammering and took a long breath trying to calm down her erratic heartbeats.



Please continue eagerly waiting for the story /QUOTE]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome prolouge ..
continue pls ..
waiting for update ..
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CHARACTER SKETCH




MAAN SINGH KHURANA :

27 years old handsome, CEO of K.C, ruthless, cold and arrogant business man. He is No.1 Business Tycoon of Asia. What he wants he takes it by any cost. He has desire to have Geet from the first meeting which he has for none.


GEET HANDA:

A 18 years old bubbly and naughty girl. She also has desire for Maan like he has for her.



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terrific cs! update soon n do pm! Thanks!
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terrific cs! update soon n do pm
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hmmm so she is only 18
ahhh he is older than her
duh of course he is
will he get her or not
lets see

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