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Posted: 11 years ago
wat maan wen how kaese where
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Awesome and Lovely updates👏👏Geet can't see Maan sad..Dadima is fine now😃Precap Maan or Dev??😕Waiting eagerly for the next updateThanks for the PM dear😳
Edited by jayshu17 - 11 years ago
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Mirror i am back with update so enjoy 😉

i know someone don't like this twist but don't worry

just give me time you will enjoy this so trust me

Mahi

envi dear update and please comment more than one word it give happiness to me
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Part 19

maan like small child and just hug her and cried in her hug dadi feel bad for him ,and start to caressed his back with so much love , nanina just come to maan and say bro she is wick please give her one or two days please , maan nodded in no like small child who is not ready to give his candy , dadi chuckle with maan pout and face , just than geet say in low voice , maanji it is for dadi health and maan just nodded in yes in second , nanina look to veer and veer look to nanina both give knowing look to each other


just than nanina phone beep and there is sms from dr Pinky who want to discuses with her about geet nanina just went to her cabin and took geet and maan also with him , veer sit near dadima who is seep again because of medicine



Pinky - dr. nanina , iwant to talk with geet , are you ready miss geet , it will be help you geet

Geet just look to maan and he nodded in yes , so geet say in low voice yes

pinky so can we proceed with that now itself

geet - can maanji will stay with us

pinky think for some second and nodded in yes

pinky and geet sit on sofa and geet start where she left with maan , after next day of marriage it is routing to me he will arrange cab for me who took me to that hotel and than ... some tears come in her eyes pinky just took hand in her hand and say in soft voice

geet say everything , I know it its painful to you now but trust me it will really helpful to you dear just say it

geet nodded in yes , when he give me warning about parent , I become stone , and when other man touch me idont feel any touch ...and many time I get bitten by customer because I don't responded them in S** but when you soul remove from your body how you will feel something fro anything it is just work for me , world dirty work

pinky - musky birth

geet have some soft smile on her face ,muski she is angel of life , when I lost every hope from my life she become life for me , who will come in my life in accidental way


all give her confused look

after one year of my so called marriage in march 2013 I think 15

maan get shock with date 15/03/2013 , he mummer 15 ,march , but he want to know about muski birth so he keep quite

geet yes 15 march , I have seven day of my monthly course and I don't want to go , iam not feel to go , but dev he just first bit me , than in near 4 in evening she give me some drink which took sense of me , I feel my eye feel heavy and I just want to sleep


he himself took me in some resort on that day , I think he got big money that day , but you know that day in whole year I don't get beaten by customer and I don't have any marks in my body , I amused for second that somebody have s** with me or not and I have some flash of that night , and I will tell you one thing that man is in some pain , he crying sometime some time say papa , ma like that but I cant saw his face , it is dark in room and upon that drink taking toll on me , she bend her head and say in low voice and I think I respond that man...



maan just clutches his hand , why but its all start to hurt him , it igive pain to him

pinky - its ok geet in drunken state , your body respond it like that don't feel guilty , WHY ONLY MAN HAVE DESIER , no geet we also have body , desire and need so don't feel guilty ok

pinky give some water to her , geet took that water and drink that

geet and we are together in that room from 4 pm to next 4 am and when in morning I wake up I don't look to hi and want from there because of headache I just miss my after pill , and next month I miss My MC , oh htat day that monster , just want to kill me , but he don't want to lose me atlist before he get another geet for his business ...

he just took me to doc and doc suggest him that if they aboard this child it will be cause my death , he so frustrated that day , upon that she say don't make physical relation at list for three month

I have most sweet and horrible day in this 9 month pregnancy

I never feel any heated with this child because that soul don't have any mistake in all this ... I want some in my life who will give reason to live me this life m but that monster don't get money from me in that period, many time he don't give food to me and , in my whole life I did chori in my life

maan and pinky and nanina give look to geet

geet , idont want any hard to baby growth so when he will sleep or drunk or out of room I just stole , bread , milk , roti , rice etc etc , he don't ever look in kitchen he have one servant and , that servant also help me in that period , he never told it about that to monster

First day when I stole I feel so cheep about me but my heart say it is for my bay , my muskan

geet took long breath ,and say doc can we continued tomorrow , pinky just nodded in yes , and geet saw just once to maan and nanina and went from there

Nanina in deep thought the date 15 mrach just harming in her head as well as maan head also

pinky , ok doc I took leave , maan and naina nodded in yes , after pinky going naina just want to say something , but maan say I need to meet him , I need to meet him , and just went from there

maan in no time just come to dev room who where crying his eyes out because of pain

maan just say kaka live them alone

maan just grab dev and punch him hard and say on march 15 2013 where you took geet in which resort , tell me B******


dev get scared and confused , you want to know name of baby father , why

maan give another punch and say just tell me

wow o resort moonlight near KC and that room reserved on name of Veer singh shakhawat

maan trouble from moment , he mumeer Veer

maan eyes turn red in anger , he just went to hospital and found veer in naina cabin along with adi

maan just grab veer collar and punch him hard on his face , adi and nanina gasp loudly and before veer come out from shock he get another two three punch he yell in pain , maan what are you doning blood start to come from veer nose , nanina just come between and say bro why you will beating veer why , maan just grab naina and say don't think about him he is not worthy of you

now veer punch maan hard , why you beating me like that and upon that telling her that I am not worth , what I done

maan just grab him again , Mr Veer singh shkahwat what are you doing in resort moonlight on 15 march 2013

veer first confused look to maan , than something struck him , he give painful look to adi , who is equally shock with maan qus

naania , what is this qus bro

maan give discuss look to veer and say because his ans give name of Muskan father naina , an he again start to punch veer but this time veer not stopping maan


nanina just froze in her place

adi just cant look to veer and come between and say maan just hear me once , maan else you regret latter


maan , adi just you don't come between ,he is so low person who sleep with that innocent soul ...

veer , adi don't say anything

adi not today veer , not today if I don't say anything I lost my friend whi is life of me ...just than maan again want to punch veer but adi just give tight slap to maan and say loudly

Mr maan singh khurrana it was not veer it was YOU Maan You in that room whole night with geet on 15 march 2013

a loud gasp come from door there geet standing with pale face

precap


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update
loved d dhamaka
wow i knew muski is maan's daughter gr8 update
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
m 2nd... 😔
ok no probz... 😊

yay...n u updated early...wow...
mujhe lag raha tha ki hoe will i wait till wednwsday...
with soo much curiosity abt muski's papa...
n glad its maan...
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
okk...
samajh nahi aa raha kaha se start karu...
nyway...
nxt session of geets past...
n geet wants maan to stay...tht shows the bond tht has formed.between thm..
now focus has shifed frm geets painful past to muski's birth...
bt the date took away maans breadth...obviously he knws abt tht bt unable to recall...n adding to it how desperate he is to knw the name of father..
he rushes to dev...
btt...its veer came as a bigger shockk to maan...
he couldnt hv thought it to b him...
bt aadi ne toh aur b bada bomb fod diya maan pe...
its not veer...its MAAN...!!
abb maan kya karega...?
there are many possibities...as he may go to guilt mode...
the biggest qstn for him now is...how will he face geet...how will he xplain all this...
n biggest suspense is geet reaction wen she knws its none other than her only FRIEND...!!!
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

<div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Mirror i am back with update so enjoy 😉

i know someone don't like this twist but don't worry

just give me time you will enjoy this so trust me

</font><div align="right"><font size="4">Mahi </font>

<div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">envi dear update and please comment more than one word it give happiness to me </font>
</div></div></div>



u r just being a bigger devil evry day...
itna pareshaan kiya mujhe...
bt i loved this surprise...
n good news...i did study yestrday 😉
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mirror1521



u r just being a bigger devil evry day...
itna pareshaan kiya mujhe...
bt i loved this surprise...
n good news...i did study yestrday 😉




my sweet pari well done you study yesterday
and you get update for that 😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow muski is maan daughter

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