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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

awesome... loved it to core...

ohh last two lines just took my heart away...

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

U Finally Updated...

I just hope Geet opens up to Maan

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mila1

@mila1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Though this is a surprise gift for Shruthe we all are benefiting from it😃

Who is this Dia? She is the same girl who came to KM. Whats her relation with Maan? Colleague? friend? He behaves quite normally with her n quite comfortable too.
Maan was disturbed about Geet being sad n hiding the reason from him. He was hut at her keeping distance from him but wasnt it his own doing? U dont share ur feelings with someone who has build a wall around him n trying his best to not to let u in. He does something n feels something else. Always showing confronting acts n emotions."Picking up his mobile, he stared at her picture caressing it softly. One day when she was sitting in the garden in midst of beautiful flowers enjoying the evening breeze and laughing at the antics of the two cats she had befriended as they fought n chased the butterflies he had taken the liberty to take a snap without her knowledge. In that stolen moment, she looked young, carefree, content and happy. Her eyes were twinkling, face glowing and hairs blowing in the slow wind. He wished he could have heard her laughter but- His mind had willed him umpteen times to delete the pic but some things weren't just in your control." Undoubtedly Maan in this FF is the most paradoxical Maan i hv ever read in any FF. That makes him more interesting n special.

Coming too the Karwachaut not only Geet I was also surprised that he came for the Puja ( i honestly thought he would come but refuse her). He couldnt help looking at his lovely bride n i loved how both were blushing. It was all going well until he stepped back n refused to let her touch his feet. He may did that unintentionally but it was a hard blow on Geet's already wounded feelings. Just loved the ending

"Mujhe batao hua kya hai? He felt extremely restless, not feeling good about her giving him the cold shoulder. He couldn't take it. Mai help kar sakta hu. He said attempting to hide the desperation. Tum college kyu nai jaa rai?Her eyes flicked to his and chin quivered. He knew!! A tear dropped down and she knocked it away from the back of her hand. He took a step close and she moved back. It was all it took for him to pull her into him and she didn't resist. She cried. And strangely it felt completely right."

In the end its just two tormented souls seeking refuge in each other.👏

Edited by mila1 - 11 years ago

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

ohoo ... Maan gave a surprise ...kya baat ...lol
Lovely update

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

kya hone wala hai abb..roothe ko maan kaise manayenge

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

maan ka kuch samjh mein nahi aarha hai ek pal keliye geet ko itni saari khushiyaan detha hai aur dosre pal mein hi dur kardetha hai now he came for karwachauth not to hurt geet and now he is consoling her