MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 7~ UPDATED Pt 59 / Pg 139/ 11th Apr........ - Page 86

Created

Last reply

Replies

941

Views

124.1k

Users

61

Likes

2.5k

Frequent Posters

singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

babbie.. aaj ka animation superb hai yaar... poohhh.. kitna cur=te hai.. loved it.. wese mera din khaas nahi tha.. hope night acchi rahe.. but babbie.. jaldi jana hai to ud jaldi deke aajana.. bate karege..😃


😊 OK mei update dene jati hu jaldi se..
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
*



For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 59



Both wr feeling an unsaid satisfaction in each other arms ,, both wr living a disturbed life from last many days nd trying to cop - up with situation but there r many things which r easy to say but very hard to bear ,, for Maan d situation was easy to face bcoz somewhere it was his dream to make her a part of his life but for Geet it was very tough bcoz she didn't have that feelings for him ,, somewhere past incidents still blocking her way to think about him * she feared to open her heart for him ,, she was already confused about her feelings for him nd this incident threw her backward ,, her mind was blanked to take any decision but today she tried to open her heart to accept d reality.

Both parted feeling raindrops on them nd gave a desiring look to each other , their hearts didn't want to part but they did ,, he held her hand nd brought her in living hall where Dadima was waiting for them ,, without wasting any sec Maan started his questions .

Maan: Geet how cd u do this ? why did u go in cab ? nd why d hell u r not picking d phone ? Do u have any idea how worried we wr ? ab bolti ku nahi ho ,, chup ku ho ?

Dadima nd Geet nodded in annoyingly ,, he was bombing question after question without taking a breath nd accusing her that she is not replying ,,, hopeless.

Geet gave him a hard look nd replied in a lil loud voice ,,, tumhare sawal khatam honge tab to jawab du ? bolne ka mauka dete ho kisi ko ,, jet speed mei bol rahe ho .

Dadima smiled nd Maan realised that he was behaving really odd ,, he said sorry in a low voice .

Dadima: Geet beta tum reply ku nahi ker rahi thi ?

Geet checked her phone nd found that on silent ,, she said sorry to Dadima slapping her head .

Geet: wo Gurudware mei silent per dala tha aur fir mod change kerna bhool gai .

Maan started again: bhool gai ,, sorry ,, bas ho gaya tumhara excuse ,, kuch idea hei hum yahan kitne pareshan hei ,,, etni late ho gaya aur tum apni car bhi nahi leker gai ,, kya jaroorat thi cab mei jane ki thodi wait nahi ker sakti thi ? per nahi princess ka ego hurt ho jata wait kerne se .

Geet became angry on his scolding ,, she looked at Dadima once who was also feeling bad for Geet nd giving disappointed look to Maan .

Maan: ab kuch bolne ka ya jawab dene ka kast karogi ?

Geet: Nahi , nahi dena mujhe koi jawab ,, ku du mai tumhe jawab ? kisne kaha tumhe mere liye pareshan hone ko ?

Maan: Geet .

Geet: kya Geet ? haan ,, kya Geet ? tum hote kaun ho mujhe esse dantne wale ? Samjhtey kya ho tum apne aap ko...Shahashah ? ki sab kuch tumhari marji se chale ,, tumhare ishare per naache sab ?

Maan gulp down nd spoke softly: wo Dadima bhi pareshan thi .

Geet: to Dadima ko puchne do ,, tum ku enquiry office khol ker baithe ho ,, aur tum pareshan ho to mai kya karu ,, tum ku apni hukumat chala rahe ho mujh per ? mai bhi tumhari tarah ek insaan hun ,,, meri apni zindgi hei ,, pasand/na pasand hei ,,,,


Maan: Geet i know that ,, wo bas mai thoda tense tha to esse behave ker baitha ,, kaafi late ho gaya tha aur tum phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi to mai aur Dadima pareshan ho ,,,

Dadima helplessly interfere between them ,, Geet beta wo Maan khud last do din se upset hei aur hume tumhare liye tense dekha to esse react ker baithe ,, tum shant ho jao aur humare paas baito .

She tried to avoid d matter but Geet was in full mood to take Maan's class.

Geet annoyingly to Maan: pareshan aur upset ,, sab se jyada pareshan to tum kerty ho dusro ko ,, kabhi ye socha hei tumhari wajha se dusre log kitny upset hoty hei ? tumhara daily routine zara sa disturb hua aur tum upset ho gaye ,, sabko sunane lage ,, warning dene lage ,, very good ,, Maharaja ki shaan mei gustakhi ho gai .

Mr Maan Singh Khurana aapki water supply 10 min ke liye ruk gai to aap disturbed ho gaye ,, lekin wo pahale jaisi theek ho gai thi na ,,, tumhara BF spoil hua to Nakul aur Satish ko warning de daali ,, unhe daant diya lekin lunch aur dinner to theek thy na aur aaj ka BF bhi ,,

Tumhari car ke tyres deflat ho gaye ,, lekin dusra option tha na aur kuch hi der mei sab normal ho gaya ,, lekin tumhare gusse aur galtiyon ki wajha se to kisi ki zindgi hi badal gai ,, jisme kuch bhi pahale jaisa nahi ho sakta uske bare mei tum kya kahana chahoge ?

Maine phone nahi attend kiya aur Sorry bola to uska koi use nahi to tumhari sorries ka mai dish bana ker khau kya ?

Maan and Dadima understood that where she was taking d whole matter ,, he was sensing d pain in her words ,, d frustration nd bitterness of her heart was coming out ,, d turmoil which she was facing from last few days was showing its effects * Dadima sat there with heavy heart nd Maan was quietly waiting for more to come from her side ,, now he was realising her disturbed condition nd pain which forced her to distract from everything nd he was forcing her to became normal ,, if a small thing cd spoil his whole day then what about her ?

Geet: what did u say to Nakul nd satish ,, haan ,,one more mistake nd they'll be out from KV ,, tell me one thing Mr M K ,, tumhe Dadima ne kitni baar KV se nikala ? ek bhi baar nahi fir unn becharo ko essi warning ku..? wo ess ghar mei jaane kitne saalon se kam ker rahe hei aur ye sila ? huhh .

OK ,, leave all this ,, coming to d final point I'm going to clear all d reason of ur bad or upset mood nd hope for d same punishment like Nakul nd Satish .

Dadima nd Maan looked at Geet confused but Geet gave a wide meaningful smile rising her brows .

Geet: Mr Maan Singh Khurana , Nakul nd Satish did nothing , they r innocent ,, d person who spoiled ur day nd disturbed ur so called routine is me ,, me d Geet ,, i'm behind all this.

Dadima nd Maan was shocked ,, both wr looking at her with open mouth but soon a naughty smile crept on Dadima's lips ,, she was looking at Maan suppressing her laugh ,, here Maan was trying to absorb d fact that Geet did all that ,, kab aur kaise ..? then he remembered her words which she said to him 2-3 days back ,,, kahin essa na ho tum hi mujhe KV aur KC dono se bahar ker do * God !! ,, he was looking at her stunned , thinking ,,,, kya kahun ab esse ? Maan beta agar kuch kaha to fassa aur nahi kaha to bhi fassa ,, kya karu ess Devil ka mai ?

Geet: I'm waiting for ur reaction ,, i mean ur warning mr M K.

He sighed giving her a defeated nd helpless look ,, she was standing in front of him with an evil smile crossing her arms against her chest ,, he slumped down on sofa near Dadima who was looking at him nd Geet with a naughty look * Maan lean back with closed eyes ,, nothing was coming in his mind .


Precap - A lil confession ..😛

Part - 60

*
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
haila aaj tho geet super rajdhani express bangayi hai😆😆😆kitna kuch suna diya maan ko aur uska faults bhi batadiya aur tho aur jo kuch geet ne kiya wo bhi batadiya😆😆😆ab phasa maan poori tarah se
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 Bday thd per deko.. acche se dikhi ho...



😳ok
jasika08 thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update😊
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
mauaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

kisi ko main abhi tak nahi dikhi😡

aap kese dikhoge hame.. aap ka profile pic to maneet ka hai..😆😆 i know its v v poor joke.. but me aaj aap logo ko itna pakake jaugi, ki aap log khud bolege mauaa.. getlost.. so 15 days aap koi miss nahi karega..😃
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

aap kese dikhoge hame.. aap ka profile pic to maneet ka hai..😆😆 i know its v v poor joke.. but me aaj aap logo ko itna pakake jaugi, ki aap log khud bolege mauaa.. getlost.. so 15 days aap koi miss nahi karega..😃


😆😆haan jitna marzi hai karlo
mauaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

aree waah.. b'day girl badi chamak rahi hai.. dinner finish kar liya na.. ki dona k jese late late??
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago



arey waah lakshu tho chammak challo bankar aayi hai😆

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Just Like That Scribbles-Enduring Fragments- Updated scene 8,Pg 43 Apr

Okay, I agree I am getting bored and thus here to entertain myself with Maaneet. Actually, yesterday night, due to my breathlessness, i was...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-9 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

1 years ago

FATE 3 Updated P 44 on Pg 73 / 31-7-2025

Introduction Small os or ss not decided yet... might be dependent on the response 🤔 I am not sure.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 53~22.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".