Maaneet Chithra Katha~4~New thread link at index - Page 38

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

hum aap jaise luck nahi hai ki log doondh doondh kar aayenge... main tho khud invitation dekh kar bhulana padega na

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Take your time... par jaldi padhna... 😆

kya achi likhthi hoon ... Yeh Rashmi Aunty haina sab pakad lethi hai 😳

isliye tho unnone abhi tak mere purane wale stories nahi padhe 😉

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Yeh baat toh sahi hai! Maine Rashmi Di ki kitni taareef suni hai aur Locket ki bhi par kabhi DFL ki kabhi suni nahi!

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Yeh baat toh sahi hai! Maine Rashmi Di ki kitni taareef suni hai aur Locket ki bhi par kabhi DFL ki kabhi suni nahi!

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

OMG

tumne kahaa dekha ki mliog tarif karte hain..bas jinko achchhi lagti hai meri writing wahi tarif karte hain

maine to nahin dekha kisi ko reffer karte hue ki Rashmi ka work padho..agar tumhen yaad ho to link do na please

main dekhna chahti hoon ki iksne meri taarif ki

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

But i liked your story-Geet aur dev ki kahaani Maan ki zubaani

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

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HASEEN SHERNI

Geet was very sad that she had to sign the land papers, as it seemed to be the last option to her for getting devs whereabouts... But suddenly a thought struck her and she left handahaveli...

Maan was trying his level best not to think about geet ... He was angry on himself for remembering her again and again... When the bell rang and he opened the door, he was mesmerized to see a pair of brown hazel eyes... He was just immersed in their depth, that he didn't even realized when the gal came inside and closed the door behind her...

The eyes had so much of depth and pain in them that he instantly felt related to it... it was as if he was struck by some magic wand that his hands went up to remove the veil, which was covering the remaining beauty from him... but once the veil was removed, he was shocked to see geet ...

Geet pleaded to give her the agent number as now she has signed his papers... But the ego in him, didn't allowed him to do so... he was trying his level best not to think about her, and when she herself appeared before him at his room... he was hell angry on himself ... He outrightedly refused to help her saying that he does only what he wants... and if some one orders him, he doesn't obey them... is he who give orders...it "please de dijiye" by geet was melting him... but her next set of words just angered him to no extent...

Asking "please" to him, geet added that now his false ego wont be hurt! It was enough for the volcano named maan to erupt... He started accusing her that, when her brother couldn't fix the alliance, had he sent her to him, to stay overnight so that they can later marry them off... instantly geet arised her hand to slap him but stopped herself...

She told him that, what he told the other day was truth... we shouldn't attack the weak... and here u r weak... just being physically stronger is not a big deal... "aap kamzor ho akal se aur soch usse bhi choti"... Saying this, she stormed out from there, leaving a shocked maan behind...

To be contd...

If am correct, then the scene above includes the historical moment of "chup bilkul chup" ka entry... thanks rems for mentioning it...

Usually i post my edited pics in LPW thread... but as this one is related to MCK, wished to post this avi here itself...

It continues from here😃

For pms pls add the id lakpm