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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: preeti555
nice part
so maan adopted khushi and geet to know about this

Thanks for the review dear!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: -Orchid-
Awesome update

and nice CS

Thanks for the review! Happy that you liked the CS!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_
Awesme part
loved da CS
precap..interesting
can't wait

Thanks for the review!

Happy that you liked the CS!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: shalini_s
interesting.. jalebi and chippy.. cute names...

Happy that you liked the names!

Thanks for the review!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

good one dear

those names were funny

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: chavvi16
good one dear
those names were funny

😃

I think Junnie is good but we have to think and discuss about other two!

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Deelight

@Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

superkoool update... some of these do describe ur way of writin n ur FF

typin d comment fa d 2nd time

initially when i strtd readin ofc without readin d head n tail d direct update i was confused as it was Pinky who went in LJ n told Maan tat Geet was missin n so he went in pursuit of Geet... n we hd happy wala ending... bt reading this was sooo damn confusin i hd 2 go n read d chapters bak n forth thn read ur instructions somwer in d middle n finally understoood...
Nw focussin on DP . . .
Khushi sudden entry was indeed a biiig suprise neva hd i expected her character wld b lyk d one u hv sketched...read ur character sketch n still was not able 2 predict ur story... 'l keep tat hunt on..
Geet jealous of khushi

hahaaa tat wz nyc bt confusion inti jaldi clear kar diya
nw dey wld become lyk dis

Maan n Khushi bondin

n Maan n Arnav bondin was jz awesom...d way dey interacted mindblowin. . . luvin tis story.. Do add loadzzz of masala n ol.. bt Khushi showin attitude 2 my ASR😲 not acceptable.. if possi try writin a vice-versa scene as well😆
eagerly lukin forward 2 d bondin between Arnav n our very own Motormouth

😛😛 Pinky n Khushi cute lil story wz fab.. chippy n jalebi... n nw i hv become a fan of ur name giving seriously . . !! motormouth,AB,Baby n nw chippy n jalebi wat not..👏
n

bt u noe somthin

P.S:ab to nxt update jaldi dena hi padega 😉

Edited by Deelight - 11 years ago

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

FINALLY THE QUESTION ABOUT KHUSHI ANSWERED

I TOO WAS WONDERING WHERE KHUSHI CAME FROM

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#309

part 9
awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet is at KC...
and Khushi and Pinky's convo was so funny...
oh that was Arnav...
chippy and jalebi names were awesome...
especially chippy...
so this is how Maan and Khushi are related...
nice...
cont soon dear...