MG - SS ~BEKASI~ # 2 LAST PART pg/13 || April 20th || - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi sad update. Poor Maaneet. HAte dadi! Geet had twins bt lost one baby! so sad! Maan gng o London, well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb dear
maan got to know everything.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls cont soon...
want to read how he would now react...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
finally everything fell in place but d condition u described its very rare in case of twins but brilliantly written
so at least thy hv one baby alive 😃😃😃😃😃😃
nd maan took geet safely wid him to london
finally tht stupid dadi told it was her planning hw low tht woman cud stoop to destroy d life of her grndchild 😡😡😡😡😡
do cont soon😃 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg last Part?? So sad its ending! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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last part but still will be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haan yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

OMG..


dadima she was all the time she was asking for the child and she herself killed the baby.. how disgusting was she.. it was not love or fear but mere nonsense of wanting maan to stay with them leaving his wife... and such people does not require anyone as they only thing about them.


and Maan wat did he do.. ishita was right and for the first time i liked tat she was saying all tat.. Geet was just a child and was not even into anything like this and when she got some love she was selfish for it.. but she did not hurt anyone.. she only feared of losing maan.. i did hate her first but now when we see all the circumstances its only geet who is at loss..wat did maan, roop or dadima lose nothing as they were only selfish in all and it was only geet who was at loss





your comments let me type and update! only you can do this to me di no one else can do that!! thanks for making every story of mine special with your comments ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_jyotika

lovely update

so i guessed right...it was dadima who did this ghatiya kam😡

I jst love Ishi and Ricky for their support...loved the line when ricky said " gar kuch nahi hua toh hum dono hai Geet ke saath"






thanks for the lovely comment <3
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LAST PART

After 6 years,


Armaan come here ... Maan called his six year old son who was busy with his homework books. Never did Maan see Ammy so much involved in studies, the little boy didn't even look at him instead dipped his head and began to scribble. Geet smiled looking at the sight, she handed Ammy the glass of juice and ordered him to have it. Without any complaints he drank the juice and continued to write.



Yeh tumhare bete ko kya hua?? Maan asked sitting beside Ammy ... yaha isko Firnagi ladkiyan pasand aane lage hai, he wants to go to the birthday party of his classmate ... She glared Ammy who made an innocent face ... Mamma I finished my work can I go now?? He showed his book to Geet, she had no option than agreeing coz she promised him that she will defo send him if he finishes work.



He ran into the bathroom seeing Geet nod ... She giggled and gave him change of clothes. Maan was just watching things happen ... he just came back from a business tour that too for a week and here his son's advancements were just going to the other level. He held his wife by waist and complained, Geet chalo hum India chale jaate hai, I don't trust this boy anymore ... I am damn sure he will leave us once he reaches teenage, phir hamara kya hoga??



She kissed his nose, pulling Maan holding his tie Geet whispers in his ear ... Then lets make a baby girl ... Teenage ke baad bhi hum usse apne paas rakh sakte hai,



Really?? Saying he leaned to kiss her when the bathroom door clicked open, Ammy stood there holding his dress ... Mamma help me wear them, he demanded closing his eyes not wanting to witness the closeness of his parents.



Dekha hum dono iske saamne aise kaam karenge toh yehi aise hi karega Geet, he hugged her from behind while she giggled bending down slipping the T Shirt ... chodo mujhe Maan, she wriggled in his arms who was inhaling her scent trying to control his libido ... not wanting to kiss her in front of his chota pataka.



Ever since Armaan was born Geet changed ... She became a matured woman, probably beyond her age. She understood her mistakes, she understood what exactly wanted from her. She requested Maan to call his family to London, though it was hard on him to forgive dadima and his mother he did as Geet wanted him to. She accepted his family and even asked for forgiveness making Dadima even more guilty for what she did.




Geet had given the complete responsibility of Ammy to dadima hoping that would give her happiness and she never regretted the decision. Medically she had problems and she had to wait for next pregnancy as the initial miscarriage led to some internal changes in Geet.



A month back the doctor checked her and said they can have the second child, but then Maan's busy schedule and his work made him stay away from his wife.



Ammy smiled at his father who was getting restless ... Dad get a room, I gotta go leave mom ... he spoke in a typical Britishers accent. He looked at his son widening his eyes ... Ammy call me papa not dad



How boring ... no ways I am gonna do it, he replied leaving the room. Dadima told Geet that she will accompany Ammy to the party, she sighed looking at her son.



Not wasting time Maan closed the door to pounce at his wife, her moans, whimpers, screams ... everything pleasured him as he made love to her in a carnal way. He actually binned the protection box going nostalgic for the time they fought ... the misunderstandings disturbed him.



He didn't know how deep he reached into her ... While she yelled his name with the fatigue, she was never so much pleased with his love making. His passion seemed to increase with their years of togetherness ... His closeness, his love seemed to be a bliss for her.



Geet cuddled into Maan still lying naked under the spread ...they heard the room being knocked, she rushed into the washroom ... Maan slipped into his vest and tracks ... Aaraha hoon Ammy, just wait he said opening the door.



He saw the glint in Ammy's eyes and got confused ... Kya hua baby?? Why are you so happy?? The little boy turned showing him the girl who came home at that late night ... Dad she is Angela and I thought we could play for sometime, actually she met me in the party and she said she is alone home with a caretaker ... her parents are on business tour.



Maan went speechless and roared ... Geet ... Geet, he called his driver and ordered him to drop the girl in her home.



Ammy got scared hearing his father's voice, he had never seen Maan so angry for anything. Geet came wearing her clothes ... we are leaving to India, kal subah tak luggage ki packing ho jaana chahiye



Lekin Maan ... keh diya maine, and I am not going to listen to anything,


arey lekin hua kya?? She repeated only to get a glare from Maan who walked away in anger.



Baby what happened?? Did you say something?? She caressed Ammy's face to which he narrated what happened. Geet fell laughing on the story, only her husband can go angry over such issues. Ammy didn't understand what was wrong with Geet ... Mom what happened?? He asked


Just make up your mind, we are leaving to India tomorrow



What happened mom?? Why is dad so angry? Though Ammy was confused he had to agree to his mother at the end. She gulped hard now ... how will she speak to Maan now?? She knows his temperament level, she had to take it slow.



As she stepped into the study room, she saw Maan standing by the window ... Gathering with what he had seen. His Ammy was going out of control at such tender age, how will he manage with him when he will grow older?? He wondered inhaling sharply.



Kuch nahi hoga baba, main hoon na ... Ammy maan gaya, we will leave for India ... Ab toh gussa chod do na Maan ... Geet fed him food telling him through eyes that it was ok. He wanted his son to have all the moral values, he wanted him to grow in the nicest way. That was the only thing he needed and he had to take this decision for his well being ... His son ... his pride, he was dreaming about him taking over his work and business. Like Geet understood his mind, she spoke ... Aapko nahi lagta ki aap bohut dur ki soch rahe hai?? Ammy is still 6 years old baba, itna bada bhi nahi hua ... Aap baat karlo usse ek baar sab thik ho jayega, there was something about his wifey ... The woman he could adore all the time by just sitting with her.



They sat down on the floor resting their bodies against the wall, grasping their togetherness and probably after a long time Ammy came inside to see his father in the lap of his mother, he joined beside Maan hugging him ... I am sorry baby, he kissed his son's forehead who cuddled into him.




That's ok Dad ... I love you, he kissed his father's arm which were stronger than a metal. All three cuddled on the floor slipping into sleep.



They returned India, and like Maan wanted Ammy became an obedient child who would address his parents only as Mamma and papa rather than mom and dad. He would call them in Indian way only when needs something.



After ten years,


Armaan is 16 now and Meher 10


Meher, ill drop you ... Tu khud se kahi nahi jayegi, Armaan said in a serious tone to which she ran towards her father and hugged him ... Papa dekho na bhai mujhe kahi bhi akele nahi jaane dete she complained. Maan smiled at his son feeling proud for the way he is taking care of his sister, Armaan has changed so much after they returned to India. He would even help Maan in his office work, take care of his sister and her studies.



If your brother wants to drop you, then let him na baby ... waise bhi tum dono ladke complain hamse karte ho but at the end you both patch up ... Sorry I am out, saying he left to his wife who was busy in the room getting ready for the party. He kissed her forehead and hugged her ... Thanks for giving me two wonderful kids, life without you wouldn't have been complete. Geet giggled pulling Maan even closer.


this last part is a dedication to shoba di ... i still remember the phone call she made that evening giving best of gaalis to Geet for her behaviour ... she was in the bus travelling to college and reading the update, that very evng she had given a great comment on phone😆


actually the names Armaan and Meher ... she uses so i thought when i am writing for her then these names will give her happiness ❤️ like i said, you are a driving power didu ... your comments drive me to write more ... love you foreva!!



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