MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread-5- UPDATED Pt 41/Pg 136/ 21st Mar. .. ... . - Page 79

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomly Awesome muahhh update yar:)
Jhappiisss yarooo:)
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part 40
awesome dear...
lovely...
GS is getting adjusted in the KC life...
and Maan Geet scene was so nice...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Sasha and her jealously yeh kabhi nahi sudharne wali
But geet got a frnd in manish-a
And loved geet and maan's lunch's scene
Continue soon
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Hello friends,,,, Lakshu,priya,lily,mauaa,dona,indu,rashmi,
sona and mona...🤗






Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 41


Manish-a and Geet got up to go and when they passed Sasha and Tasha's table Sasha stopped them * Manish rolled his eyes and sighed ,, he knew that She deliberately stopped them .

Sasha: so Ms GS u got a good hike after that small temp job ,, must say u r very talented to grab opportunities ,, in a shot ur in KC as a manager .

GS: What do u want to say Ms Sasha ?

Sasha: u r taking too much benefits of Khurana's charity .

GS: charity ?

Manish: Sasha mind ur language , she is manager in KC .

Sasha: from how many days and don't forget where was she ?

GS: i was also a manager there Ms sasha.

Sasha: that co is nothing in front of KC , they work for us .

GS: not for u Ms , for KC and don't forget u r also an employee here and for ur kind information i'm qualified for my work .

Sasha : but u got this job as a charity , a compensation for ur injury not bcoz of ur capability ,, i knew Khurana's from yrs but i didn't hear ur name from MK ,, from how many days u know Khuranas ?

Manish: this is office Sasha not ur living room ,, no personal talks here ,, come GS , lunch time is over * he dragged Geet from there to avoid more hot conversation * Geet became lil hyper , she didn't like that she raise finger on her capability .

Geet came back in her office but she was annoyed and feeling very low ,, who is she nd what she think herself ? Why she was talking about so many things ? What was this charity and compensation ? Rest of d day she was in a foul mood though she worked and tried to occupy her mind but Sashs's words wr hitting her.

At eve she got Maan's msg ** go home and msg me when u reached ** she came out from office and her car was waiting for her , she didn't want to sit in but helplessly sat in ,, Sasha's words pricked her and when d car was coming out from d gate Sasha and Tasha witnessed her * this thing fuelled Sasha's anger ,, this mare girl getting to much pampering from Khurana's.

Geet reached KV nd msg Maan ** reached ** Nakul gave her water ,,, she asked about Dadima and he replied that she had gone to attend d residential welfare asso. Meeting * he handed her coffee mg and she came out in d lawn ,, sat on d chair thinking on d whole discussion which she had with Sasha in office ** why everything is so difficult for me ? Why Babaji landed me in such situation ,, this job suited me but it is raising questions on my self respect * they wr forcing me to stay with them that's why i unwilling accepted this ,,, kya maine galat kiya ? Aaj mere pass koi essa nahi jisse mai ye puch saku ki jo maine kiya wo sahi hei ya galat ? mai kya karu ... ye log mujhe dur jaane nahi de rahe aur yahan rahane se bahot se sawal uth saktey hei .

She was lost in her thoughts when Maan came there after searching her in d room ,, her coffee remained untouched , her plastered leg was spreading down , other leg was folded and circled with her arms , placing her chin on her knee she was looking in dark * Maan sensed that something bothering her ,, he sat near her on d pool chair but she didn't realise his presence * he placed his hand on her shoulder uttering her name .. Geet * with a jerk she came in sense ,, looking at him she asked.

Geet: tum ,, tum kab aaye ?

Maan: jab tum apni prob mei khoi thi .

Geet: prob ,,, nahi essa kuch nahi hei ,, wo akele thi to yahan aa gai , Dadima bahar gai hein .

Maan: lekin ye thandi coffee to kaha rahi hei ki kuch to baat hei jo tumhe pareshan ker rahi hei Geet.

Geet looked at d mug and gave a sheepish smile ,, wo bhool gai .

Maan: Geet , kya baat hei ,, i know something bothering u ,, ye kaisi dosti hei tumhari jo apni prob share kerne nahi deti ,, ya mai ess layak nahi ki mujhse share ker sako ?

Geet: nahi Maan plzz essa matt socho , mai kisi se kya kahun jab mujhe hi kuch samajh nahi aa raha ?

Maan: essa kya hei jo tumhe pareshan ker raha hei ? Tum mujhe share ker sakti ho Geet .

Geet: agar baat tumse hi related ho tab ?she gave a painful look .

Maan: tab bhi ,, tum mujhe khuch bhi kaha sakti ho ,, accha ya bura jaisa tum mahasoos karo ,, i'll take everything happily.

Geet : kya tum bhi apne dil ki baat mujhse share ker sakte ho ? kya tum mujh per etna trust kerty ho ?

Maan: haan Geet ,,, he replied firmly.

Geet: mujhse related bhi ?

He shuddered and feared ,, why she was asking like this ?

Maan: haan Geet , lekin tum esse ku puch rahi ho ? kya meri kisi baat ne tumhe hurt kiya hei ?

Geet: Maan , tum mere liye etna sab kuch ku ker rahe ho ?

Maan: maine kya kiya hei ,, kuch bhi to nahi Geet ?

Geet: ye job ,, KV mei hi rahana ,, Ku ? I save u and ur client and u did a lot for that , means u bore all med expenses , but why this ?

Maan: kya mera aur tumhara rishta ess accident se hi hei ?

Geet: aur kya rishta hei humare beech jiske liye tum aur Dadima etna sab karo ?

Maan: tum janti ho , fir ku puch rahi ho ? Geet mai apni jaan bhi de du tab bhi us gunah ka bojh kam nahi hoga ,, meri ek galti ne tumhara sab kuch cheen liya .

Geet: mera to kuch tha hi nahi Maan ,, wo log mere hote to mujhe maartey nahi ,, lekin kya ye care aur job us gunah ki keemat hai , charity ?

Maan: Geet ,,,, plzz essa nahi hei ,,, he held her shoulders ,, tumhe essa ku laga ? Kisi ne tumse kuch kaha ? Charity ,, keemat ye sab kya hei ? jawab do Geet , kisine kuch kaha kya? Subaha tak sab theek tha to ab ye baaten ku ? bolo Geet.

Geet: nahi,, wo .. bas ..

Maan: bas Geet ,, no more .. ek baat yaad rakhna Geet ,, ehasaan tumne kiya hei hum per ,, sukun ki do saanse tumne di hei hume ,, es ghar mei khushiya tum laai ho aur ess sab ke liye mujhe khud ko bhi daav per lagana pada na to laga dunga ,,, ek baar tumhe khoker sab kuch kho diya ,ab nahi ,, mai ab tumhe kahi nahi jane dunga .

His grip on her shoulders was becoming stronger with his words * d determination in his words describing something else and his red painful eyes was showing d fire of repentance in which he was burning .


Precap - stay in ur limits Sasha...



Part - 42
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958972/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-6-updated-pt-50th-pg-122-31st-march?pn=4


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first for the first time


Wow awesome update
sasha is like kutte ki dum hamesha tedi ki tedi
isse toh sirf ek mouka chahiye kisiko bhi taunt marne ka
lekin geet ne bhi usse palat ka kya jawab diya
zyada hi par nikal aaye hai uss sasha ke jab maan ko pata chalega na muh ke bal girgi
abhi se sambhal ja sasha
but bcoz of her geet is feeling bad nd seeing geet sad maan is feeling bad
but usse shak ho raha hai ki geet ko kisi ne kuch kaha hai iss liye woh aisi baate kar rahi hai woh bhi itne time baad
nd when geet question him why he is doing all this he answered truly

ek baar tumhe khoker sab kuch kho diya ,ab nahi ,, mai ab tumhe kahi nahi jane dunga .

in this this maan confess his feelings but pata nahi dono kab yeh samjhenge
waiting for more

Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
arre babbie.. kaha gum ho gyii ho?
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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent part..
sasha wont she get bored of spying..
her words hurted geet
n she is thinking about herself
maan asking the problem..
n he poured out the reason
he didnt confess his love but his every words depicted how much important geet is to him..
Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago

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