THE LOCKET (19) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 110

Originally posted by: kjn12

Superb avi..
This ff would always be one of the best 1.. 😃

Originally posted by: mans22

part 78 finally both the couples together. haaye romantic and the dance.

part 79 omg megha is going to be sad for sometime maybe for a few minutes cuz her brother's are gonnna make things alright. n sherni jealous.

part 80 talking about what they want and like all so lovey dovey.

part 81 haay me blushing dont know how to put my words here.awesome.

part 82 hmm after effect the shy geet back again.

Originally posted by: rashidha

hi..i'm new to IF..i like this story..plz can u tell me where i can read u r full story..i want read all the parts of this story

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Geet is so understanding, very smartly she pretended to be busy so that Tara could have her little sister Megha get her ready for her engagement n create some memories. But that whole Lakshmi part and Geet jealous was hilarious, Dev toh bach gaya but Maan couldnt save himself from his admirer and Geet saw him holding Lakshmi in his arms and possessive side popped up.

Jealous Geet was new n so it was treat to read, its true it has always been Maan who was jealous of everything when it came to her but seeing her possessive side for him brought a grin on my face. He never loses any chance to do some romance n steal her kisses, and jhalli Geet toh dint even remember she was jealous when he simply wrapped her in his arms. Accha hai Maan would find it difficult to melt her when she would be real wali angry at him, ek do jhappis n pappis n Geet ka gussa gone.

Dadima-Tara-Geet moments were heart warming but the chalu Dadi saw the kala tika already on Geet n understood very well, she must be proud of Maan n surprise too seeing the man who was so silent and now doing everything even before she could do it. He was always a romantic by heart just he never got got the chance to show it before but now having Geet is his life he just doesnt miss any chance to express it.

Geet is truly an angel n in spite of not having her own family with her and just Darji by her side on this special day she created n formed new relationships n a family of hers with everyone with her simplicity n compassionate side. Today she had Mother in Maithili, Brother in Kabir n Sujal, Sister in Pinky n Megha n Father in Mr.Mehra and also her prof. who were always there since her colleges days and even Nakul n her neighbor. She had a family who she could proudly called as her own by her side just cos she accepted others as her own with the golden heart she got. And when she saw her Tara with her parents she immediately send Megha to her to have Tara's family complete just like hers was. Her gestures are also just like her simple n heart touching, she won my heart yet again today. And Maan was in black again? He has grown possessive for this color too it seems, ab toh Geet is forever his n still he prefers it as his lucky color or what but kuch bhi Maan Thud toh mil gaya bande ko. Anyways the chori chupke niharna n ankhon ankhon mei baatein karna was adorable n seeing Maan n Dev so happy n dancing felt the whole suffer n trouble they both had in their love journey worth it.

Maan being a big bro in few minutes vowed to not get engaged before Dev just cos he dint wanted to live a happy life where as his younger brother be sad added to list of another sacrifices making me admire him again. His silent promises to Geet while exchaning rings which she returned with her own promises was typical of them being a silent couple but then that makes them unique n outstanding. Loved seeing both the couples in love finally reaching their destination so happy holding hands n glowing. The blessings they got are going to be last with them forever n the family has just grown more bigger now making it a gig happy family n good to see Geet's hostel friends n meeting Maan congratulating the couple. And enjoyed reading Dadima's matchmaking eyes getting a bit late in seeing Maaneet as a couple n Dr.Siddharth bitting her in it. And seeing her eyeing Sid n Maithili makes me think she should actually open a matrimonial company or something, where she could happily do her matchmaking business, she will definitely make a good money out of it.

And the ending with a serene Maaneet was all it needed to make this update more beautiful. It was like the final touch to a a beautiful engagement scene. Searching of Maan, yearning to see him even when they were together all long in engagement party n the hug was just too romantic n the song you choose is one of my favorite.

The anxiety you set in me with your words throught out the whole Kabir part was really fabulous. I could really feel his pain, anguish, hatred, hurt, restlessness, helplessness everything he felt reached to me too. I wont say he is wrong completely, thought even Megha isnt at fault in this but his mind wont let him think rationally right now when he has seen the video of his own mother being forced by a man who is her uncle. She escaped from his clutches was her luck and Kabir has seen his mother suffering all long, first by his own father n then a man like Brij who ruined their life completely. She was not just shattered n broken mentally, physically n emotionally but her will to live had also been dead. He had seen his mother dying everyday n Geet trying to bring her back to life with the help of KF peoples so accepting Megha knowing her uncle has ruined his mother's life would definitely be tearing him b/w his love for Megha n mother's every suffering. His mind would only scream justice which his mother deserves n that is making him blind to the fact that Megha wouldnt be happy at all even if she gets her family back with all the luxuries in life. The place she has for Kabir is irreplaceable and Kabir is failing to see that or doesnt want to see that. The whole engagement party mood had suddenly changed into anguish n hatred for Kabir and the song you chose was just depicting his pain, restlessness n helplessness more. He too deserved to be happy for what all he had been enduring n hopefully he would be able to think calmly n rationaly n wouldnt rush in taking decisions. But i also feel that he should see what Megha had suffered cos of Brij, its not only his mother whom he harmed but even Megha was troubled cos him, he was the one declaring her dead to her parents n making her live a life of an orphan so Kabir should actually take revenge for both the ladies in his life. In all this no one is going to be happy now, nor Kabir-Megha, neither Maan n Khuranas who had been Megha's family n niether Thakurs. That monster of a man has really ruined everyone's lives along with his own n is now set to ruin Geet's too. I just hope you have given the greatest of the punishment to him Avi. I want him to suffer bit by bit unlike Suraj n his father who diea very easily.

You had vowed to make your readers cry n isliye just after Kabir's painful part u gave us 3 girls's past life who were missing their mothers warmth. One was Kabir who had his mother by his got her love support n she even sacrificed many things for him but when time came to protect her he was a lost child in his own set of friends ignoring his mother. And on other side we have these girls, Geet who dint even got the chance to see her own mother n nor the chance to call her as maa n missed her all her life toh other side were Tara n Megha, Tara who had her mother by her side but she was in her own world of depression n fight forgetting that her daughter might need her, despite having her mother it was equal to not having her and Megha who wasnt orphan at the first place lived a life of an orphan for 21 years missing her parents n cursing her fate n calling herself as unlucky to her parents who happen to throw her in river. But in a way i felt good to hear that at least her childhood wasnt ruined completely, at one side Geet n Tara who were totally deprived of mother's warmth Megha did had Kiran's love. I could feel each of their pain n longings for their mother. Though the part start was in a happy way it ended up being upsetting but sad part is Megha dint heard Tara's side of story or i dont know how much she heard. But the end was sweet, Geet giving Tara to have her time with her Sister.

Thankfully last part of the update wasnt saddy saddy. Seeing tossing n turning even on a comfortable sofa missing the hard surface or Thudlicious made me laugh out loud, god the choice of words were funny. So she finally gave up and did what Maan was already confident about. And the way he picked up in her arms the moment she on terrace says he was waiting on door only for her. Loved his teasing n her pretending that she dint came for him n soon got jealous at the mention of some cutie, aajkal Geet kuch jyada hi jealous ho rahi hai. I actually liked how Maan's confidence in her won, both truly cant sleep without having each other in arms. But the oops moment was definitely her coming to him with in her hight dress, Maan toh kaam se jaanawala hai. Geet will make him forget all types of sweetie n cuties now. And what is the full form of BB2B n now HUBB2B??

There very few stories n specially the intimate which doesnt make you feel unconfortable or awkward at all and this is one of them for sure. In fact the way you write it makes it beautiful n divine. The update started with some teasings session later getting closed but again Geet's shyness over wearing a skimpy nightdress for the first time in front of Maan came b/w their passion making Maan back out but with respect accepting that she is still shy n giving her the time to calm down n one thing he knew was she would come once her shyness would fled but that dint happen n he started talking to ease the situation for her. And when slowly her hesitation faded she came by him still not comletely putting her head on his shoulders which she does everytime yet he was satisfied with the progression and simply continued to talk with her n when she finally said the reason of her syhness his confession came as stunning. He had waited for her for 5 long years n he is still ready for it but now she needed to know what exactly he feels for her n how passionately he wants her. His simple n straight forward confession was amazingly written n it made the whole update more beautiful and a lot mature. He could have shared this feelings with her before too when they confessed their feelings for each other but he dint cos he knew she isnt ready for it n more over time wasnt right too but now he had that right to express since they were engaged n soon to be married too n every couple in love goes to through this phase n Geet had the right to know it being his would be to be. I loved how he dint stopped n expressed without hestination even when she tried stopping him n with an authority to let her know what her would be husband feels for her n dying to make her as his forever n also letting her know that he too wants her to be as free as he is this relationship. It takes two to make a relationship work n create memories n as much he might love her n take the first step she too needs to be equal in it n move forward n sometime express too making him feel special not hiding from him like she does when he is asleep but with a right n make him feel belong like he does to her always and as it is he has given her the right to decide b/w them which itself speaks volumes of how much he respect her n care for her feelings. And specially when he called a Dr Kutty aka Cutie to know about what was bothering her n cleared her fears directly speaking to her so she just doesnt come for him cos he wants it to even when she is scared n shy was really admiring. The understanding, care, concern and more important the patience he has shown while making her understand things just made me fall for him all over yet again. They both needed this time alone n talk it out before taking a step forward in their relationship which they both had to do it together n since Geet is too naive n innocent to understand intimate aspect of a couple relationship he made the best of the time he got with her today n explained that sharing a close relationship with the one you love is not shameful to fear about. With the simple words you described the maturity it made the whole update special n beautiful too. And seeing her accepting his thoughts n feelings his naughtiness was back teasing her n loving her which he loves to do and to start with it he asked what all she likes about him n when she started having feelings for him which was one thing he dint knew yet even after getting engaged with her. Loved how she playfully answered him teasing him in the process n the smile he had at the end after knowing n getting her to speak her feelings n open up, specially that she likes his closeness too and the smile he had was charming and the shayris that followed were cherry on the cake. The Nakul tadka b/w the bit of tension, teasing, understanding n knowing each other was the best sacchi. Cant believe Geet actually laughed at the double meaning of Nakul's sentence made or should say she thought of the double meaning instead of the sraight one, she too has many shades to her kabhi shy toh kabhi bold.

Today they have taken a small step forward in their relationship but together with no hesitations and barriers b/w them of shyness. The acceptance by Geet for his passion was beautifully written and it was super duper hawtt, passionate n blush-licious update Avi.

Geet is really jhalli she thinks why she is having such ahem ahem thoughts n responses even after spending last night with him being close to him for the first time in an more intimate way but she needs to know that such feelings are going to grow deeper in her with time she would keep spending with him like this in future are to never leave her n her whole being. Her morning moments with Maan were adorable

PINKY... I wanna bang her head on something. Itni mushkil se Maan made Geet understand with so much patience and this Pinky ruined it with her one word shameless. Wow pura confess that banda did was so pure n divine n any girl would melt in those feelings n would grow thousands fold respect for her lover and Geet did too but Pinky's some non sense words made her confused once again. Geet in heart knows that whatever she n Maan shared was pure n just love n people in love do express it but now the thought of crossing her boundary before marriage has started taking its root it her brain again and hopefully she would talk it out with Maan herself. Its clear she dint regret anything even when Pinky said all those things n that made me feel relieved n proud of Geet too. Her confidence in her own and Maan's feelings n love is still intact n that is enough but the rules set by society is again hanging b/w them which i feel Geet needs to take it out.

So the avoiding Maan has started again all thanks to Pinky. Poor him had more than his usual breakfast n tea waiting for her to serve him n she show up but dint miss the chance of drooling on him n staring at him chupke chupke unaware to him. And wahi hua which was obvious, Maan is hurt by her avoidance and thinks he overstep his limits which is definitely not true. And in his impulse pagal went to site seeing even on a holiday which just says how much he is hurt n sad now with her behavior. Though glad Tara noticed the silent exchange with Maaneet n sensed some tension n send Geet behind Maan.

That was so crazy of Maan to think fish knows his name n they sound like Geet when she had called out to him, banda is pura pagal. But Geet was no less crazy too, did she actually thought that Maan was in some danger and went to save him in those too deep of the water? And the pic of Maan holding Geet in his arms in water, hayee first encounter of Maaneet in GHSP n that was hot n so close, me in GHSP n Maaneet land. Back to update, seems like Maan has totally taken Geet's habit of talking to Babaji, i found that too cute, sangat ka asar of Geet on Maan. Good to see Maan smiling again at her stupidity n on his silent mission to get his doe back to him by herself. Just like she ignored him he did too n she was left craving seeing a shirtless Maan. Good going, she really needed to come out of her shell. Liked how Maan stood determined n dint move from his place in spite of the feelings of wanting her n waited for her to make the move for she ignored him the whole morning making him confuse n hurt in the process but she is really one step ahead. She went close to get her dupatta n in process lost her balance having Maan hold her n both lost themselves in each other again but this time Maan controlled n step away cos he deserved to know her reasons for what she did in morning. But Geet herself being confused n shy again gave away her feelings through eyes without realizing that Maan read her confusion without her explaining it, she is lucky to have him who understands her silent talkings too. But i do feel she needs to talk it out loud n clear at least now, her hesitations might some day ruin her sweet relationship though Maan understand her too well but still sometimes expressing is needed too. And silent sorry through kiss was all they needed to get back to normal but i dint feel Maan over reacted this time. But the last part was hilarious, just burst out laughing with that comment of Maan's but it was really nice to see him happy again. He looks best when he smile or laughs freely. After a blush-licious update this was full of tensions, hurt, understanding, making up again n finally ending with naughty Khurana.

-Sanjana!