**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #24 UPDATING

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

ok mujhe bata which part ...ill try ..😃

Ek min me btati hun.. Ruk 😃

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Write the first 2 parts..
1 hoshiyarpur events.. Overview of anything and everything happened in hoshiyaarpur..but in nearly 10 lines..
2. Office and outhouse events..just a mention to their cute little fights till pee loon events in 10 lines at the most.. Just mention the main events..bas

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

yrr yeh hoshyaarpur wala rasika wala part hai na ...

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

are nahi..its the start of the show..

the things to be included can be

entry of devtara n family..

marriage fixed..

maan n geet's frequent meets

marriage nd after that everything happened..

geet knowing about dev's fraud..

her fighting for the baby..

till the part where maan saves her from brij and she gets brij arrested

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

har event ke baare me nhi likhna..

just the things u think were important..

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: -misty--love-
are nahi..its the start of the show..
the things to be included can be
entry of devtara n family..
marriage fixed..
maan n geet's frequent meets
marriage nd after that everything happened..
geet knowing about dev's fraud..
her fighting for the baby..
till the part where maan saves her from brij and she gets brij arrested

tou itna bara likhne ki kya zarorat thi ...😆😆

seedha seedha bolti na ...GANDA wala part ...🤢

mien try karongi ..

acha sun ...can i explain it all in a poem

like ill explain n mention every of these events but can i do that in a poetic way ...

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

jaise dekh..i have written about the songs..an overview..i know acha nahi hai..but isse idea dekhle ki kaise likhna hai..

but write about both parts in just 10-11 lines..thats all..

ye maine dance ke liye likha hai in about 5-6 lines😆

haan but ye padhke meri writing ka mazaak nahi udana😎

The world halts for the maaneetians when they see maaneet grooving on different songs. Be it brisk and zesty kurbaan hua or soft and smooth shukraan allah. It is maaneet's magic, their astonishing and breathtaking moves that make every song look like tailor made for them..such is the charisma that even after four years, these sequences are alive and special to every maaneetian..

Edited by -misty--love- - 11 years ago

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

tou itna bara likhne ki kya zarorat thi ...😆😆
seedha seedha bolti na ...GANDA wala part ...🤢

mien try karongi ..

acha sun ...can i explain it all in a poem
like ill explain n mention every of these events but can i do that in a poetic way ...

yaar..poetic way..

dekh..if u want to write in poetic way then u'll have to write all parts..😆

kyunki doosre writers poetic way me nhi likh payenge na..

so adha kaam koi karega n adha koi..so ek symmetry to honi chaiye na..

so if possible..please saara angrazi me likh de..pleaseee..pleasee😒