MG*Bhula dena#2..Part 15/page 7..24th June - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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owe .. welcome back sissy ..
cant wait for you to update ...

and hope are all healthy and good ...
will be waiting ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Friends...I know u all must be gussa on me for disappearing like this... I am Extremely sorry for that, but kya karu ek k baad ek exams, project n all... From onwards updates will b slow guys :(...i m sorry again.

Though yeh part maine type kia hai but not happy with it kyunki i'm feeling ki itne dino baad jitna bhi little bit improve kia tha from first part to last one ...sab gaya😕😕😕. N agar koi mistake ho jaye toh plz guys ignore it cz half of the storyline main bhul gayi hu:(:( n joh future k liye socha tha woh bhi bhul gayi hu😕😭...sholly but still i'll try to improve.😳...
N at last... Thank u so much guys for waiting...supporting.
Luv u all❤️
Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz read the note above😊...
Guys its request to look for previous part otherwise iss part me kya hoying will not understand 😆
Part 14

Part 15

I will never help you Maan...you liar. What I did? Why are you cursing me...? You didn't tell me whom you love... Maan the cheater. Adi I told you na I can't tell you now... Yea...I know why you can't tell me...Adi turns his face other side giving maan glare. Because I know the girl...WHAT!!!!!!Maan almost screamed out of shock... Yes I know...how? When...where? i mean how you get to know? Maan restlessly asked.. Because I saw you hugging Geet ma'am in front of Sasha... Hearing this Maan almost faints... And from onwards I am not helping you... Adi left saying so. Though Maan and Sasha were shocked with the hug scene...The most horrified was Adi who also witnessed the scene. Maan actually love Sasha and he lied to him. And he stupid chooses Geet Handa for jealousy rule...*uff yeh misunderstandings.🤔*

Geet was furiously typing on her laptop... working on some project with great concentration when her ringing mobile screamed for her attention. It was private number... She wondered but any way picked up the call...and freezes for a moment when she heard the voice of other side person. She is hearing his voice after almost six years... Hello... she whispered... after a pause getting his reply Why you called me now? She replied. Ohh so just because Dadima called you...you contacted me? Look... I don't want to talk to you...so just never call me again with thud she placed her phone down. She was happy minute ago thinking he finally called her but all her hopes died the moment he said he called because Dadima told him. And Dadima ... she sighed in frustrate...Doesn't she told her not to contact him, still she did. She has to make her understand no one can change her now.

Dad, I am going Mumbai tomorrow.. And you can't stop me this time. Sameera declared her demand in front of her dad. Sameera... It's not that I don't want to see you with Maan.. I just want to spend some time with my daughter... Her dad almost pleads to her. .Dad please... do not start the drama again. I am going and that's final Mr Kapoor just helpless in front of her...so he just nodded...but sameera never waits for his consent she already had left.

Maan was restless since he got to know that Adi knows whom he love* me rolling eyes 😆* he tried to talk Adi but he avoided him whole day... he was just passing by Geet's cabin but what he saw just shattered his world... A man was hugging Geet from behind... And she was quit... He just left from there not getting anything. They can be friends.. but... He tried to think in every way but...millions of questions was running in his mind...but no answer.

Next day, Breakfast table was silent as Dadima too quit today.. Geet didn't ask anything to her about the call. She couldn't predict that what's happening in Geet's mind. Dadima could clearly see something is going on in her mind, she is disturbed. Before Dadima could ask anything to her Geet replied Dadima, I don't want to talk about it... But geet kab tak, you have to face it beta... you have to move on... have to decide something about your life Geet tightly closed her eyes to prevent herself going back to those memory. Geet aap... Dadima gasped as she saw Geet's hand was pierced with glass Bass!!!! Stop it dadima... Kuch nahi badlega dadima... kabhi nahi. Kisi ke wapas aa jane se main wapas purani geet nahi ban sakti...Woh Geet kab ki marr chuki dadima... Saying so Geet just left table... Geet..!!!! Maan screamed as he saw Geet was almost getting unconscious.. He came Handa mansion for Geet's sign and plus he was worried about the guy he saw with her yesterday... Out of jealousy he couldn't stop himself for coming early to Handa mansion. When he came HM he witnessed the madness in Geet. It was confirm that she is in love with that man... as she said she can't b same as before...

Maan picked her up; Dadima showed him way to Geet's room on way Dadima was on call with Doctor; after placing Geet on her bed Maan couldn't stop himself from noticing her room. It was beautifully done room... no girlish things... Everything defines standard in it. On the side of wall there were some pictures of small girl with man which seems to be her dad... There were many pictures of young Geet with Dadima n some other people but Maan's eyes got stuck with particular picture of Geet and that man who was hugging her other day. Maan couldn't stay there more, he just bid bye to Dadima n left... Dadima too didn't notice him as she was worried for Geet.

Maan always believed that Love is unconditional feel ...Love isn't about losing or winning someone, it's not about getting and in return giving something... Love is just feeling to feel in which we don't have to expect reciprocation from the other person. Love is making sacrifices for others even with nothing in return. Happy ending is not the center of love... Cherishing the feeling till the last breath is the love. But Expectations is part of human tendency... and someone says that Expectations are root of all pain.

Maan returned to his flat, he just want to rest... he was too tired to think anything, but seeing sameera there he couldn't think the day can be worse than this.





This is it...I know its small...no banner..lots of mistakes... story must be getting bore...lots of complains... but guys right now i cant do much better than this,... I m extremely sorry ... agar kuch confusion hai toh u can ask me...agar main clear rahungi toh will try to clear ur confusion😆😆...

Thank u ...Luv u

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar koi toh unres comment...
very much nervous for this part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read it will comment when from pc!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kaise ho jerry? exams kaise derahi ho? all the best jerry




yeh lo sab confusion adi thinking maan loves sasha and maan thinking adi came to know that he loves geet. ab geet ko kisi aur ke saath dekhkar maan socha ki wo usse pyaar karthi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome back dear
no problem if update is late aur small just want update take ur time n complete ur stories
update was awsum me thinking what happen in geet past that made her like this
maan felt pain to saw her
n that daracula is in maan flate great is say zayada aur kiya bura hosakta hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update! Feeling 4 Geet! Sam wants to see Maan n is in his flat! Geet faints! Maan worried! update soon, well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part adi thinking maan loves sasha and maan thinking adi come to know about his love for geet maan assumes that the guy who hugged geet in office is geets love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love this story.. It's so different and interesting.. Please send me a Pm when you update next. I will send you a buddy request.

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