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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

DHOKA

woowww.. lakshmi.. this is the best pic sm1 hs edited evn though its suppose to hv darkr side of the story.. i lv the title in hindi: dhoka..

lakshmi we cn see u r doing lot of hard wrk on all these... plz dnt get upset, we r alws there at yr doorstep as an audiance...😉

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

ghar pe hi

kisi classes ya koi friend group jo ye exam de raha ho, unke sath thoda time spend krogi to zyada achha hoga.. akele akele pata hi nahi chalega kyaa kiyaa or kyaa nahi hua... or exam pospone hone ki soch na bhi mt.. hoja ne do.. khtm hogi tabhi chen ki saas le paogi.. meri trh😉

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

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DHOKA

They decided to have a cup of coffee as there was still time for the flight. Dev mixed something in Geets coffee and passed it to her with such a lovely smile that any one would fall on him. Dev very wisely was capable to spoil geets dress by tumbling a coffee cup on her. He asked her to go to the washroom and clean up. Though geet was worried to leave alone, but having no other choice she left the "so thought" loving warmth of her husband, giving him a sweet smile!
When she returned there was no traces of Dev or his family.
To be contd...

Note: For pms pls add "lakpm"

lakshu pic perfect hai aur editing bhi achi bani especially font correct suit huwa👏👏

main tho comment picture ko hi doongi na😛

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Can I answer your questions and review the picture after a while? Coz right now I want to just get lost in this song! Haaye! Perfect song! Loved it! Good choice!

(After few minutes and after listening to the song atleast twice the Imagination decides to reply😃)

OK! Now that I have enjoyed this song, I can reply your questions!

I love the pace you have set here! And I am not at all bored! If you had increased the pace, there was a good chance I would not have read it as diligently as I do it now! I enjoy this pace coz you take each scene apart and present it beautifully! Love it! I think the reason you did not get much like is because 'like' means liking it and I don't think anyone ever will be able to enjoy the dhoka track!😉 Wait till Maan comes in and see how much likes you will get!😃 This is what I think! But my ideas are generally wacky so ignore it if you want!

Now about the pic, loved it! I loved the pics you chose for Geet! DD looks really beautiful in them! Good choice! And the narration was well written too! Good going! Keep it up!😃

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

beautiful pics di 👍🏼
loved them 👏👏

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

priyaaa kahaa reh gyi thii aap, me or dona kbke waite kr rahe the.. or ye lakshmi update dekr kaha chooo ho gyi??😡

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

HAI dearies... main bhi aa gayi ...

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: mauaa
priyaaa kahaa reh gyi thii aap, me or dona kbke waite kr rahe the.. or ye lakshmi update dekr kaha chooo ho gyi??😡

maitri ab yeh dekho

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: mauaa

kisi classes ya koi friend group jo ye exam de raha ho, unke sath thoda time spend krogi to zyada achha hoga.. akele akele pata hi nahi chalega kyaa kiyaa or kyaa nahi hua... or exam pospone hone ki soch na bhi mt.. hoja ne do.. khtm hogi tabhi chen ki saas le paogi.. meri trh😉

classes pehle ki hui hai n koi frnd nahi hai pass me so sara kaam akele ka 😳
main bhi chahti hu ho jaye exam postpone hona bakwas lagt6a hai 😡