THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

romance ...romance ...and romance ... Uff

Control nahi hota bande se
Fir bhi control karring

Lovely update dear

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mhappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

wow another lovely part

liked the idea of smaller updates so that we can cherish each and every moment of maan and geet's toghetherness

and stay in their dreamland for a longer period

as u r going to wrap it off

loved each and every love and passion filled moments of maan and geet

haaye they are so sweet

and their never ending two minutes

love it so much

😉😉😉

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

😆

Originally posted by: priya111111

agar aisa hai tho hum sab dharna mein baitenge😆😆

ab kaha seedha baccche aanewalae hai kya😆

Dharna?😲

🤣

Yaha light bill kam nahi karnewali hu main.. lol

Dharnawale bohut cute hai 😆

Subah subah u made me smile Priya..

chalo off to work

ek aur update added par VM bana de na mere liye theek hai 😃

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

As usual I am late in commenting. But better late than never😉

This part was just awesome. Maan dressing up his Geet for their engagement. It was so passionate and sweet at the same time. Lloved the possessive yet loving Maan. And it was a cherry on the top to find innocent Bambi mumbling and being grumpy.Over all it was just awesome but best part was that Maan adorned Geet in his mother's jewelery. It just showed the extent of his acceptance of her yet again.

Manali??😉

Can't wait to know if bambi an sher will go together their...That will be something to look forward to surely.

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: dqno1
😆

Dharna?😲

🤣

Yaha light bill kam nahi karnewali hu main.. lol

Dharnawale bohut cute hai 😆

Subah subah u made me smile Priya..

chalo off to work

ek aur update added par VM bana de na mere liye theek hai 😃

haan kitna chahiye banadethi hoon bas aise hi updates badathi jao😆😆

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

... thanks 4 d lovely pics & Naureen what a beautiful sher... i hv come across many small things in this FF, which i never tried to understand... you gals r amazing... i didn't notice about the smallest thing.. like kapkapana of lips & u made a sher on that one too👏...

Avi thanks 4 posting maan's pic, of d stressed eyebrow... like always, i was too ignorant in that case too...

☺️ ladoo... shooo hot... pyar ki barsaat hai yaha...

you gave us a hot maan, naughty maan, then more besharam maan. and best of all the young angry man aka possessive maan... ab to kuch mangene ko bhi bacha... Avi you hv given a world of maan...

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#877

wow wat a update.. me stood frooze to see my maaneet ki unconditional love for each other..wow lovely emotional touching cute naughty tearful, happy wala tear update.. te way my maan wants to make his geet ready with his hands was lovely emotional touching.. te way my naughty maan taking his own time making his geet to burning with his touches was lovely cute.. te way my maaneet ki love,i cant imagine, they love for each other and they cravings, they heart beating f or each other was lovely emotional touching... te way geet said jaan making my maan heart to swell in happiness was lovely cute emotional .. te way my maan ki posessiveness making her to struggle and shuting her in his style was lovely.,. te way my naughty maan teasing his geet with sweets was lovely cute.. te way now my maaneet ki engmnet , and te whole world will now know ..te way he planing to take his geet to simla was lovely..wat he will do there a he 😉 😉..i love te update so much..

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

I will say Only One Word for this Part that

I am "SPEECHLESS" 😎

*Thud* Update ❤️

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: cristallus
Nice banner that suits maaneet and devtara s engagement.
Getting ready in the hands of her lover is something so sensual and the way you have described their
Feelings and reactions to that tiny bit ,made me go mad in maaneets love.
Geet s posessiveness over maans silence and maans reaction when she showed her anger was depicted good.
Maans way of dressing his giit and making her wear tge jewellery made me all shy.
It was so innocent when geet readily said she was praying to her babaji for their marriage to happen soon.
Overall after reading the whole part now my imagination doesnt stop to think about their married life.if you have an idea
Of writing another maaneets story wilk request you to write their life after marriage .
Also waiting to see Dev Taras part on the engagement

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: libros
chap 76 - maaneet morning romance and their never ending TWO minutes😉😆
loved how maan took all respobsibility of darji

chap 77 - so beautiful...maan romancing and dressing up Geet😳... giving his mothers jewellry

Waiting for the next part eagerly

Thank you. Glad you liked it😃