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Silent Suffering


Prologue

I halted the car suddenly hitting the brake, crashing the tires of my BMW to screech against the sandy road. Getting out, I stood under the darkened clouded sky at Delhi's hilltop where all of Delhi showed but through my tears, the city seemed like a blur. Just like the blur my life had become without her. Today I was dressed in a white kurta suit wearing a colour I almost never wore; the colour one wears when someone passes away. And today was the day she left this world leaving me all alone.

Today the most important woman in my life had left me alone, the only who was mine in this world: my Dadi Ma. When my mom and dad passed away in a car accident when I was only three, my Dadi Ma took me under her wing and raised me to become a man my parents would be proud of. All my life, I worked hard to become someone she could be proud of. A straight A's student through out school, got a full scholarship to Harvard becoming a cardiologist. In the determination to become a man she could be proud of, I forgot to give her the love and time she deserved and now she was gone. Everything I was now was worth nothing. My tears finally began to spill out of my eyes silently making a stream on my cheeks. She was gone, passing away silently in her sleep. The reality of her death was finally sinking in causing me to sob harder.

Defeated, I sat at the edge of the cliff letting my dangle over the edge staring at nothing in particular thinking back to the days I had taken for granted. I listened to the silent night; it was the calm before a storm. I looked above to the sky as dark clouds rolled in; a storm was definitely coming.

Just then rustling of the leaves from behind me drew my attention. Wiping my tears, I turned around and looked towards the trees thinking someone would be there but there was no one in sight. The hilltop was as vacant as it had been since I had come. Turning around to face the city again, I gazed at the tiny lights of the city, I sighed knowing I was all alone in this world now. The leaves rustled again from the same direction, but it was louder this time and I was pretty sure there was something there.

Getting up, and brushing the dirt off the back my kurta, I slowly inched towards the trees where the sound was coming from. But it was so dark that I wouldn't be able to see a thing. Pulling my Iphone out of pocket, I threw the light towards the trees but there wasn't bright enough. If I went any closer, I would be entering the jungle. I knew any smart person wouldn't try to enter a jungle in the dark but I couldn't help myself as the light rustling continued.

Taking baby steps in the pit darkness unless my phone light counted, I tripped over a branch and felt with a grunt a few feet away. But I quickly realized that I hadn't hit the hard ground. Moving my hands along where I had fallen, I encountered the feel of soft skin of a woman's arm. What the hell, was there a dead body here? My heart automatically started beating faster than usual at the thought.

I lifted myself off the body and winced against the pain it brought to my lower back. The sky suddenly roared with thunder flashing a bolt of lightning as well. The brightened sky allowed me to see that there was a woman dressed in a simple white saree, which was covered with blood in numerous spots lying there. A woman who could possibly to dead.

At first glance, there was possibly a bullet lugged in her shoulder and a deep cut on the right side of her neck which was still bleeding. I cursed silently as the sky darkened again. Fumbling in the dark to find her wrist, I checked for a pulse praying there would be one. After a few seconds, I felt it against my fingers, faint but it was still there. She was alive and that's all that mattered right now. I left out a sigh of relief. Using my phone, I held it close to her face ; there was a gash on her forehead that was bleeding profusely and there was a cloth tied on her mouth probably to keep her from screaming. My instant gut feeling was telling me that I was getting into the wrong situation. This could possibly be related to the mafia, underworld, anything and here I was ready to save her. But before anything else, I was a doctor. Untying the cloth off her mouth, I called out to her loudly.

"Hello miss, can you hear me?"

But there was no use, she wasn't conscious. And if I didn't hurry her to the hospital right now, she wouldn't live to see another day. I carefully scooped her in my arms ignoring the pain it caused my back. It was as if she didn't even weight anything. Taking careful baby steps, we made it to the car. As I carefully placed her on the back seat and looked at her for one second, I couldn't help think to myself: What the hell did I get myself into ?


SO peeps...this is a ongoing Maaneet story i am writing, a reader of mine suggested getting the story shifted from the fanfiction section to the geet forum so more Maaneet fans are able to find the story, but that wasn't possible...so i decided to post the prologue here, so any interested readers, find the link below


Much Love,
Reya <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reya hon u can ask the FFF Mods to shift that thread there na?
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REYA UPDATE THE STORY PLEASE
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waiting for the update😃
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interesting prologue...
thanx for the link...
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thnx for the link
will read for sure
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are you starting it here again or
you will continue from next part...
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hi reya

want to say u that ..
start anew thread in geet forum of ur story again ..
copy paste all the parts u have till written
it will be easy for all to follow the story then ..

please repost all ur story parts in new thread in GF ..please
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welcome back honey...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
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