MG~ SS~The Torment -- UPDATED Pt 6 / Pg 111/ 8th Feb. .............. - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😲 kuch priya ke use ka gift lana tha na..


to ye bhi to unke kaam ka hai.. gf pr wo thoda or time spend kr paayegi.. kal ki trah masti miss to nahi kregi na... babbie mene bahot duur ki sochi hai..😃
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badi thand lag rahi hai aapko.. hw ws yr day??? sab kaam finish ho gye na?? pooja kesei thi??? or aaj lappy milgyaa, kisine cheena nahi>??😊
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Originally posted by: mauaa


to ye bhi to unke kaam ka hai.. gf pr wo thoda or time spend kr paayegi.. kal ki trah masti miss to nahi kregi na... babbie mene bahot duur ki sochi hai..😃




thanks for the gift maitri 😆😆
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was out the wole day... jast came in... hell tired... 🤢
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

was out the wole day... jast came in... hell tired... 🤢




patha nahi aaj main bhi tired hoon neendh bhi aarahi hai
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 4





Dadima and Maan wr in d main hall and a servant brought there luggage * Dadima instructed them to take care of d Haweli and many other things * they were waiting for d driver who was checking d car and filling d fuel tank for d long drive * he stopped d car in d porch * servants placed d bags in d car and Dadima and Maan settled in d back seats * though d weather was rainy but Dadima didn't postpone her journey * at night d traffic was less and more importantly she wanted a day for Delhi office so she moved at this hr * she was sitting quietly with closed eyes resting her head on head rest * after few min they were on d road * d car was moving on a normal pace coz of rain and Maan saw a figer running on d roadside in car's light .

Maan: sambhu , dekho shayad koi lady musibat mei hei jo esse mausam mei ja rahi hei , rok ker pucho agar help chahiye to .


Sambhu: ji saab .


He stopped d car near Geet and Geet startled with that and stopped with thudding heart * she fearfully turned and looked at d driver and back side * Maan was shocked to see her there in this condition and so many questions occupied his mind * he was looking at her stunned * Dadima opened her eyes when car stopped and she too was shocked when she saw Geet there like that * she slide down d window glass to have a clear look of her * Geet once looked at them and then all around with fear * Dadima understood that she ran away from her house and took that wrong .


Dadima: oh to ab tum ghar se bhi bhaag rahi ho apne uss BF ke sath .


Geet looked at them painfully but tried to clear her doubt ...nahi, essa nahi hei , aap galat samajh rahi hein , plz meri madad karo .


Dadima : tum jaisi ghar se bhaagi hui ladki ki madad kisi ko nahi kerni chahiye , tum jaisi ladkiyan bas apna sochti hei , pariwar aur khandan ki izzat ka nahi * hume afsos hota hei ki humne tumhare bare mei kuch accha socha * chalo driver.


She coldly turned her face and raised d window glass * Geet bagged again , plz help me , wo log mujhe maar dalenge .. Geet looked with a hope at Maan but he too turned his face which shocked Geet * she was in this mess bcoz of him , she refused to marry him for his sake and here he was turning his face like coward *


Dadima: chalo driver , kisi ke galat kam mei hum madad nahi ker sakte * humne kya socha tha aur kya paya .



Driver moved d car leaving a shocked and lost Geet on d road * she came in sense when she heard d shout of a man ... wo rahi sadak per , pakdo usse bhagne na paye * Geet saw at them terrified and started running without wasting d time * they were chasing her and she was running with all her remaining strength to save her life * she was near d bridge of river and nothing is there to hide * they were very close to her and one of d guy held d corner of her dupatta in process to catch her but she didn't stop and her dupatta came in d guy's hand * Geet looked at back while running and trenbled on her pace but controlled herself * d guy threw his sword towards her and that hit d Geet's upper back * she got a cut but she didn't stop * her pace became slow and that guy caught her on d bridge * Geet struggled to make her free fron his hold * he was alone and other was behind him * Geet looked at t others who were away and she hit him with her knee on d guy's groin * he flinched and Geet pushed him back * she ran again but he caught her again after few steps * he became furious and hit her with d bridge wall * Geet was pushing him back and he was pushing her to d wall absusing her * Geet heard some more steps nearby and thought that her end is near * she collected all her strength and gave him one more hit at same place * he hawled with pain and pussed her back in rage * she lost her balance and fell down in d heavy flowing river with a shriek * d guy looked down but nothing was visible * other guys joined him and asked and he gestured towards river pressing his private zone with one hand to sooth his pain * one of them called Brij and informed him * they came back from d bridge and got her dupatta on road and d sword .


Brij came there with other guys and they told him what had happened * they stood there for few min and concluded that that there was no chance of her survival in this flowing river * her chapter is closed for ever . All came back and Brij entered in d Hawewli with Geet's dupatta in his hand * Darji and his parents were waiting for him impatiently * Rajji was standing away from them behind d piller * All looked at Barij with questioning eyes .


Darji: Brij , kya khabar?


Brij looked at them: Dariya mei baha diya .

Biji gasped and Rajji slumped on d floor listening this * tears rolldown from her eyes .


Brij's maa: Darji , ab pind mei kya jawab denge agar kisi ne pucha to ?


Darji: keha dena wo America chali gai aage padhne , waise bhi wo yahan rahati kitna thi , aur khabardaar agar kisi ne baat bahar nikali to .

All retired to their respective rooms * Brij threw Geet's dupatta in d courtyard angrily and stromed to his room , took out a whisky bottle and gulp down a good amount * Rajji took that dupatta and came back to her room closed d door and cried out loud holding that piece of cloth close to her heart * nobody is there to sooth her bcoz she was among d beasts .


On d way to Delhi ...


Maan was feeling bad for not helping Geet but he became selfish that time * d fear of ruining his plan blocked his mind , what if Geet blurted out d truth of her refusal in front of Dadima * his all plan to marry Sam could turn in to ash and Dadima too became angry on him so to hide d truth he turned his face from Geet. He boosted his heart giving lame excuse that everything is fair in love and war . Maan looked at Dadima who was sitting with closed eyes * Maan placed his hand on her.


Dadima: hum theek hein Maan , aap humari fikar matt kero , zindgi mei bahot kuch dekha aur saha hei hei humne , ye to kuch bhi nahi * afsos to ye hai ki hum apne bte ka vada pura nahin ker sake .


Maan: Dadima , I told u not to come here but u force me and I came here bcoz of u * Dadima , they r nothing to us so forget about them .


Dadima: hume Geet se essi hope nahi thi , pahale baar humne insaan ko Pahachanne mei galti ki hei .

Maan's heart skipped a beat * Dadima's words pricked his heart * he kept quiet for rest of d journey .


They were moving to their destination and it was far away from their thoughts that their one refusal turned fatal for an innocent girl .


It's said that as long as greed become stronger than compassion, there will always be suffering .



Precap ---- a battle for life cont ...


Part - 5


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3896493/mg-ss-the-torment-updated-pt-6-pg-111-8th-feb



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab mera ek hi lakshya hai ki maan ko kaise maaroon😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡kitna selfish nikla aur uski wajah se geet ne sab kuch kho diya aur iss mission lagtha hai ab sab mere saath denge😆😆


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