MG~ SS~The Torment -- UPDATED Pt 6 / Pg 111/ 8th Feb. .............. - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
babie main maan ko maaroongi😔😔😔😔😔uski wajah se geet itna kuch sehna pada
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Maan put all blame on geet and geets family too brlieved him
he dont know what he has done for his selfishness
hope geet will escape
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darj and brij are monster
hope geet come out this hell soon
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lakshu,lily,priya,dina,mauaa,indu,sona and mona..šŸ¤—


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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats for the new FF dear...
will read it after my exams will be over and comment on all part...
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😊 Updating...


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...šŸ¤—


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







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In Khurana Haweli Maan was having his dinner happily while daima was sitting there half heartedly and playing with d food * she came India with lots of dreams and plans but all collapsed with Geet refusal now she wanted to go back ASAP * she was feeling suffocated here with no hope .

Dadima: Maan, pack ur bags , we'll leave for Delhi after some time * we stayed there in out KM and in day time we have to check d Delhi office works and next day we'll leave for US * I don't want to live here any more * I already told Adi to book d tickets.


Maan: Ji Dadima , as u wish.


He felt that Dadima is upset coz of Geet's refusal but after reaching US she would be fine * he shrugged his shoulder carelessly thinking that Geet chapter is closed for ever * both retired to their respective rooms and started their packing to move back * he took his phone to call Sam but stop with a naughty smile .. no,, i'll give her surprise in MSK style ,, wait for some more hrs sweetheart .


The rain started with thunder and night became dark coz of dark clouds and rain * d roads and lanes became deserted in rainy night * Handa Haweli too became silent * all went to sleep in their rooms Brij's father was sleeping like log coz of drinks even biji and darji too went to sleep but Brij didn'r return back * Rajji and Geet were awaking * Rajji took Geet bag and peeped around and snecked to back side towards Kothri , opened d door and entered .


Rajji: Geet Di ye lo aapka bag , maine sab acche se pack ker diya hei , esme kuch khane ko bhi hei aapne kuch nahi kaya na abhi tak * veerji ghar pernahi hei mauka accha hei , sab so rahe hei , aap bhaag jao peeche ke darwaje se * Di barish badi hei aap kahan chupoge subaha tak * pahale bas tak ke liye aapko kahin chupna padega.


Geet: haan ek bar yahan se nikal jaun fir darr nahi Delhi mei meri frnd hei mei uski help le lungi bas yahan se kisi tarah nikal jaun .


Rajji : jaldi karo di Delhi ke liye pahali bus 5 baje hei , kisi tarah yahan se nikal jao..


Geet hugged Rajji lovingly and removed her gold chain from her neck and gave her .


Geet: Rajji esse meri nishani samajh ker hamesha apne paas rakhna * Rajji agar enn logo ko pata chala ki tune meri madad ki hei to ye tujhe bhi marenge.


Rajji: Di aap meri fikar matt karo , mai inhe dekh lungi , aap jaldi se jao.


Geet hanged that lappy bag on her back * both d girls came out in back side and rajji opened d small door of back side * Geet hugged her tightly and then packed on her forehead .


Rajji : apna khayal rakhna Di .


Geet looked at her with teary eyes and then slipped out in rain covering her head with dupatta and plastic sheet to protect her from rain * rajji shoot a prayer to babaji for her well being and closed d door . She looked that their old servant was sleeping in varanda who also had d habit of Bhang ( a herbal drug found in roadside in village) * she smirked and went back to her room with a determination.


Geet took d kaccha road for d bus stand to avoid d risk * it was lil long but she need a safe place to hide for few hrs * she was walking looking all around in fear and bumped with bike rider on turning * she fell down with a cry and sheet which she was using to cover her flew away * d bike rider was drunk but he recognized her * he was from d Brij group and he was with him till now * all were drinking and eating in a Dhaba away from village and now returning back.


Guy: tu Brij ki bahan hei na , etni raat ko kya ker rahi hei yahan?


Geet was shocked and in fear she started running * he started to chase her and stopped his bike infront of her * he held her hand and took out his phone from other to call Brij saying ... ghar se bhaag rahi hei apne kisi aashiq ke sath , abhi Brij ko batata hun.


Geet turned pale listening Brij name , now he'll surely killed her * she gather her courage and bit his hand which was holding her wrist and pushed him forcefully * d biker lost his balance and fell down on earth , his phone fell away from him and his one leg came under d bike * Geet find d good opportunity and ran away from there * she slipped in d field to hide her coz it was not safe to go near bus stop * she was running in rain on muddy tracks between d fields .


The biker stood after many attemps and he didn't have time to search his phone in rainy darkness * he started his bike and drove towards Handa Haweli to inform Brij. Brij was at his Haweli's gate and knocking to open that * D old servant was in d effect of Bhaang and listened after many knocks * he came out lazily swinging here and there to open d gate * d biker stopped Brij and informed him about Geet but he didn't believe him * he himself locked her in d room then how could she run away ? He stopped d guy there and went in d Haweli to check * Brij was shocked to see d opened door od Kothri and there was no sign of Geet * He shouted in full rage and his Biji and Darji came out from their room .


Brij: biji uss Kothri ka darwaja kisne khola ? Wo bhaag gai hei .


Darji was stunned listening this and looked at Biji .


Darji: kisne khola darwaja ? kaise bhaagi wo ?


Biji feared : Darji mujhe nahi pata , mai to udhar gai bhi nahi .


Brij: fir kisne khola? Jisne bhi uski madad ki hei mai usse chodunga nahi ?


Darji: Brij dhoond usse aur kaat ker fek de dariya mei , uski etni himmat .

Brij at once came out and started his bike * d guy told him where he saw Geet * Brij called his other frinds and they started their search but it was difficult for them to ride on biks between d fields so they started to walk and divided in to 2-3 groups * all were having wepons in their hands.


Geet ran for long and then came near d river which was out side of d village * d rain didn't want to stop like Geet's troubles * d thundering and lightening with heavy rain making difficult to get right path and she fell down at many places on muddy and slippery uneven tracks of fields * Geet rested for few min under a tree but shivered listening some faint sounds of bikes * she looked at sky and shoot a prayer with folded hands ... Babaji plz apni ess anath bacchi ko bacha lo * she started to run again gathering her strength and after some min she find that she was on d road * she looked around and started to run on d roadside opposite to village .


Precap --- a bettle for life cont.


Part - 4




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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Love u babbie... ye wala bhi update dene k liye.. thnxx alot...

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