Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love#4 - EPILOGUE updated on Page 101 -26th Aug - Page 38

beautiful update
maan is being so impatient to meet his geet nd get married 😆
loved ria and geets convo. geet is right ria has been.a mother to her nd supported her in every problem
maan refused the gift by geets dad and requested him.to accept.him as a son 😊

What a shameless groom!!😆😆😆 Maan is so impatient and is hassling his mum to hurry up and get ready. Just loved their teasing.😆

lovely update...
maan is so desperate...
loved it...

Haaha..maan babu wants to meet his Geet... pnky ko bribe bhi kiya.. they all are enjoying marriage rituals... N mohinder uncle is happy now for his daughter.. Love ria n geet's bond... nice update..😃

Awesome updates
Loved it
Awe maaneet greeting married...
Beautifully written all the maaneet marriage function...
Geet's papa sang so emotional really beautiful song...
Lol maan teasing his mom to get ready quickly...
Awe loved geet n ria's convo lovely moments...
Lol pinky n adi nok jhoks was cute... Haye maan saw geet shadows... Sweet
Lovely convo between maan mohinder uncle... Such a sweet son-in-law...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...

wating wating wating wating wating

part 61
nice part...
lovely...
her dad is happy and accepted Maan...
and Maan too is happy...
cont soon dear...

wow geet is getting ready for wedding and maan is in hurry to get married so he can have his jaan near him always and even thinking of kids in front of his mother and teasing her for getting ready faster...aww pinky is asking 50 lakhs to get entry inside the Handa mansion...but maan said something for pinky agreed easily...hmm waiting for next dear!continue soon!

Highly disappointed with the response. 2day i just came here to give the updates, and see the responses, come on yaar, here I'm writing for hours just to give and update, sending total 346 Pms regularly after every single updates, and you guys can't even use your 1 mins to give a response? i will not give any updates till the limit will not be fullfilled. so here's the teasers. update will be posted on page 80.

now you can say I'm wrong, I'm moody and all like before. but try to understand. We writers do have some feelings as well. and these less responses are just making us leave the GF forum. and i really don't want to do that 😭

Teaser 1:

Maan looked at the stair, and as soon as his eyes went towards his jaan, he forgot to breath.

There she was, walking towards him, ready to be his wife, ready to be with him completely to be his better half

But for Maan, she has full right on his life, not bounded with the word called better half

Geet can feel the burning gaze on her and became shyer as she knew her pucchu was looking at her right now.

Teaser 2:

Maan: oyee hello, let me get inside now. I'm tired

Daadi ma: accha? Then do one thing beta, you come to my room and sleep tonight. Now your mother is talking with Geet inside. You will not be able to rest

Maan came near his daadi ma and whispered

Maan: Daadi ma at least aap to samjho mere Baato ko

Daadi: I can understand beta. That's why telling you to come and sleep with me tonight

Daadi said sincerely while trying hard to control her laugh

Teaser 3:

Maan keep ogling at her with his big eyes as she was looking not less than an angel in her wedding dress

Geet: Maan, stop staring like that

Maan: my love, my wife, my life, who's going to stop me. let me see you jaan. I couldn't able to do that down there

Geet: But its feeling like you are looking at some fruit and going to eat me

Maan: i may eat you raw tonight

Geet: Then do something na? It's almost half hour now we are sitting in same position. I'm feeling sleepy. and i will throw you out of the room if you don't make this night romantic and make me sleepy

Geet threatened making Maan white in horror

Enjoy the teasers, and update will be post on page 80 only. I'll not update before that.

Haha.. Last teaser.. Geet..🤣