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Part 57

It's already morning,

Maan looked at his Jaan who's sleeping peacefully holding his hand tightly. He smiled unconsciously as he remembered how embarrassed he was some hours ago.

One by one all came to see her, but she was already in sleep due to the medicine.

When Arjun entered in the room Maan tried to stand up and remove his hand. But in her sleep also Geet just mumbled something and clinched his hand tightly.

Ria tried hard to control her smile, whereas both Maan and Arjun choose not to look at one another.

What made Maan worried was Mohindar's absence. He didn't come for once to check on Geet. It made Maan sad that it might be because of him this long gap created between them.

Maan's chain of thoughts broke when Geet stirred a little in her sleep.

He put the chair closer to her

As soon as Geet opened her eyes, her eyes searched for Maan. Maan smiled warmly at her and pressed her hand in assurance that he's still there with her

Maan: hey sleeping beauty

Geet: hey

Maan: how are you feeling now? Is it paining?

Geet: how can I feel any pain when you are with me?

Geet said innocently making Maan sighed

Maan: you are a crazy little woman, you know that?

Geet: yes, crazily in love with her Maan

Geet said while giving a wide smile to him

Maan tried to smile while thinking about how to tell her that he need to leave now.

Geet: hey what happened?

Maan: nothing, just wondering, you know

Geet: wondering how to tell me that you need to leave?

Maan hold her hands and bring himself more closely to her

Maan: Jaan I should leave now

Geet: yeah, I understand.

Maan: but before leaving, I want a promise from you

Geet: what promise?

Maan: you will be happy even if we will not be together in future

Geet: Maan, won't you try to talk with papa?

Maan: I promise you that I'll not force you in this relation, even if you will leave me and move apart but promise me Geet you will live you life happily

Maan said Geet while putting her hands on his head, making geet whimper in pain

She tried so hard not to break down when her family in just outside the room. Even when her Maan is leaving her, just for the sake of her happiness, her father's happiness.

Maan: Promise me Geet that you will marry and live happily with whomever your papa will choose for you

Geet nodded while trying to suppress her cry

Geet: but promise me you will never stop singing, and will be more and more famous so that all girl will drool on you like the way I used to

Maan chuckled while trying not to spill his tears

Maan: I'll make sure in future both you and your daughter will drool on me, making your husband feel offended and jealous

Both smiled trying to lighten the mood

Maan: Take care Geet. Be happy

Geet: I love you Maan, I really do

Geet cried enable to hide her pain anymore

Maan: sshhh, I know jaan. I know that you love me. But i want you to love your family more to choose them over me. Make them proud of you Geet

Geet: I will. Please don't say bye now. I can't bear it

Maan: no ways. I will surely find you in my concert in future

Saying so Maan pecked her forehead and left the room hurriedly. But both of them missed the person who was listening to them from outside the room, with guild imprinted all over his face

Geet sobbed in pain to see Maan moving away from her. She tried her best not to be weak, knowing it will only cause more pain to her Maan. But now when he left, she couldn't able to control her whimper.

It hurts. It hurts a lot that someone stabbed her heart with a sharp knife. She hide her face on the pillow in order to stop her crying sound.

After a minute or so she felt someone putting a hand on her shoulder, and then sitting beside her.

When she looked up she saw her father's moist eyes.

Geet tried her best to stop her cry. She already hurt Maan, now she don't want to hurt another one she loved the most. They both were her whole world. She will made sure that her father will be happy now

Geet: I'm sorry papa, I will not disobey you. See, Maan too left now

Mohindar wiped her tears and hugged her tight.

Mohindar: no beta. I'm sorry.

Geet looked up at her father's face, while still hugging him tightly. After so many days she was with her father now.

Geet: papa aap

Mohindar: in my own misery I never saw the place where my own daughter will be happy. I'm sorry beta. Your momma will be so angry on me today, I broke my promise Geet. I couldn't able to take care of you. Couldn't able to take care of your happiness

Geet: no papa, please don't cry. You are the best papa one could get. I'm sorry that I hurt you. I will never do it again. Please papa, don't cry

Geet pleaded while wiping his tears

Mohindar: I will talk with Maan's father. I will ask maan's hand from them. I promise beta, I will do whatever you want, but please never ever think about leaving me

Geet: It's ok papa, aap pleae shant ho jaiye

Mohindar: you know Geet? After your mother left me, I felt that I've left alone in this big world. Just then you cried out as if to reminder me that you are still there for me. And when I took you in my arms, I got the reason to live my life. In all these years, you two become my reasons to live, to survive. And I'm truly proud that God gifted me an angel in the form of my little Geet

Geet: I love you Papa. I'm sorry that I hurt you

Mohindar: you can never hurt me beta. Now you better be fine soon, then we will contact with Maan's family.

Arjun: well they are already here, now if you also agreed, we should talk soon before these two kids do something else

Said Arjun from behind

Mohindar and Geet looked at the door and saw Arjun and Ria smiling at her, whereas Anukalp, Natasha and Daadi ma was also present along with Pinky

Mohindar stood up and went towards them.

Mohindar: I'm sorry maa ji for everything that happened

Mohindar said guiltily to Daadi ma

Daadi ma: ye bhi koi baat hua? You did what one father should do as a father. Let's forget everything and talk with Pandit ji.

Natasha: haan, aab to bas jald se jald mujhe aapne bahu ko ghar lekar jaana hai

Anukalp: but yes in all these Maan got a lesson.

All looked at him confusingly

Anukalp: never to enter in someone's house without permission.

Anukalp joked. While all laughed

Natasha went near Geet and pecked on her forehead

Natasha: you made us so worried beta. Never do that again

Geet: I'm sorry aunty

Natasha: aunty nehi mom. Abhi se adaat daal lo ma bolne ka

Pinky chirped near Geet

Pinky: you guys should do all these dramas later. Because of you I lost the chance of watching Maan's very first concert. You fool

Daadi ma: well you guys can still go

Pinky: but how? We don't have any tickets

Daadi ma: you can take ours. Waise bhi, iss umar mai mujhe koi shokh nehi hai jumping ki

Pinky gave the most big grin and looked at Geet

Pinky: chal na Geet, please. I planned so much to shout and dance in front

Geet: but pinky, how can we go?

Mohindar: go and enjoy. Arjun will take you both then

Geet: papa aap?

Mohindar smiled softly at his daughter.

Mohindar: Go and tell him that you will be with him onward, every single day, in his every single concert to cheer him up

Geet grin widely at her father while fresh tears roll down from her eyes



Pinky: Geet now get up, we need to hurry up. Only half hour left to start his first performance.

Pinky said while pulling Geet by her hand

Arjun: okey, you guys hurry up. I'm going to take my car from parking

Saying so arjun left with his car key

Geet self-thought: I'm coming Maan. Your girlfriend will not miss your 1st concert. Oppsss, your soon to be wife. Wo bhi officially with all of our family members' acceptance

Precap: Geet and Pinky in Maan's concert.


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Sorry guys for sudden disappearance. Suffering from back pain and truly after 8 days yesterday i was able to walk by my own. last few days i couldn't even able to sit without taking help. was also fever due to this pain 😕


And yes, i will end the whole story within 60 parts. means last part will be on 59, n epi on 60 😊. I'm not giving any like and page limit as Sargoshiyan is near it's end. And i really want you all to support me in this short time period. As its also the last thread. so fill it up with ur own way 😃😆

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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first it was very emotional but atlast mohinder accepted their relation and even maan's parents came their to fix their marriage.

now geet is going to attend maan's first concert which will be going to be his lifetime happiness
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nice part
geet trying 2 be with maan in her sleep too
when she woke up maan asks her 2 forget him n chose her families happiness
she agreed n her father witnessed their love
now the path is clear
mohinder accepted for maneets marriage
w8ing 4 maans concert..
what will maan do knowing the truth about his geet going to be his wife..

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