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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really want to thank all my readers who liked or commented on my story... Thank you so so much.. Means lot to me.. Hope u liking the story
secondly and most importantly I really want to thank.. All my old readers.. Who are with me from my frist ff live to live.. There are so many that I will be tired naming them.. And list will still go on
thirdly ,I want to welcome new readers who joined from here., and want to thank them for liking my work...
Next part on the way...
Edited by angelwords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay buddies,
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first of all note for you all above
secondly , now you will get less scene of Geet and more of Meera ,yash and maan.. It is important for the coming plot which i have planned... Hope you liked the update.. Enjoy reading...
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Part - 7

Maan mood was at worst.. He didnt know wat to do.. He was feeling as if geet was drifting away from me...
Meera was sad about geet leaving.. She was more like a sister to her, her sudden going make her sad and alone
Yash was worried about geet after seeing her venurable position yesterday,.. He was now and then calling her... To know if she was okay
Geet was very emotional seeing maan like that.. But she know this is for his own good and top of all she need time for herself.. She has some very important. Decision to make..geet was again and again thinking of yash word
Geet- you are right yash.. I have to understand that he was never mine and move on in my life..i have to be strong.. Yes geet
Geet saw her phone ringing..
Geet smiled as she saw the caller name..
Geet- yash bhi na
Geet picked up the phone
Geet- hain baba I am all right..
Geet- yes yes I knw, I have charged my phone fully
Geet- no baba will not go down from train
Geet- yash I am perfectly fine
Geet- theik hain baba i will see to it
Geet smiled
Meanwhile maan called geet
Maan hears - the person you are trying to call is on the other call,plz try later
Maan was again and again calling Geet, but her phone was busy.. Maan than called yash.. His phone was also busy
Maan threw his phone..maan was getting flustered seeing all this.. He went to the gym., to relax himself... Switching off the phone
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Geet ended the call and saw 10 missed call from maan.. She called maan but his phone was switched off... I will tell Meera to tell him
Geet told Meera the situation and told her to tell maan that she is okay..meera agreed..
Geet reached Punjab and took bus to Hp.. Later she reached Hp.. And welcomed by her family in emotional way..she sent a message to all 3 Meera,yash and maan.. About her reaching.. But destiny was playing game with her.. Delivery report of message of yash and Meera came.. But the message didn't reached maan... As Geet balance was over..
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Next day
Three of them reached college .. They talked for sometime and went to the class..
Meera was sitting in the middle.. Yash on window side and maan on the other side..
Meera's phone beeped..
Meera saw the message..
Meera- finally Geet reached
Yash phone also beeped
Yash- i also got the message..
Maan was waiting for Geet 's message.. But the message didn't came.. He was getting angrier each passing moment..Meera saw this.. She know maan was angry on message thing..
Meera- don't worry network problem hogi,that's why message deliver nahi ho paya
Maan nodded and gave a fake smile... The professor came and lecture started.. Maan was again and again seeing the phone in hope to get the message.. But nothing came..
As soon as class got over he ran outside to control his anger..
Meera and yash saw that
Yash- eissa kya Hua chashmish
Meera- Abhi tak Geet ke message nahi aya usko
Yash- may be some problem you know na Geet she will send all
Meera- i know
Yash- Meera you are my bestest buddy you know na
Meera- let me think
Yash- meera
Meera laughed
Meera- yes so
Yash- i wanted to tell you something from many day.. But i don't know how you will react to it
Meera breath caught.. Her heart missed a beat..
Yash- voh Meera..i want to say that..voh..i..means,.I
Meera was waiting for him to say wat her heart and soul want to hear..
Yash- I
When yash heard boy shouting
Boy- maan is bleeding
Yash- wat?? How
Meera started crying
Meera- wwhaatt happened to hiimm??
Boy- he had a fight with some one outside.. They both are mercilessly beatings each other
Yash- daamm maannn
Yash shouted
Meera- ohh godd.. Yash lets go
Yash- hain lets go..
Meera- i hope usse zada chot na ayi ho
Yash- Eis ladhke ko kitne baar kaha hain gussa control karo
Meera- ek din bhi nahi Hua Geet ko Gaye Hua.. And this all.. I knw Geet hoti tho voh maan ko control kar leti
Yash- Geet ko eiske baare Mein mat batana.. She will be worried
Meera- okay..Lets go..
They both went with the boy..
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Precap- maan-->meera-->yash
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Edited by angelwords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
part 5 n 6 are simply good..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
fabulous updtae dear :)

really superb :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an happening part yaar!!!!!!!

Geet leaving,Maan missing her,tries to call her but she being busy wid Yash, and when Geet tries to call him,he is unreachable.The msg confusion,Maan getting hell angry and getting involved in a fight,ufff...Maan ka gussa,mashah allah...

I hope he is not hurt much.

And then Yash was also abt to say to Meera,but fate didnt give chance.

Pata ni kya hoga inn doston ka!!!

Loving d flow of d story.Great going buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh dear bad luck huh
she sent the text but he never got it as her balance was over
he tried calling her but she was talking to yash
its like fate was conspiring against maan it seems
but whats with this fight with some boy
whats going on
yash was gonna tell meera he loves geet right
but thankfully that didnt happen
close call that
but not for too long
geet wants to let her love go
and see where it takes her
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice yaar.. soo geet loves maan likes meera loves yash likes geet
lol my head is dizzy.. nice yaar cont soon.. now meetas heart break time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maaan angry on geeyt par ye nahi samjhta k he loves only geet not meeera
i hoe m ab geet k jaane k baaad wo geeet k liye pne pyar ko samjh ppaaayega

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...
ek din geet nahi maan kya kar liya...
budhhu kab samjhega wo meera se nahi geet se pyar karta hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think Yash was also about to confess his love for Geet to Meera...but he was cut-off midway...

maan is in too much angry form...he is missing Geet terribly and Geet's avoidance is making him mad with anger...here for Maan Geet's avoidance get bigger to Meera's togetherness...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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