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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

wow lovely emotional update.. te way my maan admiring his geet and te way he carving to hold her was lovely emotional cute.. in tis scene i can see my maan ki unsaid love.. te way geet waking up with a shock tat my amaan holding her in his arms was lovely..te way geet ki cold answers for my maan was lovely emotional.. te way geet slapping my maan thinking he took her viriginity and now she have to face my maan ki wrath..i love te update

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

god i didn't ecpected this to be happen he is thinking she belonged to him and started distroying her also

i thought he is her saviour but no he is her distruction acha hogi she is dead by now then she dont have to bear all these

but in all these i can see he is saving from that painful death also

waiting for more

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

awesum

superb upd

kya hoga geet ka

wese jo bi hoga manjure maan hoga

ye story bhut different hai

kya hoga aage

plz plz upd soon

waiting for d next part...

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greshu

@greshu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

oh god, why he is doing that to her, continue soon...waiting for ur updates...

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Amazing Update..!!! Geet enslaved by Maan,...but his cold behaviour is quite wierd,. but quite Hot...Eager for next n Thanks for the PM!!

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Awesome part...maan is a devil here..
But kyu lagta he k geet pehle se maan ko jaanti he

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

hi dear! Thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Maan is a Devil! Poor Geet! Maan admiring his slave! update soon! Well written

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Awesome update
Maan a full devil
His beautiful slave!!
Geet surrender herself to maan

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Sahabjii is so harsh with Geet...

Geet is hurt...but she have to accept reality...

but why he saved her from dieing...I think this slave thing is just an excuse to get Geet...if she has to pay her parents debt then why he let her marry...he could have kidnapped her or forced her before her marriage... but he saved her from becoming sati...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...