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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: priya111111



my parents ghar is like that only babie meri bachpan se aise hi chalthi jaarahi hai


😆 😆 all r same..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
ab mujhe jaana hai cousin ke ghar jaarahi hoon waha se dinner ke liye bahar😳😳

kal raat ko milthe hai😉😉😉


bye bye babie,lakshu,sona

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 haan yaar sari fixing mere ghar mei hogi..
dusri party bhi yahin aayegi baat kerne yaar..🥱
mei sevadaar...😆😆
wo hota hei na 3rd party ke yahan milo pahale..😆😆



SEVA KARO AUR PUNYA KAMAAOO😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: priya111111

ab mujhe jaana hai cousin ke ghar jaarahi hoon waha se dinner ke liye bahar😳😳

kal raat ko milthe hai😉😉😉


bye bye babie,lakshu,sona


😛 Bye dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 74



Maan called his driver and his car came and stopped near them * Maan came close to open d door but she stopped him placing a hand on his chest , she slightly pushed him back and nodded in a no with a cold look . He was stunned with her gesture and opened his mouth to speak , but her cold words were enough to freeze him there ..

Geet : mujhe khud ko sambhalna aata hei ,, kisi ki jaroorat nahi .


She opened d car's door, sat and ordered to move while closing d door. Maan stood there stunned and he came in reality after few seconds listening his phone ringing * he replied d call , it was from Dadima who was asking about Geet * he replied that Geet had gone not he. He came back in d venue thinking on d whole matter * one thing was bothering him why every time Geet fell in prob , not any other member ? It happened when she was surrounded with people * why always she became d target of accidents ?


Maan came near Annie and asked about that waiter who fell on Geet * He wanted to punch him creating this prob * Annie told him about his features and he asked some other waiters * when Maan was searching that waiter he got an unexpected truth * Pam was giving money to a waiter and he was arguing her to gave him more money * Maan's anger shoot to its high * he rushed to d waiter and held her from his neck punched him many times * he fell down on ground and accepted that this girl had given him money for that and now i was asking some more money * then Maan caught Pam's arm and gave a tight slap on her cheek ...


Maan: How dare u , Pam ? I warned u to stay away from our life , but u had crossed all limits today * I didn't say anything coz of Dadima and GD but u took my silence as my weakness * I don't know ur family knew ur reality but i don't want to hurt my Dadima * u don't know d value of relations but we know * Ur time is over here miss Pam ,, pack ur and ur GM's bags , i'll send u d tickets of earliest flight. One more thing ... i don't want to see u near Geet * he jerked her badly and came out from d venue informing Dadima that he was going to KM.


Maan came at d reception counter and asked them about d caller cab * they said they have their cabs and called a cab for him at once. Maan was seething in anger not only for Pam but for his behaviour also * he called his travelling agent and told him to book 2 tickets for Monday in any flight insisting it's urgent * D agent assured him * he was on d way to KM lost in his thoughts.


Maan** i was so much tense and shocked looking her in that state again * i scolded Geet for no reason in my tension * who knows that bloody b**** was behind all this ,,, i'm sure that it was she who hurt Geet in previous accidents * God!! She was taking revenge from Geet coz i refused her.. disgusting . Geet is in pain because of me ,, she is suffering because of me. Oh Geet ... I'm sorry **


He reached KM and ran straight to her room * she was in her casual wears and cleaning her hand's wound * throwing his coat aside he rushed to her and caught her hand and d cotton ball in his other hand to clean that , but she snapped that * she tried to pull her hand and gave him an angry glare with her red swollen eyes... God !!! she was crying all because of me.


Geet: chodo mera hath .


Maan: i'll but after dressing ,, please let me do Geet.


Geet: i can do myself ,,, itne mahino se tum mujhe nahi sambhal rahe thy.


Maan: i know , but now i'm here for u so let me do , it's my duty .


Geet: aapki duty mei meri insult kerna bhi aata hei kya ?


He was cleaning her hand with lower head and applied med then dressed her hand .

Geet: koi jaroorat nahi hei aapko meri fikar kerne ki.


Maan: to kiski fikar karu ? He kept the things aside and held her hand .


Geet : mujhe nahi pata .


Maan : nahi pata to jaan lo , Geet mei tension mei tha aur tum per naraz ho gaya .. i'm sorry . Geet tumhe uss haal mei dekhker mujh per kya guzrei tum nahi samajh sakti ,, aur shayad kabhi samajh bhi nahi paogi , kunki tum mere liye kuch feel nahi kerti ... I'm nothing for u .


He cupped her face in his palms and made her to look at him .. Geet i'm really sorry ,,, mujhe sach ka pata nahi tha , shayad tumhe bhi nahi hoga ki ye sab Pam ne kiya hei * She was playing with ur life taking revenge from me * i'm d root cause of ur all sufferings .


Geet looked at him surprised though she got some hint about Pam but how Maan was so sure ? Why he was accusing him ?


Geet: Pam was hurting me because of u , but why?


Maan felt a lump in his throat unable to reveal d ugly truth * he placed his forehead on hers , closing his eyes tightly he whispered .


Maan: matt pucho Geet ki ku kiya , it's shameful ,, aur mei nahi chahata ki ghar mei kisis ko iska pata chale ,, Dadima ko pata chala to unhe bahot dukh hoga , isliye please matt pucho * tumhe meri wajha se itna sab sahana pada Geet , Please mujhe maaf ker...


She cut his words placing her hand on his lips * he looked at her and she nodded in a NO .


Geet: don't blame yourself for others and control ur anger * it was u who hurt me with ur words in ur anger .


Maan: mei kya kerta Geet , tension mei sara gussa tum per nikal gaya.


Geet angrily : apna gussa nikalne ke liye aapko mei hi free ki nazar aati hu kya?


Maan: free ki nahi ho meri jaan se jyada kimati ho .


Geet startled with his words.


Maan: tumhe kya pata ki tum mere liye aur meri family ke liye kya ho ? Tum per gussa kerta hu kunki tum meri ho , tum mujh per ker lo maine kab roka ? He said innocently with a smile.


Now she was going to faint * she didn't know how to react and lowered her head shyly * there complaining moments broke with d grumbling sound of Geet's tummy .


Ooppss ... Geet bhuk lagi ?


Geet hummed and chuckled .


Maan: tum nahi bol sakti , bechara tummy bol raha hei and he too laughed. ... chup se bed mei baitho mai Nakul ko bolker aata hu.


He settled her in bed and went out to order for dinner and to change his dress. He came after few mins and settled on d other side of bed . Geet was busy in her ipad playing angry bird * Maan tittered looking at her and rolled his eyes nodding his head , but suddenly he remembered something.


Maan: Geet , baaki bandage check ki , wo theek hei na ?


Geet who was immersed in her game looked at him listening his worried voice .


Geet: wo theek hei , maine check ker li hei .. Relax.


She kept d pad aside and asked him in a serious tone .


Geet: Maan, how do u know that Pam was behind this ?


Maan: i caught her red handed with that waiter.


Geet looked at him shocked * he pressed her hand and with his .

Maan: don't worry ab wo tumhare aas-paas nei aayegi * Sunday marriage hei aur Monday morng wo dono humari life se chali jayengi. Geet mei chahata to kal ki bhi tickets ker sakta tha lekin mai iss khushi ke time per Dadima ko upset nahi kerna chahata aur shayad tum bhi essa nahi chahati.


Geet nodded in a yes ... lekin baad mei Dadima se kya kahoge ?


Maan: wo tum mujh per chod do , i'll handle that .



Precap --- Maan recalled his marriage vows ...


Part - 75

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Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 how is ur tooth ..??

better yar:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: priya111111

ab mujhe jaana hai cousin ke ghar jaarahi hoon waha se dinner ke liye bahar😳😳

kal raat ko milthe hai😉😉😉


bye bye babie,lakshu,sona

bye muahhh:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Happy new year Nishuuu:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤗 Hi nishu...


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