Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i dont want it as os..it must be ss or ff..i like to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ss or ff please
Can show how maneet love blosommed
Or how they got to know one another

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93


make it FF or SS...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
I would love 2 read more make ss or ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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all you suggests so i make this ss, because of that last teaser ( bathroom part ) came after some update so its ok with you and please give me beautiful comment waiting ,if any body want pm please send me request

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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
thanks dear for making it as ss

eagerly waiting for this update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 6

maan thanks for accept this relation , I read your latter and appreciate your true nature it is basic for any new relation , it make strong foundation to your relation ,i know you can't forget raj so easily but I am ready for wait ,till my life ,and wife and husband not bounded with only physical relation , it is relation from heart to there soul and *** part of it ,I can't hide but your word somewhere hurt me , geet I am not god a good person always act like me so don't make me god if you want to make me someone than make me your friend geet , one more thing geet you are first and last girl of my life and I want you with your heart and soul ,he put some form on her hand it is collage form for last year yes geet last year is pending he say think about study geet and he went from there . geet stand there like statute like ye kya tha he never give me chance to talk ,ek sath sab bol diya ,ye hamesha bhagt ku rahete hai / he talk all things and never give me chance to talk ,and why he always running like this ...

But she know that maan is angry on her someway she hurt him without intention ,she scold herself that why she always talk more than required , but he also don't give me chance to talk anyways , now I filed this form ,he is very humble person geet , she nodded her head and start to put information in it but she have so much difficulty in it , she can't do it like marriage statute , address etc ,she just went to dadi room and tell her ,problem ,dadi smile on her , she just going to help her but , idea came in her mind she know in this situation she have to push this two souls for this relation , she want to make dance but control herself and make serious face and say , geet beta I think hum bhi apaki jada madat nahi kar sakage , why you don't took help from maan , at last he have to sine on form na

geet lost in thought she feeling uncomfortable to took maan help ,but she know it is best chance to say sorry to him ,after some second she nodded in yes , and say dadi ,but I have to field it today

dadima so what geet took car with you and go to his office what is big deal , office staff know about your marriage so don't worry it brought smile on geet face she went to her room

Hear maan in his cabin sitting in his chair and thinking about geet letter and his life up and down in last 10 days so much changes came in his life, geet name brought smile on his face , but her thinking hurt him that she thinking his desire , he so much engrossed in his thoughts that he can't hear knock on cabin door , but loud knock break his thoughts and he came in Msk mode and angrily called out who is there come in

poor geet scared with his angry tone ,somehow with so much courage she open door of cabin ,maan want to know who is that person but when he saw geet on door he just lost in her beauty , a beauty like flower fresh and innocent ,he just lost her and geet thinking now also he is angry with her , maan phone come back him from his la la land , he just scold himself stop it maan what are you doing you just gaping her and make her uncomfortable , hold man hold

he have surprised and tension why geet came in office he say her to sit down

geet sit there ,a awkwardness come in between them but geet start to talk wo wo dadima ne kaha I should took help from you for this form , can I disturbed you in your work , maan just nodded in no , give me form ,geet give it to maan , maan read all and they start to filed it when maan ask her about marriage statute , she just tell him that she don't want to hide her marriage statue , maan happy with her ans he like his true and state forwarded nature ,at last maan ask her to sine on it , she just stand up and went to his chair and bend to sine , poor maan just froze in his place with her action , she is so closed to him her face in front of him he just want to touch it , he want to felled how it will be soft he brought his hand for it but geet voice brought him in reality ,she tell him thanks , and sorry

maan some how control his emotions and ask sorry for what,she just bend her head and say for morning I hurt you but trust me I don't have intention to hurt you god promise ,she took her hand on her throat ,like small girl , maan want to laugh but he control himself and with serious face say its ok geet now you can go , geet just saw him ye admi hai key kya hai thik se bath bhi nahi karta attitude / what is he ,he cant talk properly ,so much attitude ,in anger she just turn her face but in this processes her leg hit on maan table she just lost her balance and landed on maan lap both are shock with that

maan just gaping her face and she just trying to stand from his lap ,both lost on there own world , geet closeness took maan in other world he so much lost her he just want to crush her in his hug ,


at last geet look to his eyes for help but she just lost in his big chocolate eyes it is so deep like sea , she somehow tear her gaze and called maanji wo I want to stand up ,that brought maan back in reality poor soul just in his mind slap himself maan you are goan case he help her to stand



geet just imm start to walk but she feel her duppata stuck somewhere she first scare with thought can maan took it in his hand , she just turn to scold him but her duppata stuck in his shirt button and he trying seriously to took out it , geet jada ki mat soch tera dimag na to ...

precap

geet came near cabin door she walking with bending head ,

she heard maan voice hey dear

geet shock with his word and turn her face towered him

There he standing there with opens hand as if he invites her in his hug

she open her mouth for talk something but someone slightly push her , and that person who push geet , she is a beautiful girl who hug maan





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Dream come true with maaneet


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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
nice update

now dadi wants to make these two people to come close and she told geet to take help from maan tofill the form😳😳and wo kaam success bhi hogayi

precap tho aur bhi interesting hai😆😆😆jealousy ki shuruwaat hone waali hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Lovely update
Dadi too good
Lap wala moment 😉
Geet in shock seeing maan hugging a girl
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh maan this is just the start
aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya
god that was so funny for sure
its gonna test his patience for sure
that was funny right
very much so i think
cheers for pm

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