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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.











Part - 51



He held her hands in his and looked in her deep eyes beseechingly .

Maan: uss haq se jo Kismat ne hume diya hei * uss rishty se jisme hum bandhe to hei per mahasoon nahi ker pa rahe hei * uss vishwaas se jo hume hai , lekin maan nahi pa rahe * sab kuch clear hote hue bhi ek dhund ki deewar beech mei hei * Geet hum ek rishty mei bandhe hei , aur issiliye uska dikhawa ker rahe hei ,, agar koi rishta nahi hota to dikhawe ki bhi jaroorat nahi hoti . Geet ye rishta humari zindgi ki sacchai hei ... hum maane ya na maane ye sach ab badal nahi sakta aur mai isse maana chahata hu .


Geet was looking at him constantly trying to absorb his words* he is right that their relation is a bitter truth and they can't deny this reality.


Maan: Geet tumhe ne kaha tha ki tumhe ateet se na jodu , tumhara mere past se koi lene dena nahi hei , aur mai bhi wahi chahata hu ki mere aaj tumse jude .


Geet: lekin aap apne ateet se aaj bhi jude hai to mujhse kaise judd saktey hei Maan?


Maan: nahi Geet yakeen karo mei nahi yaad kerna chahata wo sab , haan bure incident humari zindgi ka hissa to hotey hei lekin hum kabhi yaad nahi kerna chahatey.


Geet : lekin aap to kertey hei , usse jeete hei har pal .


Maan: essa nahi hei Geet.


Geet: afsos yahi hei Maan, ki essa hi hei ... aap aaj bhi kisi aur ke Mangetar hei aur kisi dusre ke mangetar ko Geet apne se nahi jodd sakti * uss per apna haq nahi samajh sakti * she got up and came down in kitchen .


G e e t ... He was stunned with her words * wo essa ku sochti hei ? Jab shaadi hum dono ki hui hei to wo mujhe kisi aur ka Mangetar kaise kaha sakti hei ? Mai uskha husband hu to mangetar bhi to ... damn on me * he remembered his engagement and looked at his hand with an open mouth, why didn't I notice this ? why i forgot this ? he removed that engagement ring immediately from his hand and threw that in anger. Kitni takleef hoti hogi usse .. mei ye kaise bhool gaya ki meri shaadi Geet se hui thi ,,, engagement nahi .. God!! wo daily isse mere hath mei dekhti thi * kitna dukh deta hu mai usse aur hope kerta hu ko wo apna dukh mujh se hi share kare . He hid his face in his palms .. nahi janta ki maine kya-kya damage kiya hei ? pata nahi kab us nagin ka saya humari zindgi se dur hoga? Kya clarification dunga is damage ke liye?


He went down for dinner and sat their quietly but his eyes were following Geet * She was serving to all and when she came near him , he held her hand taking d advantage of others presence .


Maan: Geet , tum bhi baitho aur dinner karo , Nakul serve ker dega. He gesture he to sit near him.


Geet was stunned with his action * she looked at him confusingly .


Maan ignored her look and said again : baito pahale khana khao fir kuch kerna.


All were looking at them and Geet was in fix ... kya karu ab ? sab kuch jante hue bhi ye jaan bujh ker essa ker raha hei .


YSK: haan beta Geet baito tum bhi , Nakul serve karega.


All Khurana were very happy with Maan's efforts and his care for Geet. Maan served in Geet plate and gesture her to eat * Geet gave him a deadly glare like .. I'll see u later and ate reluctantly .

After dinner all were back in their rooms * Maan knew that Geet didn't leave him . He was waiting for her and preparing himself to face her anger.


Maan: Maan, chup- chap sun lena jo kahe , wo jitna tujh per gussa karegi utni hi uske dil ki kadwahat kam hogi * shayad yahi ek tareeka hei uske dukh ko bahar nikalne ka .


Geet came in with a grumpy mood and threw a glare at him * Maan was looking at him with a fake smile which raised her temp.


She came near his bed and stood there placing her both hands on waist. Maan looked at her innocently but laughed in his heart .. Jungli billi ho gai shuru.


Geet: samajhtey kya ho aap khud ko ? meri sharafat ka kuch jyada hi advantage le rahe ho * aap sab kuch jantey ho fir bhi sabke samne mujhe force kiya dinner ke liye .. ku?


Maan: Geet usme bura kya hei ? OK , exchange samajh lo .. mai coffee pee leta hu tumhari , tum dinner ker lo .. baraber.


Geet: mera dil nahi manta to ku mujhe force ker rahe ho ? She helplessly sat on bed with tears in her eyes.


Maan felt a pang in his heart * he put his lappy aside and cupped her face lovingly * mera gussa mujh per nikaal lo, meri wajhah se khud ko ya apni baki family ko dukh matt do ... Please .


Geet looked at him .. meri family ?


Maan: haan tumhari family aur ye sach hei jhut ya dikhawa nahi Geet. Tumne mujhe accept nahi kiya lekin humare rishte ko to accept kiya hei * Geet ... Please meri galti ki saza apni ess family ko matt do , please. Mei to shayad tumhe deserve hi nahi kerta , lekin tum agar jadoo aur pari ki tarah mujhe bhi apna dost maan logi to mere liye kaafi hei .


Geet was confused with all these complications in their life * he was right that she accepted this marriage but not him * for her he belonged to someone else but she is his wife and she can't deny this. He is not that bad and trying to cop-up * we can't change our fate but we can try to live a normal life in a friendly way * at least family to khush rahe aur kisi ko kuch kahane ka moka na mily warna wo Pam and GD koi chance nahi chodengi . aur uss chipku Pam ki intention to kuch theek nahi lagti.. apne pati sambhalte nahi , dusro ke per Laar tapka rahi hei.. grrr . K*****.


Maan: Geet , kuch to bolo ...chup ku ho..? he looks at her with a hope .


Geet: I need time and please don't force me * give me some time .


Maan: Thanks Geet , and i'm saying again be careful , that Pam trying to poke her nose in our family matters , wo acchi ladki nahi hei.


Geet looked at him with a raised brows trying to get d meaning and smirked.


Geet: acchi to hei , aapko to essi hi hot chick pasand hei .. mod , advanced party girls .


Maan sighed helplessly .. accha bahot acche se janti ho mujhe , hmmm Geet ?


Geet smiled naughtly and replied: mei nahi aap sambhal ker rehana ..KM ki hawa kharab hei aaj- kal , akele gym mei matt jaya karo, aapni Izzat bacha ke rekhana Basanti and laughed out loud.

First Maan didn't get her words but after few seconds he slapped his head .. kya karu mei iss ladki ka ? He was so much happy to see her like this .. cheerful and naughty * she was laughing and he was staring at her with a non faded smile.


Precap --- Dhanteras and a gift for Graha-Lakshmi ...


Part - 52

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3832914/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-122-10-dec




Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mohi matlab bulbul??? i read only haq

and neha ne tho kal kiya tha na.. aaj bh kiya kya?

ha aaj bhi ud diva
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Posted: 11 years ago
yee me 1st
Lovely ud babiee
Maan explained how she has a right on him and geet told he is someones mangetar now too and geet dont want to take something which is not her's
Maan then realised about the ring and threw it away
Maan made geet eat with all
Geet angry on maan and blaston maan(a small one though)
Geet warns maan to save his dignity from pam
Edited by mehak173 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


mohi matlab bulbul??? i read only haq

and neha ne tho kal kiya tha na.. aaj bh kiya kya?



haan aaj bhi ek update diya neha ne
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab buddu angry bird ko akal aaya ring ke baaremein yaad aaya.

chalo atleast yehdono baat jo kare aur saari clear hogayi

maan ne sher ki muh may haath daala😆😆😆

kitna samjhadaar hogaya hai aaj kal angry bird
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mera spamming warning aaaya and res karne main late ho gayi
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Posted: 11 years ago
uff neha updated... aur meine dekha bhi nahi😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaj richa ka bhi ud hai saathiya ka
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

uff neha updated... aur meine dekha bhi nahi😭



main bhi pic daalne gayi thi par dekho tho update kiya usne shaam ko
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Posted: 11 years ago
its my birth day yaar.. i m done with cake cutting n all.. i actually asked my parents to wind up all fast so i can read the mist.. nw plzzz update jaldi de do... my frens r waiting for me..

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