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DancinFireflies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Priyasi
Ahhh!!!! Missed Maan so much in the update yaar. He'll be back. In the story it's barely been a day since he went away😆 Please bring him back soon in the story.

But loved the way Inayat explained Geet and how Amanda was dropping her special comments in between and finally Inayat stopped on ways on seducing Maan...Aren't her girlies awesome😛

Loved the whole update... I just loved that line I asked him to leave and frustrating man listened to me' That was really hilarious for me... Couldn't imagine Geet's expressions while saying that...Glad u liked it :)

Please update soon, a longgg update please... For the next few days, no chance for a long update. I am bogged down with work😭 though I love every moment of it

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DancinFireflies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Update in a few minutes :) Not a long one :( If i go for a long one, it'll come next week. I barely had enough time to pull this one together :'(

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DancinFireflies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

😊

Edited by DancinFireflies - 10 years ago

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

ohh that was a real scary prank...😕 phew1!!! and as maan said since its not a sillly prank and that makes it even more scary😕 thanku for the part...nice one

Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

So that means the villain has started his action...
Good writing...

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Damn that was disgusting. eww.

i m sure it is that man who was spying on geet.😡

Maan is awesome. Geet, make sure u got him.😛

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

js caught up nw with lst few updates! Terrific updates! Well written! Pls add me to ur pm list! Sorry 4 late lieks n comments!

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mauaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

that was scary

geet doesnt scare easily but this spooked her

and maan is sure it is not a prank

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Priyasi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Wow, it was surprising for me to see an update. I was waiting for a pm for you and just out of nothing to do I was going through the topics and saw a topic where writers were giving information about themselves. And you were the last to comment. Your name clicked and I just opened it. When thought of reading the FF again, I discovered you already have updated a chapter which I missed...

Phew, guess, spoke too much...

Ok, back to the update... It was really scary. Initially I thought it might be Maan who played that prank with her to just make her realise that she needs to live with her family and not alone like this. But as I proceeded, I realised it wasn't Maan and the last line scared me.

It must be the man who was keeping an eye on her...

Your stories are indeed infectious yaar. I love reading your stories...

And BTW, thanks for commenting on that thread because earlier I thought you just this single story, through that thread I came to about your another story. I read the prologue and its gripping. Will comment about it on the thread itself...

Edited by Priyasi - 11 years ago