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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



par yeh expression kyun😉😆



curious to know y she is late😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



curious to know y she is late😉



wo thodi der keiye chup rahegi jawab deni padegina issliye😉😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




kya karke aayi ho ji😉


full day out...🥱
F*Ly frnd ke ghar visit..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

kitne tym se terii rah dekhing me ,priya nd laks,,,,😆
knha thiii babieee jeej ke saath,,,,😛


aur kiske sath jaungi..jeej hi to hei..😆
how r u..??😊
aunti gai yajaane wali hai...?😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


full day out...🥱
F*Ly frnd ke ghar visit..😊



yehlo lakshu lils hum tho kuch aur soch rahe thay😛😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



curious to know y she is late😉


😆😆 wo aadat se majboor..
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Posted: 11 years ago




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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 33




She was looking at Mahinder with a smile observing his every feature like assuring herself that she was looking at a right person * he was still in shock , she was infront of him after almost 20yrs ... She didn't change a bit , just lil matured and weak . sensing his condition she took a lead to talk .

Rano: kaise ho mahi ?


Mahi: Tum .. yahan ?


Rano: hmmm .. Aajkal yahi posted hu , abhi kuch mahino pahale hi aai hu * kaafi weak lag rahe ro .. theek to ho na .. yahan hospital mei kaise?


Mahi: annual check up ke liye aaya tha * tum kaisi ho ?


Rano: jaisa choda tha , akele.


Mahinder looked at her stunned and asked after few secs... family ?


Rano:mere samne hei .


Mahi: Rano !!!


Both looked at each other with pained and moist eyes * lot of questions and emotions floating in their teary eyes * her cell buzzed and they came in reality * she replied in yes and ok then cut d call.


Rano: check up ho gaya tumhara?


Mahi: nahi , shayad turn aa gai ho.


Rano: which Dr. ?


Mahi: Col. Dr. * * swamy.


Rano: slip do mujhe , aur aao mere sath.


He gave her appointment slip and followed her to Dr's chamber. After half an hour they were out and going towards another chamber . He read d Name Telly .. Col.Dr Ranjana... She took her seat and gestured him to sit then called a Med Assit ringing d bell. A boy came in and she gave him d papers with some instructions and told Mahi to go with him for tests . Mahinder went out with s boy and she compleated her pending work in between .


Mahinder came back after one hour with d same boy and hand over her reports* Rano made some call and secured her work.


Rano: ghar chaloge na ?


Mahinder saw at her reluctantly and puzzled .


Rano: please , she pleaded .


He nodded and she got up from her seat * he followed her and they were in parking area .


Rano: tumhari gadi mei chale? Meri driver le aayega.She sent a msg to her driver and then both moved to mahi's car. She narrate him d way and after few min both were in front of a big service flat . She rang d bell and a maid opened d door. Rano ordered her to prepared tea and then lunch for both and told Mahi to freshen up showing him d washroom* she too went to her bed room to change her Uniform and came back in living room after few min* Mahinder didn't find any other member in d house * both were having their tea silently giving each other some looks . At last Mahinder broke d silence .


Mahi: sath mei aur kaun hei ?


Rano: tumhare hisaab se kise hona chahiye?


Mahi: tumhari family ya uncle/aunty.


Rano took a deep sigh and spoke looking at her empty cup: Dad ab rahe nahi aur Maa ye blame deker bhai ke paas US chali gai ki maine apna ghar to basaya nahi unka ujaad diya ... She cursed me for dad's demise.


Mahi: Oh , I'm sorry for that but why she blamed u ?


Rano: because i denied to merry any one , I was helpless , they were forcing me day and night and in frustration i told them not to enterfere in my life and after a hot argument dad got a heart attack and ... maa blamed me for that left with Bhai * he too stopped talking to me .


Mahi: ku kiya tumne essa ? u promised me then why?


Rano: no Mahi , i never promised u ... I told u that I would try to move on but I couldn't ... i couldn't .


Mahinder was shocked with this reality * he never thought that she could do this ? He was in an impression after their last meeting that she would go with her family's wish and moved on , but today he was feeling very guilty that she had spoiled her life because of him * His one Compromise spoiled three lives .. his, Rano's and now Guddu's. He was chocked and cursing himself for all this.


Raho: Mahi , tum batao.. tum kya ker rahe ho aur Guddu kaisi hei?


Mahinder closed his eyes tightly to controlled his tears * Kya kahu .. kaise kahu ki Guddu ke sath bhi wahi hua jo uske sath hua * ***


Rano: mahi kya hua..?


In KM...at night


Dadima was back from their tour and now all were planning for diwali * GD and Pam too were very excited for that because didn't celebrate this festival like people celebrate in India.


All were gathered in d dining hall and talking on random topics then Annie chirped in excitement forgetting d reality .


Annie: aree Dadima coming week mei to Karwachouth hei aur iss baar to humre ghar bhi manaya jayega .. Guddu ka pahale jo hei.. WOW!!! Khub maza aayega.


Pam: karwachouth ?? what is that?


Annie described her and pam remembered that she saw in some hindi movies and TV shows with GD .


GD : Aree wah to iss baar hume live dekhne ko milega gr8 * mei to kaafi kuch bhool bhi gai * it's going very interesting. Pam ki mom to in sabme believe hi nahi kerti .


But in all this conversation some faces lost their colour * Dadima and YSK gave a painful look to each other * Maan and Geet's hearts felt a blow and kept mum * Geet's eyes felt a burn and she blinked her lashes many times to controle her tears.

GD: Geet tum to fast karogi na? Aur Didi aap kya doge Geet ko? I want to see all .. kya kaise hota hei? Pam baby i'm sure u'll enjoy it lot.


Pam : OMG!! Geet will u fast for whole day ?



Precap" mull over d relation.


Part - 34

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3812181/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-4-updated-pt38-pg136-24-nov?pn=68





Sorry for mistakes.
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

ab ek side main beti ke track ke saath saath ... ab geet ke papa ka bhi hoga kya???

ranos life is really hard!!! no love and no family😭

hayeee angry bird ke liye ab vrat bhi rakhna padega geet ko???

waise bhi khaathi kya hain bechaari? noodles and cookies

oyeee mein first aayi..


Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


full day out...🥱
F*Ly frnd ke ghar visit..😊

babie aaj updttt mein mneet mmnts chayea ,,,,merii refreshment,,,,bt tune oldie lov stry ghusa rekhiii hei ,,,mahi nd rano,,,,ab kya Karun,,,,😆

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