REVENGEFUL LOVE #6 Part 47 updatd on P-121 & Teaser P-122 4/1/201 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART - 44

NIGHT is very tough for all. One stroam is running outside and other one which is running in every one's heart. In this one night everything has change. Maan is fortunate that he he got medical attention,before its turn to late. Doc do their job but failed to regain his concious and now they feared about him. If soon he wont regain concious he might be went into a state of comma. He is breathing but his brain is not working properly. Constant monitoring is checked by the specialists.

Night went is sobbings for Geet. She wont evn have any idea what her father do with Maan. She only crying for her love without taking a pause. Sun rises but nothing will change. Geet behaved stubbornly and denied to follow theor any order. She wants to go back to her love which is not acceptable by Singhania's. Neither she ate any thing nor she stop crying. She skip her breakfast and only blabbering one name Maan. Maan,the name Singhania's hate most this time. RP irritates with her annoying behaviour and instrust all not to show any mercy on her,untill she stop praying his name. Morning change into noon and no improvement in both's condition. Both were laying dear on their respective places. She in her room and Maan on hospital's bed. Facuality of hospital were discussing about Maan's case as no one came to take his responsibility. Now they were thinking of throwing him out of this expensive hospital and shifted him into a govt. Hospital.

'sir i think we must shift him today. The room costs to much and no one is coming to pay off.'' One of the junior doc is discussing with senior one.

'i think you are right. I have concerned with local hospital's doc and hey agreed to take him,so shift him. Get ready his papers.' he granted a permission of shifting him to local one. Both were discussing while passing through a corridor when one voice hold them both.

'dont you dare even think so. He is not a roadside begger to whom you will throw to some any hospital. He is MSK,which name is enough to buy your hospital.' the rage of her voice shut both's mouth and they wont found words to defend themselves.

'i am sorry mam. But no one coming to see him and his bills are also pending. Wont know how much time will he take to recover. In that case the rent of that room...' He is defending presenting his problem but she wont listen and glared both. Her gestures and attitude is hard to tackle.

'bills are already payed and here is the slip. And who said he is alone. Till i am alive he is never be alone and lefted. Now show me where is he and howz his condition.' her eyes spark shots and tone recent. She has been upset with the discussion she just hear about Maan.

'aap...?' Doc enquired.

'Somya. Somya singh khurana,his sister in law. Shall we go now?' Somya command them.

All 3 entred in his room where Maan is laying lifeless,hanging between death and life. Somya eyes turn wet seeing him in this miserable state. She went near him and carees his hairs softly. "why he is still unconcious? What the hell doc are doing?" she asked with a dominance.

'mam we gave him our best treatment but he is not responding. We feared might he go into comma.' Doc clear his throat and tell her about Maan's condition.

Somya sit near him and stroke his hairs. 'kuchh nahi hoga ise. Maan tujhe hosh me aana hi hoga. Apni Geet k liye. Wo b to tera intzar kar rai hai.' Tension rosed on her forehead. She wants him to get well soon for his love. She stayed with him and wait for his recovery.

In evening, when all singhania's get together in hall RP asked for Geet. Wheather she ate something or not? Avantika shook her head negatively. Her head is lower and deeply she scared of his anger.RP went towards her room followed by other family members.

'is ladki ne to hadd kar di hai.' Brij frustrated and fumed at her stubborness. He too followed his father in her room.

RP opened the lock and eneter inside,where Geet is layingon floor. She is sobbing this time too. See the door opened Geet stood up and trying to invade the mob,obstructing her way to go to Maan. She trying but RP clutch her arm firmly and dragged to face him. He glared her dreadfull. His gripp is very hard and Geet is wincing in pain.

'chhodiye mujhe. Mujhe jana hai.' Geet pleads in droodling voice. Her eyes were sweeled and face turn pale. She wont even change her clothes. Just one insanity bouds her,which forcing her to reach to Maan as soon as possible. Her every part craving for his touch. Without him she is dying like Maan without her.

'enough Geet. Now listen to me very carefully. Till now i fulfill your each and every demand no matters its right or wrong. But this time i am not going to allowed you to jump in hell. We dont know how he manage to fooled you but we are not going to webbed by him. So better you forgot him.' RP gave stress on his each and every word,glaring her with his wide eyes.
Geet annoyed with his words. She too stared her father. "no one can make me forgot my Maan. i can forgot breathing but not Maan. I love him and no one change this,not even you dad." Geet declared her decision in very strong way. RP forgot this stubbornness is hereditary.

Geet wriggling for freedom and waving herself outside. This maked RP angry. He trying to stop her and talk with her but Geet wont ready to listen him. She is fearing for Maan. Her heart told her that might be her love is in some trouble. "dad leave me please. I want to go back to my Maan.'' Geet repeating herself and makin mad others.

The patience level of her father is breking now and he slapped her in fit of his rage. He slapped her so hard that she falls away on floor. In his lifetime this was first ever he slapped his daughter. All were shock with his reaction.

At the same time Maan's eyes opened jerkly with a shrek as he going through immence pain. 'GEET...' his body is shaking and he mouth only uttering one name Geet. Somya sat near him and hold his face,but Maan's eyes was in shock. He wasnt stable and breathing very sharply. Somya trying to make him calm but he forcing himself. She instantly sumoned doc,they came and gave him injection to lower down his restlessness. Due to the effect of injection doc able to overpowered his condition and in few minutes he again went in sleep mode.

'doc please tell me what's going on with him?' Somya getting scared with his condition.

'dont worry mam,now he is out of danger. He get back his concious which is quite a good sign. Maine inhe injection de diya hai ab ye chain se so payenge.' Doc assured of his recovery. 'by the way who is Geet? Please call her because its good for him if she will stay with him.' doc told and left Somya in turmoil.

She glance back at Maan,who's every breath only taking a one name Geet. She caressed his forehead.'kaha se lau main teri Geet ko. Uske liye to tujhe khud hi ladna hoga sabse. Maan wake up soon.'

RP bend and clenched her arm again hardly. 'now listen to me very carefully. This is my last warning. If i heared his name again from your mouth or you trying to go to him then no one can prove bad as mine. Main uska wo haal karunga ki uske farishte b kaamp uthenge and i mean it.'' RP cautioned her dreadfully.

'nai aap Maan ko kuchh nahi karenge.' She scared with the threat of her father.

'i will if you wont obeyed me and you know i can do this. If you want his safty then stay here with us and stop remembering him.' RP's bifg red eyes spitting so much hatred when he is talking about Maan. He scared her to death.

Geet knows the power of her father and at what extend he can go. RP leave with others and locked her room again. Geet squeezed in herself. She hugged her legs and cried loudly.

Ayesha cant see her like this she trying to melt Brij for her Angel's sake. 'Brij papa ko Angel pe hath nahi uthana chahiye tha. Please kya hum log calmly is matter ko solve nahi kar skte?'

'i know dad take a hard step but Geet leave no option. Cant you see that?' Brij threw his coat and loosen his tie.

'Geet to bachpan se hi jiddi hai. Firr aj kyu sab sab uske pichhe pade hai. Pehle bhi to uski har jidd puri karte the na. Apko andaza hai kal raat se usne kuchh nahi khaya hai, ro ro kar uska bura haal hai. Or sab k sab sirf apni ego ko shant karne me lage hai.' Ayesha snap back showing him a mirror.

Brij fumed and cleched her hard. 'so what you want use kue me girne de? Jo aadmi itna ghinona kaam kar skta hai,uske sath meri behan ka future secure hai main kaise maan lu?' he glared her.

'agree. Your fear is right but this is not the way all treating her. Beti ki tarah uski wish ka khyal rakha hai maine. Usko is haal me nahi dekh skti main. Apka dil patter ho skta hai mera nahi' Ayesha wont scared with his furious eyes. She stared in his eyes and answer back with the same tone he had.

'then close your eyes.' Brij leave her with a jerk and moved inside the washroom.

Ayesha moved to her room. She embraced and wiped off her tears. 'kuchh kha le bachhe.' she requests lovingly.

'parjaiji please let me go to my Maan. Use kuchh hua hai. Mujhe kal se ghbrahat ho rai hai.' Geet spoke to her in a hope may she melts and help her.

'Angel you know i cant help you unless Brij agreed.' she is helpless in front of whole family.

'parjaiji aap mujhe apke phone se baat karne do. Bas ek baar main Maan ki awaaz sunn lu. Please parzaji.' Geet wants to assured herself that he is fine.

Ayesha nodded and gave her phone to Geet. As she hold her phone,it was snatched by Brij. Brij came and scold Ayesha and Geet both.

'mana kiya tha na. Fir itni si baat kyu samjh nahi aati. Both of you, keep in your mind that from this house no one can make contact to him.' he cautioned and leave with Ayesha's phone leaving them sobbing behind.''
Somya lefts as doctor suggest her. Now he is sleeping so need of any one near him. Somya reached before Samarth's arrival. Somya lied to everyone in KM,that she is going to some close friend still all knows where she is was for whole day.

Arpita struck her way,feeling hesitated to asked anything due to Samarth's fear. She read her eyes. 'Maan abhi zinda hai. Coz uski maa abhi zinda hai. Or koi jaye na jaye par main jaungi.' she said stiffly and moved to her room. Arpita lowered her eyes as being his mother she wont do anything for him.

Piyush overheared and went behinnd her. He clutch her and twist around. 'why you go hospital? Dad ne mana kiya tha na?' he snorted. The line of his mouth went hard and his brows pulled together in a dark scowl.

She stared in his eyes. 'kyunki main use waha marne ki liye nahi chhod skti. Sab log ego me itne andhe ho gaye hai ki ye tak bhul gaye hai wo is ghar ka beta hai,apka bhai hai. Leave it Piyush. Mere liye Maan or Samar ek brabar hai.' she drawled with a heavy dose of sarcasm.

'you know what he did?' his eyes narrowed as they stared each other down.

'or uske liye Geet ne use maaf kar diya hai. You know what you all are sick. Sabko sirf Maan ka gunah dikh raha hai kabhi kisi ne socha usne itna bada gunah kyu kiya? Use aise karne pe majboor kisne kia? Hum ne. I know tume meri baat achhi nahi lagegi par jaisa is ghar ka mahol hai usne Maan ko aisa banaya hai. Apko pata hai aaj tak main maine concieve kyu nahi kiya? Sirf isi wajhse. Kyunki main ek or Maan ko is duniya me lana nahi chahti.' she flinch off his hand and leave him confuse with his thoughts.

Five days passed and Maan's health is improving. Most of the time he stayed unconcious due to the effects of his medicines. His nutrition need is done through glucose. Somya concrened the doctors of him.

'Maan ko recover hone me kitna or time lagega?'

'his wounds are heeling,but he is very week.' doc told her.

Meanwhile they hear some nosie comin from Maan's room. He wake up and removing all cannuala's from his arms. Nurse trying to stop him but he is getting out of control.

'mujhe Geet k paas jana hai.' he pushed her away and ran outside. Somya came with doctors and nurses. Maan is running hitting here and ther. He is very week and cant able to walk properly. All ran behind him and caught him sucessfully.
Maan is wriggling but his body wont support him. Soon he lost his concious again and they took him to his bed. Doc again attached cannuala to him and gave injection.

Note:- i wont know whats wrong but why you guys wont gave like. 😭 abse main b short updates diya karungi agr is baar b target hit nahi hua to...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
poor maaneet feeling bad for them😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks god somya come rigrt time why both familly is behaving like this felling bad 4 maaneet hope geet ki bhabi aur maan ki bhabi mil kar maaneet ko mila de lovely update waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Frankly i dont really follow this story but this part was very emotional!
poor maaneet are sufering! waiting 4 more 2 c how will they overcome all troubles n unite!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kya yaar aur kitna rulayegi

saathiya mai bhi rula rhi thi aur isme bhi

maaneet ki halat nhi dekhi jati yaar aise


avantika aur soumya dono ne sb kha sb ke sb apni ego ki wajah se ye sb kr rhe hai

i agree ki maan ne glat kiya bt usne jiske saath ki jab usne hi maaf kr diya to ab geet ki family kyun bura behave kr rhe hai

soumya ne shi kha ki maan ne jo kiya wo un logo ke wajh se hi kiya

kb maaneet saath mai honge
emotional update
wating for nxt
Edited by shalinimaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh richu baby love u for the update ,,,aweasum update too gud,,,very painful maaneet both crying for there love the two painful hearts suffering for eachother,rp hitting geet n scaring her n soumya going against her family for maan...loved it alott it was awesum baby superb now waiting for next...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was even more harder than last time
Both the families are just getting their egos in between
Agar dojo ko aise hi alag rakha toh they won't live for too long
Is that what they want
Only then they will let go of their egos
Then it seems that their wish will come true and soon
I know what maan did is unpardonable
But it is geet perogrative to forgive maan
Not any one else
And she did forgive him so they can't say anything
If they carry on both maneet won't be left
Phir chatiyega apna ego
I agree with both bhabhis man
They will be the death of maneet it seems
I know why they are doing this but hope they see sense and soon
Or all shal be lost
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thats an awesum part... Hope maan recover soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god atleast soumya came to save maan. Yeh RP aur brij kitna disgusting hogaye hai aur yeh RP geet par haath bhi utaya.
geet is pregnant na😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional update babu...pata nai aur kitna pain sahna padega maaneet ko...
somya bhabhi aa gai hospital maan k liye... ...wo maan ko kabhi nai chod sakti...geet pe torture ho rh h...geet ko uske dad ne slap kiya...n geet ka dhamkaya b ki wo agar maan ki safety chahti h tho maan ko bhul jaye...
i don't know tu aage kya krne wali h...geet apne ghar me kaid h maan hospital me pata nai ye log dubara kaise milenge...i hope tu aur kuch dhamaka na kare

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