INNOCENT FLOWER-UPDATED PT 18 PG 116 ON 18-03-2019

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shri12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Awesome geet was so cute

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

awww it was such a cute sweet part
hayee me so much lvd it
it took my heart
geet so innocent n liked naughty meera also😆 n her pranks
n maanu b aaya first part mai
n read her letter again
aww she lost her mom bt rano lv her like her own
waiting 4 more
lvd it

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Geet is writing letters to God and Maan is getting those letters from the age of 5...

u wrote in ur note that Maan is 25 and Geet is 20 yrs old so it means they have 5 yrs difference...

so when Maan started getting letters if we assume Maan to be 5+ so Geet must be some months old that time...I am confused first of all how can some month old baby write letter in such a clear language...and then how can a 5 yr old toddler can read that letter...5 yrs old toddler can study in just UKG and in UKG they are made to learn alphabets and some small words...

if u can then please increase their age as Geet atleast should be 6+ in class 1 and Maan should be atleast 11+ in class 6th...

waise it is very sweet story...I really like its theme...

thanx for pm...

Sure will change the age dear dont worry😛😉

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Awesome start 👏
Loved the choti geet writing letter to god
Eagerly waiting to know how maan received them

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Geet is so sweet! Meera teasing her! So Maan receiving the letters by mistake! Rano is nt her mom? Her mom Gauri died! Past n present well incorporated! update soon! Well written