THE LOCKET (13) MG FF,new thread link pg 1,COMPLETED - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

jhappi for u too🤗
it really wd hv been difficult to see tara so broken for dev for hvng seen how there relationship has cum to this level step by step can understand his turmoil 😔
i fell in luv with ur words abt luv Avi..they were so beautiful😊❤️
dev's helplessness was so very evident the way u described the whole scene it all took their luv story to a new height👏
and wht to say abt geet got to see a very diff side of her in todays update dev unknowigly gave her wht she ws seeking something to hold on to & to hope for👍🏼...noticed another thing that geet kept all this to herself where as she's always there for everyone else could relate to this aspect of her personality very well she has that void in her which stops her to open up abt her prblms to sumone which i thnk only a mother can fill🤔
feeling sad for maan but whtever he z doing z very much like the maan he was before too 😒
i thought pinky and adi were a happy couple but waha b problems aa gai
so its Ranbir now😆...so how long can maan control now...🥳eagerly lukin forward for the next part and the song too...and luvd todays songs choices very much😳
thank u soOo much for the update and the pm 😊and i just came to knw abt u being not well i hope & wish u r fine now...take care😳


@underlined: very good observation Gitu. It is her personality that she is there for evryone but she only shares with Maan. Ab kaha jayegi when he is clearly pushing himself away from her. She is trying to understand him but she is stuck in the push and pull he does.

Face off coming soon. Trying to write it differently so that it stays true to the characters. Hope it comes out okay.

Thanks for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

lovely update
nt worried and dev assuring her everything will be fine
interesting precap
waiting for next part

Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

dev ne kitna asha se sit, handle ki,,,lov whole soul mrg prtmaan ki halat badi kharab ho rehii,,,resolution 2 stay away 4rm geet ,,,,aur yeh kar nehii pa reha hei...

m thinking jab man ko sachai pta chalegii tab kya kaega,,,,???geet s hurt,,,bt apne hi words dev ke muh se sunke kya action legi,,,??ab ranvir,,,maan bechara kare bhi kya geet ki admirer list khatam hone ka naam nehii latiii...😆

Avi ne Maan ko pareshan kar rakha hai😆
Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

Not fair Avi
You have made me love dev in this story
He is a sweetheart and understands Tara so well
He can sees her fear and insecurity
He wants her to believe in their love and have Trust on him

And am so angry with Maan
He had jumped to conclusions
And now just to stay away from Geet be is being her so much
And she is taking it with a smile but breaking inside

😃 Fairness ki guarantee main kaise du...Fair and Lovely ke tube pe likha hai😆
Maan is just upholding the promise he made in his letter that he will keep away from her. He does not know that she never got the letter.
Face off coming up soon..
Thanks Punam😊 BTW the first comment you made was simply "Thanks". Yeh kis baat ke liye tha?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part.. Dev N Tara's talk.. How Dev made his I star.. happy again... Geet has witnessed their love.. she was thing abt Maan N her..she asked Maan he angry on her ? Uff.. Maan saab rude rude..😕 J Maan.. somewhere his heart still betrays him.. N always end up together being with his Geet..😆 Nice part Avi... Passionate dance is coming..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update.
Wow Dev, tuse great ho. I loved the way he is making Tara understand.

Poor Geet, still think what is it that she did wrong. And Maan is so helpless. He has to hurt her even when he does not want to.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved Dev - Tara Convo...
Avi ...Let Maan push her away from KC, KF & all ... but jab use sach pata chalega tho khud kitna pach tayega ... sab pair pe khuladi marte hai... aur yeh khud kuladi ko pair par mar raha hai...
Taras jayega Geet se ek nazar dekhne ke liye
Precap kitna bhi woh koshish karle... dil uske suntan thodi hai 😆
waiting for Dev the detective...
mera net 🤢 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
very very nice parts
read both the chapters together
I really admire Geet 's positive approach to life or love or towards her Maan
dev tara in each others arms
megha kabir in each others arms
but my dear maaneet
away from each other
Maan giving pain to his geet😕
though I loved megha and kabir part
and even dev nt filmy marriage
and I truly trust your creativity to unite maaneet also
which will be really different and interesting to read
precap was interesting
poor maan ko kitne logo se competition karna padta hai
sharukh, salman, bf teji, his misunderstanding and now ranbir
looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE. BUT I CANT REMEMBER RANBIR. IS HE THE GUY WHO WAS DRUNK IN MANALI? MAAN KA HAAL KUCH AISA HAIN ""
NAFRAT PASS AANE NA DE MOHABBAT DUR JAANE NA DE""
WAITING FR THE NEXT UPDATE. AUR DEV KO MAAN KE TYPE KIYE HUE LETTER KAB MILEGA? WAING FR DEV THE DETECTIVE AND DIL KE HATO MAJBOOR MAAN.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 58
excellent dear...
awesome...
so Dev has married Tara in his way to make her believe them...
Geet is reminded of Maan's words...
hmmm the gadha is irritating...
Geet was so nice and professional to have given the notes to Sasha even though twas her project...
stupid Maan...
so Maan has seen Tara with Dev and Geet is so lost in her thoughts...
poor her...

precap
nice one...
so Tara too is in the re-union?
and Maan is J...
Ranbir?
oh ho i have forgotten i think...
cont soon dear...

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