MG FF THE DIVINE FLOWER : thread 2: PART 39 : page 141 17th may - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

now i m getting scare for future update but my curiosity is also increasing to know what will happen next

galti koi aur kare aur sazza maaneet ko mile bina kissi wajah dono itne saal tak alag rahe nd maan also misunderstood geet
their fairytale love story came to end bcoz of geet was unable to say anything nd maan didn't got the time to listen her
nd too add to all that he married pari in front of all
the most favorite line till now for me is "Maan hi Geet he aur Geet hi Maan" the line is so sweet i m falling for it
dear i want to ask one question r u going to add maan marriage part too in further updates 😕

thnk U for the comments 🤗
Loved reading them... 😃
galti kisi aur ki he but test Maaneet ke love aur trust ka ho rha he.

he most favorite line till now for me is "Maan hi Geet he aur Geet hi Maan" the line is so sweet i m falling for it--- 😳 😳 thnk u. well whenever I write Maaneet, I get carried away myself 😆 😳
Yes Maan's marriage and why and how Maan did that will be revealed in further updates. See it is clear till nw that Maan wanted only Geet in his life but something shook him to the core and the whole love turned into hatred and poisoned him. And even hurting Geet, he will be hurting himself. So showing Maan's pov is equally important.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz update next part ASAP
Want present part too...
I really want k geet wapas chali jaaye maan ko chod k aur phur maan usko dunde...ami ko sambhale geet k bina taki usko ehsaas ho k baby ko sambhalna kitna mushkil hota he .geet ne akeke kaise sambhala hoga..bhale hi one week k liye hi sahi geet ko kahi bhej dena...maan ko abhi puri tarah ehsaas karao ki usk gusse ne liye decision ki wajah se geet be kitba uffer kiya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhubala123

thnk U for the comments 🤗
Loved reading them... 😃
galti kisi aur ki he but test Maaneet ke love aur trust ka ho rha he.

he most favorite line till now for me is "Maan hi Geet he aur Geet hi Maan" the line is so sweet i m falling for it--- 😳 😳 thnk u. well whenever I write Maaneet, I get carried away myself 😆 😳
Yes Maan's marriage and why and how Maan did that will be revealed in further updates. See it is clear till nw that Maan wanted only Geet in his life but something shook him to the core and the whole love turned into hatred and poisoned him. And even hurting Geet, he will be hurting himself. So showing Maan's pov is equally important.
😊


aur iss test me maan fail ho gaya ya phir yun kahon usse kar waya gaya
u get carried away in writing nd i get carried away after reading them
God now its scaring me more for geet usse kitni mushkil ke baad koi apna chahne wala mila that but he too left her in between
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ko maan ne KM se nikala tha geet ko ab outhouse me rakhna.
Itna humilate hine k baad geet ko waha ese hi nahi jana chahiye..
Maan ayr pari kitna close aaye shadi k baad ye bhi detail me vatana ..aur plz present track bhi vatao na
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

Kahi na kahi maan ka trust geet pe kam tga isliye usne ek baar bhi sach jaanne ki koshish nahi ki aur na geet pe bharosa kiya...
Geet ko maan pe bharosa tha k wo hamesha uska saath dega oar maan ne geet ko galat samjha aur usk character oe bhi shaq kiya...
Itna hi nahi par geet k saamne pari se shaadi karli..
Ye sab bhool k maan k sath aage badna gert k liye itna asan nahi hoga
Chahe gusse me hi sahi par maan ne pari se shaadi kar k maan ki first wife hone ka haq geet se cheen liya jo ki geet ja sapna tha
Ye to maan chah k bhi nahi badal sakta ..jitna pyar gwet se maan ne kiya utna bharosa rakh k kam se kam ek koshish to karta sach jaane ki ..
Childhood se maan geet ko janta tha kaise soch liya k geet ysko dhoka dedegi

thnx a lottt for the comment 🤗
U r right. Geet was overconfident about Maan. But Maan failed her. It won't be easy to get back her. But now Geet can't just think about herself. She is a mother and she has to keep Ami in her mind before taking any step.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jab maan ne geet ko beech raste me akeka chod dita to geet bhi uski asani se nahi milni chahiye..thoda papad belne do...aate daak ka bgav pata lagne do
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

Geet ko maan ne KM se nikala tha geet ko ab outhouse me rakhna.
Itna humilate hine k baad geet ko waha ese hi nahi jana chahiye..
Maan ayr pari kitna close aaye shadi k baad ye bhi detail me vatana ..aur plz present track bhi vatao na

outhouse wali baat mene socha tha. phir laga zyada hoga. no one will accept. but now will do that 😳 😃
present track isliye hold pe he kyu ki phir wo past ki contnuity kharab karega. aur past likhte lihkte update lamba bhi ho jaata he. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

Jab maan ne geet ko beech raste me akeka chod dita to geet bhi uski asani se nahi milni chahiye..thoda papad belne do...aate daak ka bgav pata lagne do

😆 bechare Maan pe reham karo... jaan dene wala tha na Geet aur AMy ke liye 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia


aur iss test me maan fail ho gaya ya phir yun kahon usse kar waya gaya
u get carried away in writing nd i get carried away after reading them
God now its scaring me more for geet usse kitni mushkil ke baad koi apna chahne wala mila that but he too left her in between

fail nhi karvati to story kaise agey badhati??? 😆

aur chahne wala wapas bhi to a gaya 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhubala123

outhouse wali baat mene socha tha. phir laga zyada hoga. no one will accept. but now will do that😳😃

present track isliye hold pe he kyu ki phir wo past ki contnuity kharab karega. aur past likhte lihkte update lamba bhi ho jaata he.😳



Ok will wait for prwsent track...dev pe dhuadhaar joote chappal ki barsaat karna babaji..
Outhouse wala part bilkul jyada nahi hoga balki geet ki situartion ko justify karega .
Plz abhi se start kardo next part likhna aur try to update on weekend mera easter he sunday ko mujhe gift mil jaayega..
If posible warna I will wait
Love u and ur writing

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