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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Perfectiie

Jaldi se confress karo na!!!
OMG twist!!!
Hope kuch accha ho
can't wait 4 it
anyways superb update dear
loved it
eagerly waiting 4 next part
update soon



Thankyuuu so muchhh😳 dnt know why ur comment Always encourages me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi_jain

Ye kya????

Cliffhanger pe chod diya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Well written! Maan tryn to talk to her bt she runs away or hides! Wt did she see? Wt twist? update soon! well written! Pls update ss Pyaar (sorry 4gt the title)!



Thankkkyuuu Will do that too once i get in track for it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthich

oh... this is so fabulous to start a story on a crush turned to love.,...

as MAAN n GEET both realised their feelings now... im so eagerly waiting what is next... n what abt dat twist??? hope kuch bura na ho... pls pls pls update next part soon...




Thankkkyuuu...Dnt worry it wont be bad😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

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dear...😃
4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
u done a ..👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2010

SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT BIZZY IN STUDY

GEET RELISE IT WAS A LOVE NOT CRUSH
WHAT THEY DO NOW
HOPE EVERY THING GO WELL
THANKSSS FOR PMS
I JUST IWANT TO SAY IF U NOT FIND MY COMENT SO THINK I BIZZY IN STUDY I HAVE EXAM SOOO IAM PREPARING FOR IT JUST COME HERE FOR RELAXING PLZZZ CONTINUE UR UPDATE N GIVE ME PMS WHEN IAM GET TIME IWILL READ N COMENT




Thankyuuu 😳 its ok U concentrate on studies...I will pm u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART - 4



Pinky : Aag Bara she was about to say when they heard Geet Shouting while Seeing on the Entrance.

All Turned There Face To see what actually Happened just When Geet screamed MAAN s Name. that made everyone to see.

The shy Geet Who never talked boys except her group was here crying and screaming Maan's name

For geet it was an worst moment to see her love to be in this condition in front of her eyes. It was just few mins that she realized her Love for maan which she assumed as crush. She felt numb at that very moment. She just didn't knew how that name came aloud which drew every single person attention on her n the sight due to which she shouted.

There Was Maan lying in the pool Of blood. He just went out while talking on phone . he didn't see the car racing toward him n Dhummm Both clashed. N this was the sight infront of Geet. Maan lost his conscious that very moment when the vehicle just hitted him.

Maan s forehead was bleeding which proceeded to make him soak his clothes in blood. The road seemed to be as they just played holi with Red Colour. Maan condition was the worst. Before he could understand what had happened he touched the ground.

On the other side Geet just ran with all the energy she was left with. She just Sat with maan head on her lap.

Geet : Maan u have to get up. For me. I dnt know U know me or not. But I do I love you Maan I luve U Maan...Please come back

She confessed which maan was waiting for so long time . but see here his lady love was confessing that she loved him but he couldn't hear her. Couldn't touch her scream hug her n just response to her confession . here he was laying as a dead body.

Geet just stood up as their friends called up the taxi n asked geet to take him hospital . while they will come informing his Dadi. Geet ran n took man with support of amy n karan Made maan lay down in geet lap.

Geet asked the driver to ASAP take them hospital. In short time but for geet every second seemed a year to her. In taxi she used to caress his face n every minute she would confess how much he means to her. How much loves him. With that she kissed his both cheeks by which maan shivered slightly which made geet some relief. N now she just kissed him on his Lips which made both to be in a world where they belonged to each other only. Maan was trying to open his eyes n saw a lady figure which he named as geet . he just smiled n again went back to his sleep which made geet tensed.

Maan just thought as a daily dream . wish he could have been In sense to realize its real. They just reached Hospital after ages. Geet ran n called a ward boy who came running with a stretcher. They made maan lie down n took them in the hospital.

Geet was just beside him n the doctor came the checked his pulses which were decreasing minute by minute. The doctor ordered the nurse to take the patient( MAAN) to the I.C.U as his condition is crtitical.

The Word I.C.U itself made geet go weak n there she lied on ground. Doctor told nurse to give glucose to geet so she would feel better.

Doctor went tO ICU to check up Maan n here Nurse gave glucose to geet. Slowly Geet just woke up n the very first name escaped from her Mouth was Maan. Nurse said that he was been operating in Icu. Geet asked the nurse to take her there . nurse refused by seeing gett's ill condition. But geet now just couldn't leave him alone n shouted on nurse to take her. With no option left nurse took geet to ICU section where maan was in.

Geet just stood outside seeing her love through the panel . Armaan Dadi n all Came To hospital. Armaan just tapped her shoulder. Geet turned n saw Amy n just hugged him tight.

Geet : Amy I love him. Please say him to come back. *said with hiccups*

Amy : sshhh Calm down Doll. Ur maan would be back . dnt worry

Just then dadi kept her hand on geet's head. Geet turned and saw some old lady which she recognized as his dadi.

Dadi : u might me Geet Right.?

Geet : jii that's wat she could say.

Doctor came out to make an call to arrange blood as he lost major blood. Geet ran as she saw the doctor n bombarded him with questiond regarding how maan is.? Doctor just said her to calm n assured her everything would be fine.

Geet on the other side just felt to pray and now only god can help her. She went to durgah n prayed for him. As she was coming back she was someone shouting

Yaha koila ko paar karo aur apnni dua ko mukaam tak lao { walk on the hot coal so that ur wish comes true}

Without any second thought geet walked on it with just remembering Maan anfd the condition which he is in now. All the people were amazed to see the young lady to walk on hot coal just to make her wish true.

With great difficulty Geet crossed the other Side where the Fakeer baba stood n pour water on her bare foot which was bad in condition. He said apne Pyaar ke liye hi koi ye kar sakta hai. N apne pyaar ko SIRF TUM bacha sakti ho ..with these words he left. { only for the love people can walk on dis and only u are the one who can save ur Love}

The words encouraged her n she went to hospital with great difficulty n was hiding her pain from everyone. She just wanted Maan to be safe.

Doctor came back with a tensed face when asked he said he coulnt arrange blood of his group . plus the blood group of him is found rarely. This statement made geet vulgur she just blasted on doctor n warned him tat she want HER MAAN TO be alright.

Doctor : we have tried our best to sve him but he have lost major blood. And the blood group of him is very rare to find. Now only god can help. We are tryinf to get the blood. If u all try then it would be easy to make it or else it can take patient Life or to end up him in coma...

Geeet felt her life just stopped with great difficulty she asked the doctor the blood group of him. To which doctor said its O negative

Geet ran to call Blood bank to get blood.

Precap : blood yes or no ??


Sorry For being late 🤢 update is small But i had to end up here.

Hope u all will like it. All sandals n tomatoes welcome😆

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Luved all the comments.. thankyu Soo much 75 like n 5 pages Comments means a lot to me :D

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Thankyu For waiting for the update with just a patience😊

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
cnt wait 4 next
update next part soon...
Edited by Miss.Perfectiie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

nhiii yeh kya tha 😲😭😭😭😭😭

omg mere maanu k accident 😭😭😭
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 plzzz mere maanu ko kuch ny hona chahiye 😭😭really touched seeing geet love for maan n she nt even bothering abt her pain 😭
hawww 😲 cliff hanger p chodh diya 😡
cont soon awsum part

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