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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: singh24


😛 Priya plzzz aaj jaroor aana.. kuch special hai..😉



kya hai special batha na
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


isse bad imgur main load bhi nahi hoga ab...

see its a lil big than the prev

u want snowfall or not?



I'll post it tonight... yeap... snow is giving soft touch..😊
Plzzz pm me...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: priya111111



kya hai special batha na


😆 😆 Wo to night mei hi milega dear...😉
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Wow.. that was long part...😃 Geet was there to do shadh pooja of her mom... This trip will surely change everything btwn them.. They started caring for each other...
Nice part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76



316.gif lakshu, Priya,Mona,
Lily and Sona...u all

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Priya...😊

Hello graphics

Where r u ...??
Looking green..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Updating...

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(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments










Part - 45


CS settled all the things properly with d help of driver. Geet told him to go inside to meet his Maa and he run inside. They all were taking their coffee and Kaka was chatting with Geet asking and informing her many things. After that Kaka stood- up to go and said that his daughters would came to meet her in evening. He invited them to his house for dinner but Geet refused politly saying that they were going outside on Maal Road and they would take their dinner there but she would come to meet them at his house. He left from there.

CS and his Maa came there Geet chatted with her and asked about her family. Maan, Dev and Meera noticed that CS family was well known to Geet and they respected her a lot. After some chit-chat and rest Geet told CS to arrange


Everything for dinner and first checked all rooms again and he went immediately. Geet said to CS's Maa ...


Geet: Ye mere dost hai aur inn sabka acchey se khyal rakna hai tumhe aur haan ,,, dinner hum ghar per hi karenge bahar nahi ,,, to sab dekh lena ,,, CS bata dega aapko sab. ( she nodded in assurance and went inside )

Geet: Aaiye aap sabko bhi aapke rooms dikha du ,,, aap sab fresh ho jaiye ,,, thodi der rest karo fir evening mei Maal Road dekhne challenge ,,, pass hi hai ,,, We'll go by walk. Right?


All agreed with her and they all took a stroll of whole house and at last Geet showed them there rooms at 1st floor.

Maan and Dev Room..

Meera 's Room...


Geet's Room...


At evening ...


CS came to woke up them and said that both ma'am r waiting for them in d balcony for coffee. They freshen up and went there ,, WOW!!! Beautiful views welcome them ,,, there were bful hills covered with clouds in front of them ,,, the weather was becaming cold due to cold winds and clouds ,,, Maan and Dev sat there with their coffee mugs and enjoying the surrounding and natural beauty.


Geet and Meera were chating and some time Dev n Maan to responce them. They were planning to get ready for walk right then they heard some loud and excited voices ,,, Geet Didi ...


There were three girls there ,,, Geet stood from her chair to meet them ,,, they came and gave her a group hug. Geet too reciprocrated them lovingly. They parted after few seconds and looked around ,,, Geet introduced d girls...

Geet: inse milo ye mere friends hai ,, Ye Meera ,, ye Dev Khurana aur ye Maan singh Khurana ,,, All greeted them but their eyes stopped at a figure ,,, d handsome guy ,,, Maan.


Geet: aur ye teeno Kaka ki betiyan hai ,,,, ye Priya ,,, ye Lakshmi aur ye Mona. They looked at the three and said Hi ,,, but they were looking only at one person ,, Maan with wide eyes.


Priya: aap koi model ho? Looking at Maan with dreamy eyes.


Maan felt uneasy with this and replied in a NO.


Lakshmi: fir to pacca hero honge body dekh like Hritik haina?


Geet, Meera and Dev were looking at d girls in a awe ,,, Girls were drooling over Maan openly and Maan was feeling emberaced with this.


Mona: tu theek kaha rahi hai Lakshmi sach mei Hritik jaisi hai ,,, 6 abs body ,,, bahot work out kartey ho kya? Aap kaun si movie mei ho?


Now Geet and Meera came in sense and realized d situation ,,, Geet winked at Meera and said:


Geet: haan ye hero hai ,,,, inki movie aane wali hai ,,,, Meri Girlfriend Ki Shaadi ,,, all looked at her in a' O' Dev and Meera understood her intention and suppressing their laugh while Maan was looking at Geet shocked ,, what is she saying?


Lakshmi: sacchi!!! Kab aa rahi hai aapki movie? Aur ye naam kaisa hai?


Geet: ku ,, naam mei kya kharaabi hai,,, Meri Biwi ki shadi ,, Mere Brother Ki Dulhan ,,, agar ye naam ho saktey hai to Meri Girlfriend ki Shadi ku nahi ,,, kitna catchy to hai ( she winked at Meera).


Lakshmi: haan ,, aap theek kaha rahe ho.


Mona: Mai aapke sath khub sare photos loongi aur apni friends ko dikhungi.


Priya: mai bhi ... mai bhi ... tum akele ku? She went close to Maan and held his hand and said ... aap mere sath photos nikalwana mai bhi apni friends ko dikhaungi ,,,


Maan was feeling very awkward with all this he was looking at Geet in a helpless way like ,,, kahan fassa rahi ho?


Geet: haan ,,, haan ,, jaroor ye abhi 2-3 din hai yahan ,,,, mazey se photos khichwana sab .


Mona: sach didi ,,, 2-3 din WOW!!! Aap inhe hamare ghar lekar aao na khaney per ,,, mai inki pasand ki dishies banaungi ,,, aap aayenge na? She asked with drooling eyes.


Maan was in fix and having a tough time.


Priya : please didi aap inhe lekar aana ,,, aap ko kya pasand hai?


Lakshmi: haan ,,, aap apni fav batao hum wahi banayenge .


Meera and Dev having a hard time to stop their laugh seeing Maan's plight.


Geet: arree Lakshmi ,,, inhe Indian nahi Italiyan food pasand hai .


Mona: haan to mai seekh rahi hu na new-new dishies ,,, Italiyan bhi ,,, mai banaungi ,,, aap aana jaroor.


Geet: tum Italian khana ku seekh rahi ho? Tumhe pata tha ye aayenge ?


Mona: nahi di wo maa ne kaha to ,,, wo kahati hai aaj kal ke mod ladkey bahar ka khana jayada khatey hai to seekho ,,, ladkiyon ko Sarwagun Sampanna hona chahiye.


Geet: haan -haan good ,, very good ,,, Waise Mona ,,, abhi to hum bahar ja rahey hai aur TM bhi bahar rahenge ,,, uske baad ,,,, hum sab aayengey ,,, theek. Abhi tum ghar jaker sab socho ki kya-kya banana hai? Theek hai na?


All three nodded looking at Maan ,,, Dreamy.


Geet suppressed her laugh and said : abhi tum jao ghar ,,, hame bhi ready hona hai ,, theek hai ,,, Good girls. They all left half heartedly looking back at Maan again and again. Geet came with them at the door and bid them bye. When she reached back in the Balcony Meera and Dev were laughing maniacally and Maan was looking at them angrily.


Geet looked at him with puppy face for few seconds and then brust out in to laughter ,,, all were laughing holding their tummies for few mnts Maan was angry but later he too joined them ,,, they controlled themselves after a good manic laugh ,,, Geet and Meera have tears in their eyes and they were holding their tummies ,,, Awww.. Now both d guys were drooling over these cuties ,,,, Maan and Dev were having a sweet smiles waching their source of happiness enjoying like this. It was d first time in these days when Maan was watching Geet this much happy and this bful sight was giving him immence pleasure. He just wanted to see her like this. Dev's eyes too were fixed on Meera who was giving company to Geet ,,, Dev was too feeling very happy and satisfied after so many days of grief.


They went back to their rooms to get ready for walk on famous Mall Road ,,, the main attraction of this hill station.


Whole evening they enjoyed and shopped many things from the local Bazzar ,,, at night the whole hill station looked very bful with lights. They came back home because d weather turned very cold in night. They had their dinner made by CS's Maa and that was very delicious. Again they decided to spend some time in balcony with hot coffee and cit-chat.


It was raining out side ,,, they were enjoying hot brewing coffee and planning for d next day and Geet suggested to go for Kampyt Fall. They went to sleep.


Next day they went to Kampty Fall and some more bful places near by. When they were coming back Geet showed them The L.B.S. Accadamy, where IAS/IPS trainees come for 4 months of their training period. All felt ammaized listening this and Meera asked ...


Meera: Geet kya tum yahan 4 months thi wow!!


And Geet nodded in yes with a smiled. All looked at her in a praising way.


For second day Meera insisted for tracking and all agreed to her wish. It was decided that they all leave early for tracking and in evening they would go to Farm house in Deharadoon and from there back to Delhi.


Geet instructed everything to CS for next day. They got up early to get ready for tracking and left near 6am. They covered some distance with safari and then they left that and took the tracking path ,,, Geet instructed driver when and where he came to pick them. They have their back bags ,,, they were walking and climbing on hilly tracks ,,, all were enjoying the pure natural beauty of hills closely ,,, they crossed few very small rainy streams and falls ,,, Meera and Dev took many pics on the way with their smart phones ,,, they walked nearly two hours and feeling tired they rested for half an hour ,,, ate their snacks and decided to move back .

They were coming down and the tracks were rocky, sloppy and slippery due to rain Geet told them to move very carefully ,,, Dev and Meera were ahead then Geet and Maan was walking in last ,,, they were on a narrow pass and it was more rocky and steap ,,, they were moving down very slowly and suddenly geet's foot slipped ,,, aahhh ,, she fell down and started rolling downwards ,,, her shricked voice ecoed and All looked at her ,,, G e e t ,, Maan rushed to her ,, Dev and Meera too run back to save her ,,, geet rolled down and hit a stone side way ,,, Maan reached near her ,,, He held her in his arms and turned her ,,, she was badly injured ,, G e e t ,,, G e e t ,,, he called her frantically ,,, Geet open your eyes ,, Geet ,,, she was motionless ,, her forehead was bleeding and there were many bruises on her body coz of rocky tracks ,,, Geet open ur eyes plzz Maan was hell worried not getting any response from her ,, Dev and Meera too were calling and shaking her to get her little reply ,, Meera took her hands they were too badly bruises , muddy and bleeding. All became panic ,, Maan took some water and splashed on her face ,, cupped her face with one hand and shaked her calling her name again and again ,,, He held her very close to him ,, G e e t ek bar bolo ,,, aankhen kholo Geet ,,, He was dying every seconds looking her like this ,,, G e e t. Meera too was going panic and her eyes were burning and she was on the eadge of crying looking geet like this ,,, Dev was holding her near him ,,, they were calling her and after few mnts Geet body moved a little ,,, Meera felt a movement in her hand and she opened her eyes very slowly ,,, Geet blinked her lashes quickly to adjest her vision and found Meera in front of her ,, she tried to get clear vision and looked at Maan's face which was very close to her and he was cupping her face and calling her. Looking at him and getting her response all took a breath of relief ,,, Meera knelt down near her ,,, she was caressing her head and looking at her with teary eyes ,, Maan held her carefully and made her to drink some water from the bottle. She took few sips ,,, now she started getting back in conscious and realised that she was in Maan's arms. Why? Maan was looking at her with at most care and asked ,,, Geet tum theek ho na?


She nodded and felt extreme pain and left a cry ,,, aahhh,, now everything refreshed in her mind ,,, how her foot slipped and she fell down after that she opened her eyes now. She tried to touch her forhead but felt pain in her hands too ,,, she cried again. Maan made her sit in his lap holding her properly in his arm and told Meera to clean her face and hands with wet hankey ,,, her full face and hands were covered with dirt and blood ,,, Geet was looking at her hands all bruisesd ,, her whole body was paining. Meera wet d hankey and wiped her face very carefully and then hands ,,, they were in forest area away from main road.


Meera: Yahan se to road bhi dur hai aur koi doc bhi pass nahi milega med help ke liye.


Geet spoke painfully: Wo ,, mere ,, bag mei first aid kit hai ,, wo kholo.


Dev opened d bad and took out a small pouch and gave that to Meera. She opened that pouch and found Savlon and anticeptic cream, cotton balls, bandages and some pills. Meera cleaned her wounds with savlon aapplied some cream and bandaged her hands. Geet looked around and asked her mob which was in her bag. Dev gave her but she was unable to make d call and she told Meera to open the gps of her phone ,,, she did that and Geet locate their site and then told her to call driver at nearing place. Meera did that at once. She tried to get up and Maan helped her to stand but she was unable to walk properly ,,, Maan held her close to him circling his one hand in her waist and with other hand he held her hand ,, Geet indicated the right direction towards main road and said Dev to follow up the direction in GPS. They were moving very slowly on that lane Dev and Meera were holding all bags and Maan was holding Geet very carefully. He wanted to lift her but she refused saying that the way was sloppy and slippery and it could be dangerous for both. She was right at her place ,,, after covering some distance they got a plane narrow lane between thick trees and bushes ,,, Maan stopped her and lift her in his arms started moving ,,, Geet held him circling her hands in his neck ,, her body was aching ,, she rested her head near his neck and closed her eyes. Maan was holding her tightly close to him ,,, her pain was visible on his face and he was looking at her now and then.


After half an hour of walk they were on the road and driver was waiting there. He saw them and looked at injured Geet ,, he ran towards them worried ,, kya hua ma'am ko? Dev told him everything ,,, he took his seat and egnite d engine Maan settled Geet very carefully and sat near her holding her ,, Dev took front seat and Meera sat next to Geet. Driver moved very fast and they reached home. CS and his Maa got worried seeing Geet like this ,,, Maan told CS to call the Doc and he ran at once. Maan settled Geet in her bed and sat near her he examined her hands and head if she had more wounds. Maan became very quiet seeing her like this ,, his heart was bleeding seeing her burised body which was in so much pain.
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aaj bahut kuch hai bolne ko...

firstly dumka... kaise bhool sakthi hoo?? am first...
charly chaplin

secodly, the length of the update... mazaa aa gaya...
cute cindy 01

thirdly, loved how maan was so concerned for geet...
love heart 02
fourthly, priya nice gif...
cute pig 07

fifthly, and the most important one...

kya tha wo??? but jhoot bhi nahi tha... din bar tho yahi karthe rehthe hain... haina??? mein tho theenon mein kaafi shareef hi thi.
cute kitten 08

mona tho haayeee ruk hi nahi rahi thi hero par line maarthe... hamaari sarwa guna sampaann madam... too good...


priya ko tho pics lene ki jaldi thi... cute couple 03

hya title sochi hai... milkar dekhenge...


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