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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part
am loving it
please continue soon
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sorry for late comments was busy preparing for my exams. nice teaser waiting
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I dn't know whether u wrote what u thought or it is just random update...

Geet's behavior is very confusing...

on one hand she hates Maan and on other she loves her Mangalsutra...why...the person who made her wear it she hates him then what is the value of those black beads...

and why she hates him...it was not he who forcefully bring her to his room...it was her who came by her own...whether she was innocent or not but greater part of whatever happened is her fault...

thanx for update...


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Posted: 11 years ago

dear...😃
4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
u done a ..👏👏👏
4 ur hard work.👏..
the job up dear..👏..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama


NOTE: ME'LL NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME





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Posted: 11 years ago

lovly writing dear

pls contd soon
want to see the relationship of maan & geet how it will progress
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THANK U DEARIES FOR UR LIKES ...



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~A TORN RELATION~





PART 24



( geet is a depression patient here and how does she become will reveal and that magalsutra's mystry and why maan's words are affecting her so much ... everything I will reveal..)

Maan looked at his brother even geet was hiding her smile ..she looked down feeling suddenly embarrassed .. Vicky was about to open his mouth again when maan's one look made him shut ...

Vicky : I bet it will be a girl ... haina bhabhi..while geet nodded in a No.. and continued to eat without noticing that maan was observing her silently...

She was not agreeing with Vicky but her gestures were simple .. he had never seen anyone so calm and composed even if they were having a whirlpool of emotions going within them .. he had seen arohi , Ayesha how they used to deny and fight for small small things but geet's gestures were quite repulsive in their terms and finally the blush that she was having was confusing him more .. shouldn't she be having a regretful face ... Maan thought but his reverie was broke by his cell phone... the appointment was fixed and now he couldn't dare to delay with her health geet's behavior was an enigma for him..

Vicky saw his bhabhi denying but she was smiling too.. her eyes were downcasted and she was looking quite shy.. geet's red cheeks were just an illusion she was just trying not to show her withered self she was torn beyond limits and now this was the only way that she can hide her true self.. she was actually making a fake environment where she could conceal herself ... she wanted a calm place where things will go according to her .. her past experiences were making her fear that whatever she wish will be brutally snatched from her ...

Maan : geet your appointment is fixed we have to meet the doctor at 12 .. be ready I will pick you...

His concerned voice brought her back she looked at his face..she was looking at him with her doe shaped eyes .. unknowingly maan who was minutely noticing her looked that she had stopped eating her eyes were having a panic like she was scared of something .. maan saw her uneasiness and clearly cleared her doubts .. it was his good luck that his mother asked about the same..

Naina: maan sab theek hai na...

Maan : mom I just want her complete check up .. apne kaha than a ki geet kal faint ho gayi thi .. so I want her complete thorough check up..

Everyone signed with a relief and the most calm was geet .. she was somewhere still feeling that maan will not accept the baby but she doesn't know that he had already accepted what fate has given him ... he was now waiting for her acceptance her trust .. though he knew that it will be the most difficult to get her faith she wont even trust his shadow after what all has occurred yet he cant leave ..even if he had to start from the scratch he will do It ...

Maan , Vicky and raj left for the office though maan wanted to be with her but he had some more work to be done the day itself.. maan was about to go when Vicky asked If he could accompany him he wanted to go to the site as well ..

Vicky : bhai I have to go to the gurgoan site as well main bhi aapke saath chalta hun ...

Maan knew that he cant be late , some truths need to be explored and he cant be late...

Maan : Vicky , arjun will be there I have some work I will meet you after two .. till then you and arjun manage the work .. and I don't want any negligence understood...

Vicky gulped seeing his brother and made a baby face..

Vicky: nahi le jana toh bol do na bhai why are you shouting at me... chodo I will go alone and will pick arjun bhai , arohi di se bhi milunga.. aap toh sach me hitler ho ..

Vicky ran to save his life before maan could catch him .. a small smile came on his M shaped lips knowing his brother's antics very well... geet was helping naina when she saw Vicky coming with his jet speed she stopped and looked at him he was searching something when geet stopped him ...

Geet : bhaiyya do you need anything kya hua hai ..

Vicky : nothing bhabhi , my car keys I thought that bhai will give me lift but he clearly refused in the pretext of some work .. uff apke hitler pati ne kitna kuch suna diya ... he made a cute baby angry face that made geet to giggle ..

Vicky : I swear he is really difficult to handle .. aap pata nahi kaise karti ho.. ( I wonder how do you manage..)

Geet smiled weakly and looked away she was about to leave when Vicky looked at his bhabhi she was having the dishes in her hands he quickly took the dishes an helped her first to keep them in the kitchen and later he first shouted at the servants and then quickly left from there to grab his car keys which he had in his room ..geet offered that she will bring but Vicky told her to chill he will bring within some minutes he came and saw that geet was with his mom and daadima..

Naina: aap abhi tak yahan hai Vicky .. jaldi jaiye warna ..

Vicky: warna kya mom , maan bhai se dant padegi na don't worry aaj ka hitler quota pehle hi khatam ho chukka hai .. subah subha bhai gave me a long lecture.. hitler kahi ke..

Daadima : kis liye Vicky aaj kya kiya apne..

She teased him and Vicky made a cute baby face... geet was looking at her family with sheer innocence and curiosity Vicky s words made her smile a big time .. hitler though for her maan was no less than a devil but even she had seen that when it comes to work he was no less a hitler ... she was quietly enjoying the scenario forgetting that she had to get ready and be on time ...

Vicky : lift maangi thi daadi.. but your dear grandson refused.. acha chalo let me go warna agar bhai will know then god knows what he will do with me .. I am still scared of his MSK's demeanor mom ..

He sneered , naina glared to Vicky and he quickly mumbled a sorry and left ... whereas poor geet she was still contemplating vicky's words .. and for the first time she talked out loud...

Geet : MSK's demeanor matlab ... geet was confused ..while daadima looked at her pota bahu she was twisting her dupatta and was looking with her confused face...

Daadima: beta you really want to know ...

Geet : ji daadima .. and why is vicky so scared of maan .. he was scared like maan will eat him alive ...

Geet's talks made naina and savitri devi into laughter it was true that maan and geet had an arranged marriage and it

couldn't even stay the way it should have blossomed their past ruined it which never let geet to know her husband , if it was her fear lately which never let them to move when they tried to the circumstances didn't let them..

Daadima: theek hai hum aapko bata denge ...

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It was ten when maan reached the handa's residence , rano was in the kitchen and the men had left for work .. when she saw him .. rano greeted him and maan touched her feet ..

Rano : bhaitho beta main geet ke papa ko bulati hun .. geet nahi aayi..

Maan immediately stopped her , he knew that only rano can told her about geet ..she knew her ins and out and now he will get to know what has occurred...

Maan : maa I want to ask you something .. maan was about to say when radhika came she had returned from half way and didn't went to college...

Radhika: mumma aaj collge nahi hai .. mass bunk hai..then she saw her jeeju sitting she really got excited and looked around...

Radhi: jeeju didi nahi aayi .. you didn't bring her its bee so many days that I met her wo toh mujhe bhool hi gayi hai ... radhika was hardly eighteen she was four year younger than geet and was innocent and nave just like his wife the way she was pouting made him assure that geet will look just like her if she throe any of her antics and tantrums but dejectedly he never got any chance to have any encounter of her ...

Rano tried to make her younger daughter calm but maan's calm and his smile made her shut ...

Maan : I promise radhika next time I will bring your didi.. today I had some work with ma .. I think you can too help me karogi na meri madat ...

Radhika smiled widely and nodded ...

Radhika: ji , aap boliye kya karna hai ...

Maan turned towards rano and asked her again...

Maan : ma , who is payal ... please ma kuch mat chupaiyega I want to know each and everything about geet and her life ..

Rano was disturbed hearing maan , she was panicked what has happened that maan has to come there to ask all this...

Rano: maan kya hua hai .. is geet allright bataiye beta wo theek hai na ...

Maan : ji wo theek hai please ma is waqt kuch mat puchiye ..bas mujhe geet ke bare me bataiye .. kya geet ko pata tha that she was marrying me was she ready with this alliance ..and who is payal...

Rano didn't answered anything when radhika said something that made maan to look at the young girl she was having some courage to tell him the truth ...

Radhika came near her mother and compelled her to tell maan everything ...

Radhika: mumma jeeju ko sab bata dijiye there is nothing to hide please mumma it is definitely related to didi's health ...

Maan's eyes shot up immediately what truth are they talking about and there is something more that he didn't knew and may be that will be related to geet's condition and her response towards situations ...maan immediately kneeled down and hold rano's hand rano was really scared for geet's future and now she knew that she have to tell him the truth ...

Maan: maa please kuch mat chupaiye , radhika is right , this is really important for me and her to know .. payal kon hai kya lagti hai wo geet ki .. kya kiya usne .. main jaanta hun that you are scared for my reaction but believe me I am equally responsible please mera yakeen kijiye I will not let her hurt anymore kya scah me boliye ...

Radhika came forward and asked maan to follow her ..

Radhika: jeeju aap mere saath aaiye...

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Next : continuation of this update ...

Some revelations and past ...

Dearies I need a character name (negative) can anyone suggest who will look good with Jennifer ... need to introduce him so pleae if any suggestions do post on thread with name...

Next update after 150 likes and 15 pages I will update after pg 45

Silent readers wake up and so like and comment...

Less response will lead to discontinuation since I am busy these days ...



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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part maan wanted to know abt geet and geet was confused about maan's demanour waiting for next
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oh god 😲 so there are more secrets
eagerly waiting for the truth to unfold😉.
Its really great suhi.
Now update jaldi jaldi as I cant wait for the truth to be revealed😳

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