SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :) - Page 9

No its not last part i am not accepting have to write more this is most amazing true story which touched my heart you cant leave like this

Hey dear I just read today this story
And I really loved it dont take those harsh pms on ur heart
The last part u written in hurry
But me happy that geet accepted maan and now r happy with each other
I can't believe geet had gone through soo much but now she got maan and he will protect geet forever
Me happy that maaneet thrown pammi and dev out of the house

This was a unique concept and I applaud you for daring to include homosexuality in your story. A shame due to bashing of others you were not able to complete it as you had intended as I felt there were still missing elements like Maaneet€™s confession of love. Nevertheless it was an interesting story with a happy ending for Geet who was finally able to be free of her fears and trust in Maan.

Thanks for sharing.

I've got no words...i love it ...

man that must have been hard for her
but it worked out for them
though i was worried if she will come out of this
and there is nothing wrong with this story
log toh kuch bhi kahenge unka toh kaam hi hota hai
cheers for pm

Hi Harika,
Wow that was a brave topic to choose and write.In jst two parts you showed me d glimpse of the world I've never imagined.I've read and heard about Lesbians but never thot seriously about this section of society.Or how even girls can get hostile or situation force them to do so or errr... I really dont know.

But I have to say that the concept is out of the box.I dont wanna be judgemental but everybody is free to express their views,so one shud not bash one's work,even after knowing that its jst a fiction and not intended to hurt smone with purpose.


I've gained smthng fm d story.The suffeing of Geet,the changing nature of Sapna,selfishness of Arjun,those women who harrased Geet,Maan emerging as a saviour yet having difficulty to form a relation with Geet for a long period of time,everything left a mark on my mind.

I wud love to read the story with more details as you are forced to end it in hurry.

I wont say ignore the bashers and be happy as its not possible to ignore it when ppl PM you and say harsh words.

But pls try to write the third part,jst a request.We are ready to read it.

Thanx for d story and for being different.