SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :) - Page 16

hey thats cool

Outstanding story dear...

nice os dear :)

really different..

Amazing update...
Loved it a lot...
Quite a sensitive topic bt its a reality...
Poor geet glad she found maan...

you finished in 2 parts how come dear, loved the concept, it is different
please try to give other part

Wow epi milega ??? Jaldi dena plz
Will be waiting dear

A very unique concept...
Loved the way u wrote it...
& i am happy tht u chose this subject coz this is the reality of our society but very few ppl try to narrate it...& i must say u r successful in making us aware abt it...
There r much more unusual things which happen in our society but we ignre them as we feel tht they r against the society so we shld stay away frm tht otherwise ppl in the society will throw us away...

Hmm..coming to the updates...
This b*****,kutta,kamina,*****,**** arjun...main jitni bhi gaaliyaan use karu utni kam hai uske liye...such a filthy lerson...bloody disgusting b******...
Achha hua Sapna ne use maar diya...otherwise mere haath se toh marr hi jaata..
But he deserved much more brutal punishment..
Poor Geet...ssooo much of suffering...
But loved the way Sapna supported Geet in every phase...

Mujhe laga hi tha yeh kamina dev shaadi ke liye mana kar dega..
Yeee...here comes our hero...kya enrty maari Maan ne...
Hmm..he married Geet not bcoz of pity but he actually loved her when he first saw her...

Feeling very bad fr sapna...

Finally Maan made Geet to overcome her fear...
But i am disappointed with thevway i u ended it abruptly...
But thank god u r giving an epilogue..
Waiting fr it...

Good as well as saddy part, good the way you potrayed today's on going lively situations, that are also a part of our society. Nothing wrong in posting such things which indeed are truth of our modern culture and changing notions of relation. Your writing always carries freshness and would expect you to carry the same.
One thing I would add Writers never need permission from their readers, they are free to express, free from good or bad, and the readers are we who are on hunt for you writers to quench our thirst of adventures, excitement, tragedy, humour, romance, actions and ofcourse a little bit of greed of gaining a pen friend like you.
Thank you a lot spending time for us writing your creations and yes never stop your imagination and posting, becos there are some in deep crevices of your very own world waiting for your just hi every day.
Sad that it ended as sooner as it started, wish you could have continued further, nevertheless lovely part.
Thanks
Vidhi