Dulhan Wahi jo piya Mann Bhaaye#9(completed) - Page 64

Created

Last reply

Replies

741

Views

82.9k

Users

94

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

deepthich thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
hey yaaro... read ur DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE in one go...
do i need to tell seperately anything for this awesome story... but still i will tell 😛
its fabulous!! completely amazing... i loved it...
loved it even from the start... u showed love , realtion, family, ek social message everything in this story so beautifully that i fell in love with this!!!
u know in the start when i was reading... i felt bad to know MAAN n sam as pair... but seeing MAAN's behaviour n reason for that relation... i was calm...
but u again gave me heart attack saying MAAN is commited all that... so let me tell u ../... when i was reading all those parts may be till 14 or 15 updates ... my heart was beating so fast 😆 seriously!!! i dont know i was so anxited abt what happens next!!! i mean MAAN was in one relation... n GEET knows that n became his friend... n i even thought to read future parts n continue reading... but wanted to read normally so i continued reading...
n when u revealed GEET's past... aweee... that was so ... ummm.. miserable... sach me GEET is such a awesome angel.. MAAN is so lucky to get her ... i felt so bad for her... she lost everything... n whne she got something... there too she got hurt n pain!!
n u know when i cried... when she said she wears clothes which sameera doesnt wear!!! that was pathetic!!!! pammi ko jara bi GEET pe sympathy tak nahi hoti ti!!! n she like an angel forgave all without even asking for forgiveness!!! *sigh*
n then there started MAANEET ka journey... that 1 promise from GEET... kya kya karwaya MAAN se aur indirectly GEET se bi!!
sach me it was one memorable journey...
oh... i forgot to mention our devil dadi!!! dadi to mast hai specially when she locked sam in that cupboard!!! ye sari ideas pata nahi dadi ko aati kaha se hai 🤣
n after so much of struggle...pain n hurt they both said I LOVE YOU to each other... that was indeed a memorable MAAN's birthday with MAANEET going out as lovers together... n ek hi raat me kitna kuch hogaya!!! their little romance... icecream... bike... mandir... sindoor... it all felt so dreamy...
n then on birthday party... kya planning ki hai sab ne... maine sach me nahi socha ta... but i was very happy but sad too bcoz of what sam did!!!
i really didnt like dadi n priya's reactions knowing GEET is driver's beti... to kya hua??? what is the big issue!!!! but later they realised their mistake ... n im happy for that... 😃
when GEET was murmuring... im all alone in church... i felt so touching... vusko hi ye sab kyo face karna padta hai!!! 😭
but thankfully they brought her back... n i loved when MAAN said to god that he passed in distinction 😃 👏

vuff... ab comment bada horaha hai... so shortly batadeti hu...
loved everything from there on... MAANEET's engagement... their romance... MAAN becoming flirt 😉
and and and the official wonderful DATE!!!! i loved that whole of date journey... it was really diffferent n interesting... 😳
their first kiss
loved sandy... their ride... GEET teaching a lesson to boys in cricket 😉
loved GEET's innocence...
MAAN ka bi manna padega yaar... he loved her so much... he waited for her... when he got her he loved her more... n respected n cared for her... hayeee... that chapati scene was wonderful... n i felt like to kiss MAAN for that saying!!!! 😳
then their marriage happened...
oh... loved GEETANJALI also... so cute... loved all scenes with her...
pammi n sam change was unexpected but glad they changed!!!
then came mansi... her realtionship with MAAN is so beautiful...
but tumne kyo their SR prolong nahi kiya... explain karti to aur bi achi hoti 😉
but their first night was again unique ... lawn me hi sogaye... 😆
i dont know what i missed ... but loved whole of the story... will be waiting for more form u...
u r a very good writer 👏
i have seen u started maasom ishq... but will read a little later... sorry 😛


Ggorgeousqueen thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthich

hey yaaro... read ur DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE in one go...

do i need to tell seperately anything for this awesome story... but still i will tell 😛
its fabulous!! completely amazing... i loved it...
loved it even from the start... u showed love , realtion, family, ek social message everything in this story so beautifully that i fell in love with this!!!
u know in the start when i was reading... i felt bad to know MAAN n sam as pair... but seeing MAAN's behaviour n reason for that relation... i was calm...
but u again gave me heart attack saying MAAN is commited all that... so let me tell u ../... when i was reading all those parts may be till 14 or 15 updates ... my heart was beating so fast 😆 seriously!!! i dont know i was so anxited abt what happens next!!! i mean MAAN was in one relation... n GEET knows that n became his friend... n i even thought to read future parts n continue reading... but wanted to read normally so i continued reading...
n when u revealed GEET's past... aweee... that was so ... ummm.. miserable... sach me GEET is such a awesome angel.. MAAN is so lucky to get her ... i felt so bad for her... she lost everything... n whne she got something... there too she got hurt n pain!!
n u know when i cried... when she said she wears clothes which sameera doesnt wear!!! that was pathetic!!!! pammi ko jara bi GEET pe sympathy tak nahi hoti ti!!! n she like an angel forgave all without even asking for forgiveness!!! *sigh*
n then there started MAANEET ka journey... that 1 promise from GEET... kya kya karwaya MAAN se aur indirectly GEET se bi!!
sach me it was one memorable journey...
oh... i forgot to mention our devil dadi!!! dadi to mast hai specially when she locked sam in that cupboard!!! ye sari ideas pata nahi dadi ko aati kaha se hai 🤣
n after so much of struggle...pain n hurt they both said I LOVE YOU to each other... that was indeed a memorable MAAN's birthday with MAANEET going out as lovers together... n ek hi raat me kitna kuch hogaya!!! their little romance... icecream... bike... mandir... sindoor... it all felt so dreamy...
n then on birthday party... kya planning ki hai sab ne... maine sach me nahi socha ta... but i was very happy but sad too bcoz of what sam did!!!
i really didnt like dadi n priya's reactions knowing GEET is driver's beti... to kya hua??? what is the big issue!!!! but later they realised their mistake ... n im happy for that... 😃
when GEET was murmuring... im all alone in church... i felt so touching... vusko hi ye sab kyo face karna padta hai!!! 😭
but thankfully they brought her back... n i loved when MAAN said to god that he passed in distinction 😃 👏

vuff... ab comment bada horaha hai... so shortly batadeti hu...
loved everything from there on... MAANEET's engagement... their romance... MAAN becoming flirt 😉
and and and the official wonderful DATE!!!! i loved that whole of date journey... it was really diffferent n interesting... 😳
their first kiss
loved sandy... their ride... GEET teaching a lesson to boys in cricket 😉
loved GEET's innocence...
MAAN ka bi manna padega yaar... he loved her so much... he waited for her... when he got her he loved her more... n respected n cared for her... hayeee... that chapati scene was wonderful... n i felt like to kiss MAAN for that saying!!!! 😳
then their marriage happened...
oh... loved GEETANJALI also... so cute... loved all scenes with her...
pammi n sam change was unexpected but glad they changed!!!
then came mansi... her realtionship with MAAN is so beautiful...
but tumne kyo their SR prolong nahi kiya... explain karti to aur bi achi hoti 😉
but their first night was again unique ... lawn me hi sogaye... 😆
i dont know what i missed ... but loved whole of the story... will be waiting for more form u...
u r a very good writer 👏
i have seen u started maasom ishq... but will read a little later... sorry 😛



hii Deepthi
Thank u so much for giving your precious time to my FF.
It was my first ever attempt to pen down any thing.I read your comment like i was reading an update.
I know what you missed
you missed their love making scenes.But Dear I want to say sorry for that. I m not that 18+ writer so you will always miss that in my FFs.
but i think all love makings are same so imagine anyone from any other FF..I have started Masoom Ishq and Punarvivah plese give a look to them too.
Thank u once again

Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
loved the ending
awesome...
sam in km she accepted geet as a sister...
loved it...
geetmerly thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
well written story
excellent & thanks for giving us this FF
when is the new FF coming ?
aglaeca9 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb...
loved it ...
epilogues were awesome..
loved d red apple
Kalpana_KaCy thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Dear,
Just saw the link of this FF in Daily Updates Forum! I generally dont read FF these days due to exams and all! But Dulhan Wahi... Is one of my fav. movies! So I checked out the story! Really loved the concept! I have read till chapter 5. I am reading it slowly! And whenever I get the time I will review for the parts I had read till then! (Hope you dont mind! I just feel guilty that you write so many chapters and I leave only one review! So I will review in parts!) So loved what I read till now! Geet's intro was my fav part till now! Really well planned scenes I can sense that! Loved reading it! Hoped to keep on reading till the story ends!

P.S. I wont be able to press likes coz I dont get time to read while I am on PC so I read from mobile and my mobile is not smart phone so cant login! Sorry but you wont see my likes but you will see my reviews each day I read!
Serenity_me thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
wow..loved this ff. read it fully in two days. awesome job
Ggorgeousqueen thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Hey Dear,

Just saw the link of this FF in Daily Updates Forum! I generally dont read FF these days due to exams and all! But Dulhan Wahi... Is one of my fav. movies! So I checked out the story! Really loved the concept! I have read till chapter 5. I am reading it slowly! And whenever I get the time I will review for the parts I had read till then! (Hope you dont mind! I just feel guilty that you write so many chapters and I leave only one review! So I will review in parts!) So loved what I read till now! Geet's intro was my fav part till now! Really well planned scenes I can sense that! Loved reading it! Hoped to keep on reading till the story ends!

P.S. I wont be able to press likes coz I dont get time to read while I am on PC so I read from mobile and my mobile is not smart phone so cant login! Sorry but you wont see my likes but you will see my reviews each day I read!


don't worry Kalpana.
You can take your time
agar pura ff padhne ke baad ek comment hi dogi to bhi kafi hai mere liye. I don't crib about likes and comment.
I m reading your Dev aue Geet ki kahaani Maan ki jubaani. and I m loving it👏
Ggorgeousqueen thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Slov_perfringes

wow..loved this ff. read it fully in two days. awesome job

Thanks a lot 😃
Jayeeta_06 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful ff...👏read it in one go...😃loved it...❤️

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

4 years ago

💗MG SS O RE PIYA #3 - Important note on page 19 dated 26th Jan 2025

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

3 months ago

MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 years ago

Sangini.. Piya ki mein Banugi S#2 pt 5/pg46/23 sept

Prologue Chachu am not going marry with gaav ki chori Maan her name is ge Maan : chachi aap hi smjhayo na I mean mein thehra city ka

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".