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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

I love the creepy lady😆

I don't know who to empathize with now. Will the time together actually bring them close or drive the wedge firmly in?

So intriguing. In such short chapters you have built a beautiful story and made us care for the characters. Great work.

Thanks for updating.

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Hum tum ek kamre band ho aur chabi kho jaye...
😳😆
humming this song after reading whole part...
ufff...misunderstanding...misunderstanding,...
when will clear these misunderstanding...
I guess have to wait for some more awesome updates...
ok I'm ready for wait😃
continue soon!!!

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

awsem update clear there mu soon

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

glad that its a special room.. hope they talk and clear out things..

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

argghhh ...maaneet and their ego

Cliffhanger ...!
Nooo
Plz updt soon

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Part-9,10 and 11

God buddy,you just turned this story into a horror and mystery one,with a creepy feeling.The haunted hotel,the witch-like woman,the cowebs,the dim light,dusty atmosphere,gargoyle statues...oh I love the scary,creepy feel.

And amongst all these we meet maaneet with the spur of emotions inside them.

Its sad that Geet mistook zoya as d new girl in Maan's life.But but but the lady in black,did she deliberately locked Maaneet in an distant lone room??

God dis story is getting so exiting.

Loving it.

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

i m so happy k that witch lady has locked them up together ...

ab time confrontation ka he ...

hamesha maan geet apne emotions ,fear ,love sab kuch mann me hi rakhte he kuch bhi express nahi karte aur in emotions ko cughupane k liye ek dusre se door bhagte he .

plz ab ye mauka haath se mat jaane do .aur geet apne dil ki har baat maan ko batade k uski insecurity ,uski new feelings about marriage ...aur maan ko bhi geet se sab share karna chahiye aur usk insecurities ko samjhna chahiye ...

is baar maan geet ko saare distance ko hata k wapas ek ho jaana chahiye ...

plz weeekend he try to give one more part ..agar possible ho to

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

So the old woman is acting like Cupid! Both needed this push..maybe locked up they will talk their hearts out..esp geet! Thanks, loved the update! Keep it up!

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CherryBlush

@CherryBlush

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Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Finally something concrete stance from Geet enough of expectations & breaking of hearts ! she was here to give a chance & what she sees ! Maan already at easy in company of zoya

Feeling proud of Geet to remain strong . Why would she show her vulnerability to a man who knowing everything about her is "confused" in his life with what he wants? Geet was fanttastic here 👏 loved the update❤️