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prema_ks

@prema_ks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

It's so so... beautiful. Can I have a pm whenever you write? Expecting more from you 😊

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

oh what to say

speechless

first I was scared to read this

reading the title and ur LOVE for sad ending( sorry for this no offence)

but could not control reading ur wonderful writing

what a story

brilliant work dear

story , writing skills every emotion well portrayed

brilliant work dear

keep it up👏👏👏

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kainturakiran

@kainturakiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Just love it...

So beautifully written...

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome n superb dear👏👏

i have no words to describe

honestly m speechless

keep up the great work 😛

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

beautiful one
really ❤️ it

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

One more beautiful piece from you

loved this love story of maaneet...very diff from others...

geet made love with maan thinking of dev

maan too loved her then but could not voice out...that time it was just dev's last wish...still he kept loving silently for 5 years

i loved how maan tossed myra and caught her...i love this advertisement which shows love bet father & daughter...

it was emotional yet full of love and every emotions

i wnated to read this in os competition but did not get the time and gald that i got to read now

hats off to yoy

waiting for more to read from you

keep writing

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

That's so lovely.. just loved it.. Beautiful love story..😃 Awesomely written..👏

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

kuch bolenge toh story k sadgi kharab ho jayegi...

awesome n wonderful...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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Aphrodisiac

@Aphrodisiac

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

My I am speechless 👏 honestly I never imagined it would be Maan until I realized Geet's getting affected by Maan's touch after a lapse of 5 years ! that is when I got a hint maybe it was Maan who was with her that night but heck never thought Dev died

Dev bound Maan by a promise to give Geet "the" purpose of life ! after that night Maan urged Geet to pursue her dreams and in the way came Myra .. their love in being ! especially after the gap of time their confrontation and revelation gave me goosebumps 😳 it was SUCH AMAZING way written 👏 absolutely BRILLIANT ⭐️ ⭐️ 👍🏼

Loved it to Bits ❤️ 👏

Do write more Os-es 😉 😆

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fffanatic

@fffanatic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Beautifully written OS frosty... very nice concept... loved the roller coaster ride frm present to past and back... loved it...can go on and on reading it...but alas its just one shot...will it be too much if I ask fr an epilogue wid cuteee maan-myra moments and J geet coz myra has becum maans chamchi after meeting daddy...after all why won't she...she is dadaa's lil princess. ..lol and may be we can have a chota maan to team up wid geet...lol...I know sounds clichd bt I just loved all their characters be it maan geet or myra...loved the fact that maan even listened to every single word uttered by geet and gave her something to look forward too...her long forgotten dream...admission in art institution...haayeee...he is so cute...and admirable...

P.s: ignore typos as am commenting from fone ... :P

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