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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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RECAP

Here Karan was screaming uncontrollably which made Angad insane and shouted,"Why r u screaming?U have tied me then y r u screaming?"Karan looked up and more tears leaked from his eyes.Angad's anger towered seeing his tears as he said to himself,"Committing biggest crime u r crying and showing crocodile tears?"Karan came near him and said,"Do u know yesterday i had my prey,that girl was also beautiful..but not beautiful than Anjali and Geet!But whatever girl i catch to satisfy desires they give me full co-operation.But my inner desires never got satisfied.When i had Anjali then she was the sole girl whom i started loving becoz she always made me calm from her body.But she died and when i want to feel Geet then i cant able to catch her!"Angad struggled hearing Geet's name with total anger but he cant able to free himself by that iron clamps.Angad said angrily,"U r not gonna touch her..do u understand?"Karan glared at him but it turned to broad smile which had showed lustful smirk and a smirk which said that he cant do anything.Karan got up and walked away while Angad screamed,"U r not gonna have victory Karan.Dont go near Geet...she's fire and she will burn u like u burned my little sister Anjali.Dont think that she's alone like my sister Anjali...she has Maan Singh Khurana and Rajveer Singh Shekhawat who's protecting her like shadow!"Karan turned and said fiercely,"Then am gonna kill them!"But this time Angad smirked,"Can u able to kill a shadow?"Karan glared at him.




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PART 58




Sun dawned and reflected on the tree house where a couple were sleeping peacefully.Those couple were Maaneet who were sleeping peacefully.Geet was holding her flat tummy carefully and had leaned to his rock chest snoring happily.After sometime Maan opened his eyes and saw the most adorable scene.Maan's sculpted lips widened with cute smile and saw her hand which were stroking her flat tummy in that deep sleep also.She had lost her first baby and today that stroking of her tummy indicated that she's longing this baby's arrival.


















His eyes welled up seeing her tummy rubbing and it poured down and fell on her cheek for which she snapped open her almond eyes feeling the wetness.She wiped his tear drop and looked up and softly moaned,"Maan!"Maan got up and turned that side to hide his tears when she held his hand and gently pulled him towards her.He fell on her but immediately stopped himself by falling on her tummy.She mumbled once again,"Sorry!"He chuckled between his tears and kissed her forehead.On that time she wiped his tears and pouted,"Why this tears for Maan?"He chuckled once again seeing her cute pout but spoke lovingly,"Its happy tears jaan!"

















Geet pouted,"No its not,u were crying for some reason!"Maan nodded no to her but she pulled him more on her and asked,"Dont tell lies jaan!"He pecked her petal lips not giving any weight on her tummy and softly stroked it.He pecked her tummy and said hoarsely,"Am missing our angel jaan..and i wish that this will also be my angel only!"Her eyes welled up remembering that incident.Her precious pearls were collected by his palm and his lips kissed her almond eyes lovingly.He spoke drinking her salty pearls,"Jaan there will be no place of this precious pearls in future!"She nodded yes and pecked his lips.He groaned and took her petal lips kissing her passionately and left her breathless.
















She panted after the soul searing kiss and blushed furiously.Maan chuckled seeing her cute blush and nuzzled her cheeks.Geet moaned and her hands went inside his vest feeling his torso.Every muscles quivered feeling her touch and he kissed her forehead.He knew her intentions and held her both hands and said,"Mishty,dont invite it.I cant hurt u jaan.U do know that i become over control when u provoke me like this!"She pouted but freed her right hand and started stroking her soft fingers on his collar bone.


















Maan groaned badly while she rubbed her softness to his hardness which made him aroused totally and he moaned,"Geet!"Geet pulled his chin towards her and immediately took his sculpted lips.She twisted her tongue on his lovely sculpted M shaped upper lip while her hand moved on his rock left chest.She worshipped his body by stroking her soft fingers which made him groan badly.He groaned and pulled her head from him when she craved for his lips licking her lips eagerly.He growled and instantly lowered his sculpted lips.

















Fire ignited inside their body when their lips touched and it turned to a soul searing kiss.He was breathing heavily while he opened her pyjama and then her kurti.He knew where to torture her and pleasure her.His one hand cupped her soft curve and squeezed it tightly making her moan his name.His eyes softened feeling her moan and he was seeking entrance in side her.He deliberately rammed his hips eagerly inside her thighs and she felt the fullness inside her feminine parts which made her nails dug inside his back flesh.She was so soft and tender and she was carrying his bit which made him gentle once and for all.He dint rub his hardness but stopped right there and kissed her forehead.He knew that it was her pregnancy hormones which is tempting her to getting lied in front of him.She looked up to see his face become soft but cautious.
















Geet moaned,"Maan!"But Maan said kissing her forehead once again,"Jaan,no!"She pouted and pushed him from her and got up angrily which made him scream,"Careful jaan!"She looked up and saw the panic and mumbled sorry to him and got up slowly holding her flat tummy.He immediately held her body and stick to his body and slowly walked inside the bathroom.Geet asked,"Maan...why r u coming inside?I need to take bath and need to prepare breakfast for u...u need to go to office na jaan..or else u will be late!"Maan saw her lovingly but said in stern voice,"Jaan no need to prepare anything for me..we are going back to KM!"Geet asked,"But Maan...camp is not over how come i leave it halfway?"Maan said,"Jaan camping can be continued in KM also and as a matter of fact i need to set up office in out house too!"Geet asked curiously,"Why r u setting up the office in outhouse?"Maan sighed and bent down in his knees and kissed her flat tummy and said,"I want to be with my angel..that's why!"

















Geet smiled seeing him kissing her flat tummy while he asked in babyish tone,"Right angel?"She smiled seeing his sugary baby tone but said abruptly,"Maan,why r u saying angel always...may be this time it will be boy...am sure this will be boy!"She rubbed her flat tummy lovingly.Maan said,"Jaan boy or girl...i dont mind..for me they will be my angel!"He kissed her tummy once again when she giggled feeling ticklish.His sculpted lips widened and he got up and lifted her in his arms and made her lie inside the warm tub which he had filled when they were talking.




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Here Karan was getting impatient not able to take off his thoughts.He was mumbling in his sleep and got up abruptly when he was highly aroused.He was dreaming of Geet rubbing her soft c**t to his hardness.Karan got up and poured some water from his jug where his hand shook continuously.He knew that why it were shaking and he wanted to end this torture once and for all by having s** with Geet.He poured the water down his throat still shaking but the cold water made his throat to burn with hunger and thirst.He breathed heavily and went to the washroom and saw his face in the mirror which reflected an lustfully aroused man glaring back at him.For a moment his eyes changed seeing that face.It was the scary man which had masked the lustfully aroused man.That scary Karan said,"Why r u doing this Karan?I feel disgust when i touch every innocent girl in that way.I feel impure when i commit sin by ripping their virginity.Why r u doing this?"



















Immediately his face turned into somewhat an evil face which had only lust strong face which said,"Why..u enjoy when i rip their virgin!U enjoy when i torture them!U enjoy their screams when i thrust my p***s inside them.Now why r u acting like scary cat?"The scary Karan was masked once again which said,"U r bad...always torture people by ur lustful desires.I hate u!"The scary Karan went off and the lustful Karan was masked which laughed,"I hate u too!U were the one who made me so weak!If u were so strong then i would have been having fun.Am an sadist and i love ripping teenage girls virgins and i have proved it.That graveyard is the proof but u...huh...u always show me my place!"Scary Karan said,"Stop it..or else we will commit another sin too...stop this or else u will die in vain.Let urself surrender to Veer!He will help u!He will protect u from ur enemies at any cost..at the cost of our friendship!"On that time the lustful Karan was masked and he smirked evilly,"Wow,today i need to appreciate u...u gave me the way to subdue Veer!Hahaha!I will defeat u Maan and snatch Geet from u!Am sorry my friend,i cant help it.If i wont have s** with Geet then my mind wont leave me in peace!"










"Victory is near to me!"Screamed Karan enthusiastically.



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On that time Geet got up screaming badly.She was breathing heavily and sweating profusely.On that time she heard footsteps for which she snapped open her eyes to see Maan running towards her.Maan was scared hearing her scream.As soon as Maan sat beside Geet,she hugged him tight and started crying badly.Maan stroked her back and asked,"What happened jaan?Why did u scream?"Geet hicupped but pulled her from him and spoke with shaky voice,"I saw a nightmare!A very bad dream!In that a man came and touched me and ripped off my clothes and made me naked and ripped my virtue!"Maan was shocked listening to the dream but kissed her forehead and said lovingly,"Jaan it is only dream!Dont take it seriously!Did u do meditation before u sleep?"Geet nodded no to him and he glared at her.Geet softly spoke,"Am sorry!"Maan made her sit properly and closed her almond eyes and said softly,"Now take off ur thoughts and dreams and nightmares,everything!"He saw after sometime Geet getting normal and calm when he whispered something inside her ear which made her move her eye ball to indicate him to go from there













Maan got up and stood far away from her but dint go away from the room and saw her face folding his hands.He prayed her babaji to make her normal.






Precap 1-Same




Precap 2-He dint do anything while his eyes widened and he said,"Take off ur clothes Geet!"Geet took off her duppatta and unzipped her kurti only.His eyes were widened and he was eager to see her naked beauty which he was dreaming from months when his eyes fell on her mangalsutra.It flashed to the light of sun which made him to close to his eyes which made the trance to break.Geet blinked immediately and turned this side and that side when she saw where she's.In nano second she got to know flinching Karan closing his eyes while she saw her diamond beads of the pendent of her mangalsutra which had broke his trance and he was flinching and then she got to know that she was in trance till now but not anymore and she immediately went into trance(pretending)Karan controlled his eyes and rubbed it and immediately opened his eyes and felt relieved when he saw Geet still seeing blankly.Karan saw her mangalsutra and thought it may have create problem and came forward to take it off.His hands came towards her mangalsutra which was dangling on her soft curves and touched it.On that time Geet came from the trance and the anger went into peak and immediately she held his hand gritting her teeth and bit his all fingers.



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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
after soo long u gave the update
love maan talking with his angel
he will not fight with geet for a boy or girl 😛
ohhh soo the mangalsutar will be karan weakness and that will be geet strong point
love it
thanks for a lovely update
Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part karan is becoming day by day more devil
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Posted: 11 years ago
maaneet all lost in their love world
with the dreams of there baby
n other side that bas*** karan how dare he that bloody psycho how much i hate him n geet's dream
god made me scared
n now precap
how the hell he able to get geet n geet in his trance bt goodf it broke before anyhing bad happen
bt plz never let anyone touch her
wont take it

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsem update mangalsura making karan weak
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...
superb part...
i hate karan,scary precap...
eagerly waiting to read next part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsommmiiieee dis is intrsting...luvd da maan geet momntz so cute...here karan is getting desprt...geet is cuming back leaving hr half-camping...well hopfuly she getz strng enough 2 outrun karan...her 6th sense is giving hr a warning of itz own...intrsting precap sply 2nd wala...her MS savd hr letz whtz nxt...update sooon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet having nightmare abt karan...
Hm..precap..interesting...
Eagerly waiting fr it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
now maan took geet to KM and geet started getting nightmares😲

precap lagtha hai karan ka band bajne waali hai

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