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Posted: 11 years ago



The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.





Part - 10


Geet entered in d room followed by Annie ,, she kept d box on that old bed ,, she opened her bag to take out her dress. Annie looked at her and around and find out that Geet was here at night ,, she was not at Maan's room ,, she felt bad for her.

Annie: Tum raat mei yahan thi!! Iss gande dhul bhare store room mei!! Itni thand mei ,, Ku?


Geet: It's OK Annie, ur bro didn't want to see me there and threw me out ,, i didn't know anything about ur house,, i find this place and rested here.


Annie: I' m sorry for bro's misbehaviour ,, she was feeling ashamed in front of Geet ,, she called Dadima there at once ,, Geet tried to stop her but she didn't listen her and came out Dadima came there and Annie brought her in that room and told her everything. Dadima was stunned listening this and came near Geet.


Dadima : we r very sorry beta ,, esse to is ghar ke servant bhi nahi rehate aur tumhe esse rehana pada ,, yahan iss gandgi mei ,, hum maan ko iske liye maaf nahi karenge ,, aane do unhe ,, kisiki galti ki saza wo tumhe ku de rehaey hei? Hum baat karenge unse ,, ye to hadd hei.


Geet: nahi Dadima please unse kuch matt kahiye ,, he is not in sense ,, please. Aap sab ne keha hei ki aap kisi cheej ke liye force nahi karenge ,, Shaadi kerni thi ker li ,, ab please aur force matt kijiye ,, please aap samjhne ki koshish kijye yahan meri jagah nahi thi ,, mei iss ghar aur aapke pote ki life mei ek replacement ki tarah se hu . Mei wo nahi hu jisse yahan hona tha. Please aap iss Rishtey ko yahin chod dijiye aur isske Anjaam ko waqt per.


Dadima was speechless ,, she knew that situation was very complicated ,, she nodded and shook her head helplessly. Geet was also right at her place. Maan won't accept this marriage easily ,, he was badly hurt and broken .


Geet: Dadima if u don't mind i want this room to live ,, i'll clean it and set it according to me?


Dadima: Geet ,beta tum koi bhi room le sakti ho ,, aur bhi rooms hei isse acche ,, ye to bahot ganda hei aur acche se furnished bhi nahi hei.


Geet: nahi Dadima , mere liye yahi theek hei ,, ek side.( This room was in last corner on first floor.)Please Dadima.


Dadima: Theek hei, jaisa tum chaho ,, abhi aap Annie ke room mei ready ho jao ,, der ho rahi hei ,, hum chalet hei and she left from there with a heavy heart.


Annie gave that packet to Geet and said that this was her gift from her side,,Aur please na nahi kerna .. ye meine apne liye banayi thi kisi aur ke liye nahi.


Geet gave a smile to her and take that saying thanku.


Annie: mai tumhe Guddu hei buaungi ,, friendly lagta hei ,, tumhe koi prob to nahi?


Geet: nahi mujhe accha lagega ,, thanks.


Annie: mei chahati hu abhi tum yahi dress pahano ,, please.


Geet nodded in a yes with a smile ,,she didn't want to hurt her ,, she find her a very soft nature girl.


Geet: tum chalo annie mei change kerke aati hu.


Annie went from there ,, Geet opened d pack and there was a beautiful pink suit with churidaar ,, Geet got ready simply , but she was looking breathtakingly beautiful ,, she wrapped her with a shawl to avoid cold ,, from last night she was bearing this bitter cold which could be harmful for her . Geet didn't want to create any situation which can put Dadima and Yash uncle in a mess coz of her. She was feeling very uncomfortable to take any favour from them.

She came down and Dadima made her sit in a sofa near her,, Dadi put a black mark behind Geet ear saying ,, kisi ki nazar na lage badi pyaari lag rahi ho and hugged her.


Guests came there to meet d new bahu and to take leave to go ,, all were praising Geet's beauty they sat there for few mins ,, they asked about Maan ,but Yash made some excused smartly ,, and then they leave to their respective homes. It was Geet's luck that no one witnessed that Geet didn't have bridal mehandi in her hands and feet. There were no sigh of marriage on her , only lil red mark between her hair parting which was visible from her covered head.


Now all hurdles were finished and they thanked god ,, there were only family members to handle d situation. Yash used his sources to track Maan's location and they informed him where he was staying for camping . All took a breath of relief.


Geet came back to her place ,, she changed and started cleaning d room to live ,, she arranged d furniture properly ,, all furniture was old but usable. After few hour she made that place to live .


She got a call from Kamal who asked her about d situations there ,, was she all right ?


Geet was lied that she is all right and they don't have to worry about her. Geet didn't want to increase their tension coz of her. Suddenly she was feeling herself all alone in this world to face it ,, all were at their places , only she was uprooted from her place and bounded to live this new place ,, no one is here to share her miseries ,, no one is able to return her previous life back then what is d use of talking about her feelings and prob.


Geet came back in her reality listening continuous ranting of her name from other side ,,, Kamal was calling guddu .. guddu when she didn't response him.


Geet: ji bhai , mei sun rahi hu.


Kamal: Mai kab se bol raha hu ,, tu jawab ku nahi de rahi? Ye lo Maa se baat ker.


He hand over d phone to Rajji to talk to Geet.


Rajji: Guddu beta tu theek hei na?


Now this sentence was irritating her ,, Pahale apni Bebesi dikhaker ek anjaan rastey per chod do ,, fir poocho ki tu theek hei ? Na bhi hu to ye ker kya lenge? Meri jagah per rahane or sahane aa jayenge kya? Huhhh.


Geet: haan Bui mei theek hu ,, aap log chinta matt karo.


Bui: beta rivaj ke hisaab se aaj tumhe Pegfere ke liye aana hei apne ghar ,, mei maaji se baat ker lungi .


Geet: theek hei ,, aur kuch ?


Bui: nahi bas , tum yahan aaogi tabhi baat ker lenge ,, tum rest karo.


Geet: Bui mei uss ghar mei nahi aaungi ,, Ya to dad ke office aao , ya fir FH per hi.


Bui: ku guddu ?


Geet: bas bol diya ,, aur baaten jab milolgi puch lena.


Rajji sensed that she was in foul mood so didn't increase d talk and cut d call saying ,, Theek hei mai Mahi se baat karti hu.


Precap - Geet's pegfera ?

Sorry for mistakes.
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Part - 11


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



🤣meri saari bookmarks gone😭😭😭 sites yaad hi nahi aarahi hai

tu image hosting wala site yaad hai kya



yeh lE LINK
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Posted: 11 years ago
aa gayee babie,,,,😛dinner date kaisee thi,,,,😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
😉...😆
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PRIYA link jo bheja he save kar le... i will edit that post now... arrey first position waali hain
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Restaurant dinner graphics

babie kaisa raha dinner???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Restaurant dinner graphics

babie kaisa raha dinner???

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Posted: 11 years ago
ani ne geet ko store room may dekhkar shock hogayi hai😲par geet ne dadi aur ani ko convice bhi karliya

geet accepted ani present and muh dikhayi success bhi hogayi hai
bina kisi drama ki.

geet ne apni kamre ko cleaning bhi karliya
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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babie ka chehra tho laal laal hogayi hogi😳😳😳

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